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good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter
I like the story. I see that you already thought how to make the universe bigger and interesting. I hope you come back with this fic..............................
Please don't abandon this. I need this. No, you don't understand, I NEED this! Please post some more chapters. I love this webnovels, and maybe I am an idiot, checking out this novel in case it has a new chapter every single day, but I don't care. Just start posting again, man.
First, if you don't like Harem at all, you shouldn't be here, as is explained early on this is a transmigration due to wrongful death into the MCs ideal fantasy so the world is structured so that the MC can find his best waifu's. because of this the harem is completely plausible to me unlike some others... The first few chapters are a bit clunky but they definitely improve as they go on. The MC lives as Kenichi and has awareness of world that the original did not as well as more drive and aggressiveness without the whining and self-doubt while trying to keep to some of the originals values so that the world stays on track. There are some additions to the world setting that I wasn't too sure of at first but the authors explanations in the comments reassured me because not only does it allow them to write past the original story it makes things a little more interesting without changing the original storyline into something bizarre. Overall I'm just hoping the author continues this story soon because I really would like to see what they have in store for us after the original storyline ends.
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The first 150 chapter is great the story flows fluently which i really enjoy but when it reach the later chapter the author decide it best to add marvel world to this which make the chapter before this and every effort put into becoming what the mc is now useless.... All in all its a good story while it last for those who are new do give it a try as for me im leaving im disapointed this used to be my gem and now its just a shard of broken glass what a pity
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I seen the manga and anime but this novel is so good makes me want to rewatch my favorite anime all over again. Keep updating please its so great.
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A great work by the author, I love how he is developing the story. Without a doubt the best fanfic I've read so far by difference. We want more chapters pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!! I wish I could give you a 10 rating !!!
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Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
I'm writing this review after around 60-70 chapter and then I saw the name of the author a indian at last someone from india knows about webnovel I thought I'm the only, love you author no homo but still love you author and you work 🙂 and still no homo
Me encanta tu novela sobre kenichi ya que me encanta la serie y el manga y esta es la segunda que encuentra ya que son muy pocas que existen o que he encontrado y es genial como crece la novela 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
No hay mucho que decir ........……...................................................... Una muy buena historia ... espero ver el futuro desarrollo
Please keep updating I canot wait for the timeline of the book to catch up to the MCU and how the story will affect it. It will be interesting.
When is the next chapter, it is a good story to read. I can't wait to continue reading it and to find out what happens next. I hope it involves other different characters.
I'm enjoying myself with this read. I'm pretty sure I read up to day over the course of a single day. I was happy to see the Gouken style after anticipating it's existence after the Gentle Fist reveal so many chapters ago.
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It was awesome but the integration of marvel was kinda letdown for me, i loved the original and loved how you made the mc better than the original but some relationships are a bit forced other than that a great story
This is amazing he should have Mikumo Kushinada in his polygamy marriage. And is he going to fight Hayato with his almost similar sayian physiology. And is he going to be the next "Strongest Man''.
Cringe and not well built story thats mostly unrealistic. Also everything is held together with poorly used english. Hard to read, hard to understand what author meant in most parts.
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good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter. good chapter
I like the story. I see that you already thought how to make the universe bigger and interesting. I hope you come back with this fic..............................
Please don't abandon this. I need this. No, you don't understand, I NEED this! Please post some more chapters. I love this webnovels, and maybe I am an idiot, checking out this novel in case it has a new chapter every single day, but I don't care. Just start posting again, man.
First, if you don't like Harem at all, you shouldn't be here, as is explained early on this is a transmigration due to wrongful death into the MCs ideal fantasy so the world is structured so that the MC can find his best waifu's. because of this the harem is completely plausible to me unlike some others... The first few chapters are a bit clunky but they definitely improve as they go on. The MC lives as Kenichi and has awareness of world that the original did not as well as more drive and aggressiveness without the whining and self-doubt while trying to keep to some of the originals values so that the world stays on track. There are some additions to the world setting that I wasn't too sure of at first but the authors explanations in the comments reassured me because not only does it allow them to write past the original story it makes things a little more interesting without changing the original storyline into something bizarre. Overall I'm just hoping the author continues this story soon because I really would like to see what they have in store for us after the original storyline ends.
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The first 150 chapter is great the story flows fluently which i really enjoy but when it reach the later chapter the author decide it best to add marvel world to this which make the chapter before this and every effort put into becoming what the mc is now useless.... All in all its a good story while it last for those who are new do give it a try as for me im leaving im disapointed this used to be my gem and now its just a shard of broken glass what a pity
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I seen the manga and anime but this novel is so good makes me want to rewatch my favorite anime all over again. Keep updating please its so great.
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A great work by the author, I love how he is developing the story. Without a doubt the best fanfic I've read so far by difference. We want more chapters pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!! I wish I could give you a 10 rating !!!
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Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?
I'm writing this review after around 60-70 chapter and then I saw the name of the author a indian at last someone from india knows about webnovel I thought I'm the only, love you author no homo but still love you author and you work 🙂 and still no homo
Me encanta tu novela sobre kenichi ya que me encanta la serie y el manga y esta es la segunda que encuentra ya que son muy pocas que existen o que he encontrado y es genial como crece la novela 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
No hay mucho que decir ........……...................................................... Una muy buena historia ... espero ver el futuro desarrollo
Please keep updating I canot wait for the timeline of the book to catch up to the MCU and how the story will affect it. It will be interesting.
When is the next chapter, it is a good story to read. I can't wait to continue reading it and to find out what happens next. I hope it involves other different characters.
I'm enjoying myself with this read. I'm pretty sure I read up to day over the course of a single day. I was happy to see the Gouken style after anticipating it's existence after the Gentle Fist reveal so many chapters ago.
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It was awesome but the integration of marvel was kinda letdown for me, i loved the original and loved how you made the mc better than the original but some relationships are a bit forced other than that a great story
This is amazing he should have Mikumo Kushinada in his polygamy marriage. And is he going to fight Hayato with his almost similar sayian physiology. And is he going to be the next "Strongest Man''.
Cringe and not well built story thats mostly unrealistic. Also everything is held together with poorly used english. Hard to read, hard to understand what author meant in most parts.
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