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Es muy bueno, un poco apresurado al inicia pero sigue siendo bueno, me intereso la parte en la que metiste la historia de marvel, en mi opinión me gustó, ahora estoy en la parte de la película avengers 1 y espero que siga continuando.
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the idea for this ff is amazing and even adding the mcu elements were odd but manageable to keep the story interesting... but now that im rereading this, I'm seeing how absolutely atrocious the grammar and structure of this story is. like gd dmn it's awful. how did I even finish my first read through? I must have a subconscious autocorrect talent when skimming through things cuz this is just... wow...
this is a waste of time lol. it feels like thr author has no idea what he is writing other than the names of the characters. it makes no sense and has a very terrible pacing. it seems that in this world, polygamy is accepted but only the MC is allowed to have one. If other men wants to have harems, they suffer thr backlash normal people have but if it is MC, for no reason at all, it is accepted. the MC is loud like a child and I hear him in my mind as i read. once the MC see's a girl or a female character, he announces them as his wife and the girl blushed and then boom she is part of the harem despite them not knowing each other, and again, MC is the only one that has a harem in a polygamous world, does that make sense?! MC was able to go toe to toe with masters as a child? wow great. what an amazing trash.
Esta novela es una obra maestra, tiene todas las cosas que me hubiera gustado ver en la original. No hay ni una sola cosa que cambiaría en este fanfic. Solo puedo describirlo con la palabra Perfecto, tiene todos los aspectos que busco en una historia. Protagonista OP, inteligente, precavido, estratega y muy talentoso. Y no se ciega por el poder como se ha visto en otros protagonistas, También está el harem, no lo hiciste demasiado grande ni pequeño, ni tampoco se forzó para arreglar algún romance fuera de lo normal. También me gustó la forma en que empezaste a introducir al mundo de Marvel y que no haya interferido con el canon de Kenichi. Ojala no dejes esta historia porque quiero ver como sigue.
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Love this story. I had an idea though. Kenichi needs to use the island he got from Fortuna to hold his own World Martial Arts Tournament. Have different level tourneys throughout the year. You know, like all disciple class for one and expert class for another. All the way up to Grandmaster or Advanced Grandmaster. Weapons allowed. can't really hold one for the legendary class since there are so few. Maybe pay the Elder and the Weapon one to fight on camera and sell copies of that and make a bank breaking amount.
I love how the story is going but I am dieing for more chapters please give me more
Porfin una historia de Kenichi .un harén que muchos quisimos que susediera ( miu,shigure y renka) las demás ya fue avaricia pero fue bastante entretenida los cap (+18) sobre todo
You ruined it for me with the clones, it's incredibly stupid, make him face a powerful enemy and not be able to remove them in time; and also a pathetic excuse to weaken him.
Im rereading this bc I drop it at the marvel part and im only 25 chapters in and the romance is so trash ngl.
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Muy bueno espero más es de las mejores cosas que he leido y espero que actualizes más ...................................................................................................
it's meh... Nothing else to say also mc is sus af. kinda creepy on what he said to Miu the first time they met and what he told Shigure....
No has pensado hacer un historia del anime negima que está relacionado con uq holder del manga y anime es muy bueno lo recomiendo?????¿?????????????
for me this fanfic was a 5 star since the bad grammar was easy to get through unlike other novels/fanfic, the story development well it's a copy of the original but in this fanfic is not really the main attraction so does not matter much, but... the harem is too big and there's girls from other works in it, can't care to read anymore this is pokemon/shopping style harem. it's a deal breaker for me, with this any hope i had for good fanfic from this anime is over. there's only this crossover with Galaxy size harem and sadly every star that is added gets in the way of the others screen time T_T
Voy a ser totalmente sincero empecé a leer con mucha emoción porque no veo muchos fanfic con esta cantidad de capítulos pero después de unos capítulos toda emoción se me fue cuando desde el inicio ya le anda lavando el cerebro a Miu porque si no fue un lavado no se que fue.........lo que termino de matarlo fue cuando lucho contra apachai se que era fuerte en su mundo pero no podes comparar su viejo mundo con este, es como comparar a uno de Konosuba contra Vegeta Ssj :V
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Story is good. But chapters not updated daily and lot of grammer errors. But worth the read and experience charector development. Merging Kenichi and Marvel world is also good.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I feel bad because the author clearly has a good story line with the harem and all, but man, seriously, run it through a grammar check—a free one is fine before posting. There are grammar and spelling issues all over the novel. I'm not trying to be a grammar naz*, but at least get your spelling right, my dude. I'm not American either, but the wording is way too hard to read.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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I have to say this novel was really good Until they started to add marvel fanfic and yes he add other characters from other anime but they still they where in the level of Strongest disciple, But now you added marvel their gods and super powers. I don’t hate marvel is so Many marvel fanfic it getting Boring and their Many fanfic could have added like Baki or other Martial art that been added.
I'll give ya 5 stars but it's only to tell ya that they re implemented the garbage cutting off parts of chapters, for yours it cuts off at the support tiers and anyone using a work phone like me might still read but can only comment on reviews now and still have the last few lines/paragraph or so cut off so im moving my reading over to scribble hub or some other sites. It's been fun but they've screwed up 2 times in a row now so I'm out.
Very good, the story is good and the MC is not bad at all. I admit that I had decided not to continue reading the story when I heard that you introduced the MARVEL universe, but until now ( 368 Chapter ) the story continues with a good rhythm and a good feeling, so keep doing a good job. PS: just a suggestion from me, you really need to find monsters or evils for the MC because he really lacks high level combat experience even if he is very good at the same level.
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this is HSDK fan-fic novel it have good story and pace. but if you dont like overpowered or harem you will not like this novel. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really wanted to enjoy reading this but the dyslexic writing is almost as bad as a Chinese MLT translation, If I had OCD this fanfic would cause pain.
Es muy bueno, un poco apresurado al inicia pero sigue siendo bueno, me intereso la parte en la que metiste la historia de marvel, en mi opinión me gustó, ahora estoy en la parte de la película avengers 1 y espero que siga continuando.
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the idea for this ff is amazing and even adding the mcu elements were odd but manageable to keep the story interesting... but now that im rereading this, I'm seeing how absolutely atrocious the grammar and structure of this story is. like gd dmn it's awful. how did I even finish my first read through? I must have a subconscious autocorrect talent when skimming through things cuz this is just... wow...
this is a waste of time lol. it feels like thr author has no idea what he is writing other than the names of the characters. it makes no sense and has a very terrible pacing. it seems that in this world, polygamy is accepted but only the MC is allowed to have one. If other men wants to have harems, they suffer thr backlash normal people have but if it is MC, for no reason at all, it is accepted. the MC is loud like a child and I hear him in my mind as i read. once the MC see's a girl or a female character, he announces them as his wife and the girl blushed and then boom she is part of the harem despite them not knowing each other, and again, MC is the only one that has a harem in a polygamous world, does that make sense?! MC was able to go toe to toe with masters as a child? wow great. what an amazing trash.
Esta novela es una obra maestra, tiene todas las cosas que me hubiera gustado ver en la original. No hay ni una sola cosa que cambiaría en este fanfic. Solo puedo describirlo con la palabra Perfecto, tiene todos los aspectos que busco en una historia. Protagonista OP, inteligente, precavido, estratega y muy talentoso. Y no se ciega por el poder como se ha visto en otros protagonistas, También está el harem, no lo hiciste demasiado grande ni pequeño, ni tampoco se forzó para arreglar algún romance fuera de lo normal. También me gustó la forma en que empezaste a introducir al mundo de Marvel y que no haya interferido con el canon de Kenichi. Ojala no dejes esta historia porque quiero ver como sigue.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Love this story. I had an idea though. Kenichi needs to use the island he got from Fortuna to hold his own World Martial Arts Tournament. Have different level tourneys throughout the year. You know, like all disciple class for one and expert class for another. All the way up to Grandmaster or Advanced Grandmaster. Weapons allowed. can't really hold one for the legendary class since there are so few. Maybe pay the Elder and the Weapon one to fight on camera and sell copies of that and make a bank breaking amount.
I love how the story is going but I am dieing for more chapters please give me more
Porfin una historia de Kenichi .un harén que muchos quisimos que susediera ( miu,shigure y renka) las demás ya fue avaricia pero fue bastante entretenida los cap (+18) sobre todo
You ruined it for me with the clones, it's incredibly stupid, make him face a powerful enemy and not be able to remove them in time; and also a pathetic excuse to weaken him.
Im rereading this bc I drop it at the marvel part and im only 25 chapters in and the romance is so trash ngl.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Muy bueno espero más es de las mejores cosas que he leido y espero que actualizes más ...................................................................................................
it's meh... Nothing else to say also mc is sus af. kinda creepy on what he said to Miu the first time they met and what he told Shigure....
No has pensado hacer un historia del anime negima que está relacionado con uq holder del manga y anime es muy bueno lo recomiendo?????¿?????????????
for me this fanfic was a 5 star since the bad grammar was easy to get through unlike other novels/fanfic, the story development well it's a copy of the original but in this fanfic is not really the main attraction so does not matter much, but... the harem is too big and there's girls from other works in it, can't care to read anymore this is pokemon/shopping style harem. it's a deal breaker for me, with this any hope i had for good fanfic from this anime is over. there's only this crossover with Galaxy size harem and sadly every star that is added gets in the way of the others screen time T_T
Voy a ser totalmente sincero empecé a leer con mucha emoción porque no veo muchos fanfic con esta cantidad de capítulos pero después de unos capítulos toda emoción se me fue cuando desde el inicio ya le anda lavando el cerebro a Miu porque si no fue un lavado no se que fue.........lo que termino de matarlo fue cuando lucho contra apachai se que era fuerte en su mundo pero no podes comparar su viejo mundo con este, es como comparar a uno de Konosuba contra Vegeta Ssj :V
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Story is good. But chapters not updated daily and lot of grammer errors. But worth the read and experience charector development. Merging Kenichi and Marvel world is also good.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I feel bad because the author clearly has a good story line with the harem and all, but man, seriously, run it through a grammar check—a free one is fine before posting. There are grammar and spelling issues all over the novel. I'm not trying to be a grammar naz*, but at least get your spelling right, my dude. I'm not American either, but the wording is way too hard to read.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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I have to say this novel was really good Until they started to add marvel fanfic and yes he add other characters from other anime but they still they where in the level of Strongest disciple, But now you added marvel their gods and super powers. I don’t hate marvel is so Many marvel fanfic it getting Boring and their Many fanfic could have added like Baki or other Martial art that been added.
I'll give ya 5 stars but it's only to tell ya that they re implemented the garbage cutting off parts of chapters, for yours it cuts off at the support tiers and anyone using a work phone like me might still read but can only comment on reviews now and still have the last few lines/paragraph or so cut off so im moving my reading over to scribble hub or some other sites. It's been fun but they've screwed up 2 times in a row now so I'm out.
Very good, the story is good and the MC is not bad at all. I admit that I had decided not to continue reading the story when I heard that you introduced the MARVEL universe, but until now ( 368 Chapter ) the story continues with a good rhythm and a good feeling, so keep doing a good job. PS: just a suggestion from me, you really need to find monsters or evils for the MC because he really lacks high level combat experience even if he is very good at the same level.
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ this is HSDK fan-fic novel it have good story and pace. but if you dont like overpowered or harem you will not like this novel. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really wanted to enjoy reading this but the dyslexic writing is almost as bad as a Chinese MLT translation, If I had OCD this fanfic would cause pain.