Oh Mr General!

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Over_The_Horizon

I wasn't going to write a review for myself until I had achieved something. Today, I reached 100k words on my novel and so I will be writing out a message to the future readers of Oh Mr General! Firstly, I write this novel purely to entertain my readers and so if you like the novel, you can leave comments and reviews so as to have a chance to change the plot line slightly. Secondly, I do not edit my chapters after writing and so sometimes, the spelling and grammar may not be there. In my hectic schedule, I do not actually had the time to write and edit the chapters altogether. So please bear with it :'). I hope you will enjoy this novel as much as I enjoy writing it.

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Ketten

Love the story and the characters. Great writing. Really deserves more attention! The mix of the real world and the virtual world is interesting and compelling. Thank you, author. Keep it up, please!

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lloadingl

The language used in this story is highly effective in conveying and describing the different scenes and emotion. The sentences and phrases are clean and simple to understand but definitely does not lack in detail.

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Astale

Great story. Reviewing it hoping it can get some more attention. Love the storyline. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Sato and Gray, the main character, are quite cute! The relationship between the two is revealed and develops at a nice pace.

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Lexmine

Lovely novel author keep it going,.... 😍😘😍😘😍😍😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😍😍😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😍😍😘😍😘😘😘😘😍😘😘🖤❣💛💜💗🖤💜🖤💝🖤💜❣❣🖤🖤❤💓💗💗💖💖💕💖💓💓💓💙💗💗💗💙💙💙💙💓💓

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Muireann

I always look forward to updates for this novel. The author's style is very clean and detailed. The emotions portrayed feel very real and genuine; it's clear the author cares a lot about the characters and the novel. The book works on two storylines for the main character at first: his reality and a virtual reality. They are tied together quite neatly after the initial introductions to both, making for a really compelling tale. I look forward to each storyline every time there's a context change!

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Introvert_Lioness

Please dear author release already some new updates 🙏🙏🙏... I already miss the story... I already miss the MCs... Please give some time to release updates... Please........

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Lexmine

Lovely novel author, the characters are well defined I really like this story line, keep it up author, 💌💟💟💝💞💚💜💛💝💜💛💜💛💛🖤💝💙💖💕🖤💞💞💞🖤❣💜💛💜💝💝🖤💜💜💜💝🖤💜🖤💝🖤💜🖤💝💙💗💛💕💖💝💝🖤💕💕💕💖💝💞💞💝🖤💜💜💝💙💗

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Age_Knox

Love this story... Reviewing in hope it gets more attention... Highly recommend you read... 🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍

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Introvert_Lioness

When the story goes on, it gets more interesting and exciting to wait for each updates... Though it's a BL story, but I love the flow of the story... Pls author gives us a daily updates... Keep going... 👌

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Introvert_Lioness

Wow I definitely recommend this story... I love the story it's so very captivating... I like that it's not only focused on one theme like military aspect but combined with adventure in a game... Love it

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Honeyb

D story is more than awesome n loaded wid cuteness😍😍.....Author keep up d good work....D language is simple n easy to understand....Sato n Gray r Juz perfect❤❤#SaGaforever

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Jason_Frances_1957

This story is amazing, you have no idea, read it already, you’d see what i mean😩😩 The story is so addictive, i finished 60 chapters in three days. Trust me you’d love it.

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Ryu_Akihito

good fictional story for gamers lover..to author - keep on writing [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

I wish Sato to recover well and not suffer any trauma. They both had really passed through a lot in their relationship. He should get well and get well fully to make Gray strong if not is even the Gray that will suffer most

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osobenson

I started reading this novel a month ago and I love it so much. I hope you can update it regularly 🙏. Although, I know that it's not easy to write a novel but we can't just wait for long. 😀😀😀 will vote for you 👍👍👍

This beeok is really nice,⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐,it's beautiful the way their love started and evolved,pls don't pass this book,if your a gamer and you love the game world and figures,and technology,then this book will give ur imagination a treat❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏👏

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kyraangelfae

Really great story i love the futuristic and bl romance and also the gaming is really cool 😍😍😍😍😍😍and the couple is very sweet exactly my type especially the ml