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it's great ...............................................................................................................................................
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Please tell me author that this novel isn't dropped or haitus grxfbregevevevevevwvevebebebebebebebebebebebebrbebebrbrbebebi4h4hebebebehehrhehrhrb4
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it is nothing but rip-off from the history strongest disciple again? especially at the latter parts he just went there trying to get every girl in the story and then throwing marvel part no originalty
This story gives a new perspective to those who have watched the anime, and read the Manga version. Its not bad, but it isn't perfect either. Considering its a total new universe, with an merged universe included, the story is pretty Great !!! :)
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I think that there should be a crossover with marvel or atleast kengan asura or god pf highschool shone it will enhance the story
Currently at chapter 66 so I though I'd leave a review. My only complaint is spelling and grammar, I think the translation needs better proofreading before posting. Other than that, the story is great, exactly what's promised in the description. It's lots of fun, and even though the grammatical errors can be distracting and break your immersion, it's still a great read. Highly recommend.
ME GUSTA MUCHO SIGUE HACI, AUN LE VAS A METER EL MUNDO DE MARVEL VAMOS AVER SI NO SE HACE ABURRIDA EN EL FUTURO ASTA DONDE E LEIDO (CAP202) ME A GUSTADO MUCHO
- grammar is pretty bad - simple spelling mistakes that should have been caught by spellcheck are ignored and not fixed - "push ups for arm strengthening and sit ups for leg strengthening"
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I dont get the author, the Mc trying to save the fat MOLESTER, pffftttttttt.Lol ,come on man it doesn't change the fact that he was trying to molest a girl , and she have the right to fight him as self defense even if she is acting weak at first..and lastly who knows how many times did that fat guy molest a girl.. Meehhh, that why i dont like Self Centered mc-kun.
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this is a very good story I like how later you added the marvel universe and it made sense I can't wait for the new chapters 😀😊😄🙌😁👍😀
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I am truly impressed with your work. It has many good elements like the characters design and story development. However, adding marvel element in this story doesn't sound good to me. I would prefer if you add other japanese martial arts works or manhwa to this story as it will be a great addition to your story. Anyway keep the good works author-san & all the best.
Es una de las mejores que he leído tanto en el trama como sus personajes, muy creativo y emocionante de leer. Yo espero que sigan publicando más sobre está historias y además le deseo de mi parte que tenga mucho éxito en todo[img=recommend]
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The MC is crap. There is almost no logic in his actions. The world was made in a polygamy accepting society(meaning world-wide), however, it seems like only the MC can benefit from that. Other women(his mother even) get offended when their man even mentions a harem, the MC's women, ofc they are happy to be sidelined...Harem can be fun to read. If the author can make some sort of emotional connection with the girls, and then the girls talk things out with his and they all agree, then it's a good harem. Here? Well the MC sees a girl goes to her and sais "You are my wife from now on!" and ofc the girl blushes and nods...even if they have no Idea who one another is. I'm really sorry that this is so bad, it's one of the few Kenichi stories and I really wanted to read something in that fandom.*sigh...*
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Me parese una novela entretenida para divertirse y pasar el rata .. la recomiendo 9/10............................................................................................................................. .... .. . ..
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it's a great read a little twist from the original story and I love what going on with the story right now so give it a try .................
Excellent Fic about Kenichi, I liked it a lot and as it progresses, it's good that the author was able to continue it. My only complaint would be that Saeko is unnecessary, especially if the story combines with the Marvel universe[img=update][img=recommend]
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it's great ...............................................................................................................................................
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Please tell me author that this novel isn't dropped or haitus grxfbregevevevevevwvevebebebebebebebebebebebebrbebebrbrbebebi4h4hebebebehehrhehrhrb4
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it is nothing but rip-off from the history strongest disciple again? especially at the latter parts he just went there trying to get every girl in the story and then throwing marvel part no originalty
This story gives a new perspective to those who have watched the anime, and read the Manga version. Its not bad, but it isn't perfect either. Considering its a total new universe, with an merged universe included, the story is pretty Great !!! :)
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I think that there should be a crossover with marvel or atleast kengan asura or god pf highschool shone it will enhance the story
Currently at chapter 66 so I though I'd leave a review. My only complaint is spelling and grammar, I think the translation needs better proofreading before posting. Other than that, the story is great, exactly what's promised in the description. It's lots of fun, and even though the grammatical errors can be distracting and break your immersion, it's still a great read. Highly recommend.
ME GUSTA MUCHO SIGUE HACI, AUN LE VAS A METER EL MUNDO DE MARVEL VAMOS AVER SI NO SE HACE ABURRIDA EN EL FUTURO ASTA DONDE E LEIDO (CAP202) ME A GUSTADO MUCHO
- grammar is pretty bad - simple spelling mistakes that should have been caught by spellcheck are ignored and not fixed - "push ups for arm strengthening and sit ups for leg strengthening"
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I dont get the author, the Mc trying to save the fat MOLESTER, pffftttttttt.Lol ,come on man it doesn't change the fact that he was trying to molest a girl , and she have the right to fight him as self defense even if she is acting weak at first..and lastly who knows how many times did that fat guy molest a girl.. Meehhh, that why i dont like Self Centered mc-kun.
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this is a very good story I like how later you added the marvel universe and it made sense I can't wait for the new chapters 😀😊😄🙌😁👍😀
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I am truly impressed with your work. It has many good elements like the characters design and story development. However, adding marvel element in this story doesn't sound good to me. I would prefer if you add other japanese martial arts works or manhwa to this story as it will be a great addition to your story. Anyway keep the good works author-san & all the best.
Es una de las mejores que he leído tanto en el trama como sus personajes, muy creativo y emocionante de leer. Yo espero que sigan publicando más sobre está historias y además le deseo de mi parte que tenga mucho éxito en todo[img=recommend]
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The MC is crap. There is almost no logic in his actions. The world was made in a polygamy accepting society(meaning world-wide), however, it seems like only the MC can benefit from that. Other women(his mother even) get offended when their man even mentions a harem, the MC's women, ofc they are happy to be sidelined...Harem can be fun to read. If the author can make some sort of emotional connection with the girls, and then the girls talk things out with his and they all agree, then it's a good harem. Here? Well the MC sees a girl goes to her and sais "You are my wife from now on!" and ofc the girl blushes and nods...even if they have no Idea who one another is. I'm really sorry that this is so bad, it's one of the few Kenichi stories and I really wanted to read something in that fandom.*sigh...*
best fanfic. 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 read it right now
Me parese una novela entretenida para divertirse y pasar el rata .. la recomiendo 9/10............................................................................................................................. .... .. . ..
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it's a great read a little twist from the original story and I love what going on with the story right now so give it a try .................
Excellent Fic about Kenichi, I liked it a lot and as it progresses, it's good that the author was able to continue it. My only complaint would be that Saeko is unnecessary, especially if the story combines with the Marvel universe[img=update][img=recommend]