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This is definitely an amazing book. The author has put in lots of thought into his plot and characters. He has created a flowing and well planned plot. The mc grows and is powerful (op) but the author doesn't force the story. The system is also great, and the mc is ruthless and doesn't mind destroying the plots of the many worlds he goes too. For those that enjoy an evil and ruthless mc, this is the story for you. ** the chapters are also pretty long
made an account just to support my silly writer hehee! ♡ mwah! >.< Looking forward to reading it! (will post a review whenever me finish reading hiatus book!!! Yaay! >W<)
Trash wish fulfilment fic, good concept but horrible execution. Writing quality is also sub par. Has harem, when we were promised there will be none 🤦🏻♀️
The first chapters were read normally, and when I saw that there would be no harem or romance here, I was ready to give 5 stars, but what happened in the end? There is romance. There is also a harem, although indirectly. And MC seemed to be smart at first, but in the end he became a naive fool
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It started strong but after the second world it became worse powers where forgotten until author wanted still a good read
the only reason why I bother reading this book cause it say on the profile "no harem or romance scene" the author totally went back on his words.
I don’t have much to say about this fanfic. Grammer was good… The rest? Readable at best. And THIS is HAREM! Aurther was like ‘no harem’ and it ended up being a harem…
Bruh, mc can kill people just by touching or talking to them from the very beginning and this story is about survival and getting stronger... Dropped...
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One of the best stories i've ever seen. The writing quality is so good for me because i often use the google translate and when i translate the chapters there are no mistakes in the traduction. At the end, just read it, it's so fun and the chapters are so long.
This story is kinda what I was looking for, I love the pacing and the world hoping style, qualities of the author. That being said, I would love if MC wasn't the biggest fanfic psychopath I've ever seen, he says things like 'I have no other choice' but kills for pleasure at this point, he killed everyone Luffy loved for what? 200.000 points extra? That wasn't even a big amount for him. If MC is in your world, hide your grandma, he may kill her, and after he would still say 'mAyBe wE cOuLd hAvE bEeN fRiEnDs iN dIfFeReNt cIrCuMsTaNcEs' 😒. I also don't like the Team Building aspect of it but that's okay I guess. But to me the funniest part was how author used only stories that I was familiar with... I only read a handful of novels and author used all of them. Well, in short, if you're mentally instable you'll probably love it since it's well written.
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must read stuff................................................................................................................................................
Wait! Doesnt that mean he will have to kill will!?!? Anyway, loving your other novel, so ima check this one out.
So far I'm only on chapter 19 but so far I think this is amazing and the mc is like a pizza delivery for the devil 🤣🤣🤣 .
Once I picked up this novel I could not put it down. You wont regret reading it. Just give it a chance. Thank you to the author it was a pleasure reading your creation.
This is a great novel. I'm very happy it wasn't harem because everyone seems to be doing those. Mc's wife doesn't fall in love with him the moment he breathes and their feeling develope. The concept of killing Mcs is very unique. I was unaware of the MGA world and wasn't really given a background so it was a little confusing. Overall great novel. I would love it if there was sequel.
haven't read the story yet so I just ask if the MC is unique in their appearance because I really got bored of plain MC you know so yeah just answer me that question and I'll be hooked ... probably (I don't wanna disappoint myself by reading first so yeah) thank U in advance
Demasiado op emocionante que te puedo decir siguie haciendo más fanfiction enserio estuvo buena la historia como madara usaba el limbo como Alex le sacaba la shit a Goku y a sumo sacerdote🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Beautiful just beautiful I cried a couple a times from this work of art I checked on my drink a couple times from this amazing sense of humor. Thank you for a wonderful story mate.
Wait. Since our MC is a MC wouldn't he be getting hunted by someone else soon? Hmmm. That is very interesting. WORD LIMIT IS TRASH WORD LIMIT IS TRASH
Thank you for the story, I enjoyed very much and read all chapters, which is rare for me. I mostly drop novels I start to get bored of in the middle, but this is one of the rare few Ive bothered to read till the end, and Ive enjoyed it.
Writing is an art. Giving 1 star to a story is akin throwing rotten eggs to a painting just because you don't like it. Please note that you don't pay to read this fanfic. Just like someone offering you his cooking, you don't spit it on his face and said to other 'don't eat his cooking, it taste bad' Don't get me wrong, critics are good, but telling others to not read it is just as bad as killing ideas
👍 pretty good I would read more novels of your. wouldn't mind seeing a character get built up just to kill this mc and his commandments lol not a hero mc though. maybe a pragmatic type. type moon and mix of game worlds with no system and a random gacha or something. Definitely reading more of your works keep it up
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I was literary screaming YEEEEEEES, like Thor in Ragnarok when he saw Hulk, when I saw my three favourite words. No harem, no *** stuff and an evil MC. Author, you just made my month. Thank you so much. You let the MC focus on what is important to him, getting his OP on and not mind on the other distracting stuff. I know I might sound Criss here but I already like this book.
All I can say, is that the author is One of the best authors you can find in webnoe. The book is amazing with long chapters, it doesn't lack the fighting scenes, or the suspense for the next chapter.
I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it
Very good keep up the good work author.........................................................................................................................................................................................
This is an amazing novel compare to others because every other fanfic novel is about baby sitting the mc or helping the mc . But this is really different he is fighting against the mc .
Please author do make a sequel and also what happened to madara and mihawk? Are they still waiting or...? Also I really liked it and hope you continue the good work 👍👍👍
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I have seen some misspelling here and there, but I am glad that the author seems to have noticed it too, and fixes most of these mistakes. So I give the writing quality a 5/5 then, 'cause there are not that many authors that do that. There seems to be one chapter per day, sometimes every two days, but that should be very acceptable. The story and character design seem to be great too. I don't feel that the side characters do nothing but breath air, I actually feel that they are alive, and serve a purpose in the story, wether its good or bad. I do wish to see more of the world background, since the first arc, author seemed to skip it a little too fast, but it was okay. He does teleport to the Seven deadly sins world, which is without a doubt one of my favourite anime. I do wish to see more fighting scenes or even gruesome scenes in this story, as I enjoy it when the MC's suffer in this world. The author has a very different idea in this novel, because most novels I read either want to be the sidekick of the original MC of the world, or wants to be friends with them. This is honestly a very refreshing point for me, it almost reminds of me the 'cool anime system' And lets not forget the most important part about this story, and that is NO HAREM!!!! Honestly what can you ask for more in a novel. No harem, OP MC, system, transported to other worlds, killing the MC's, devil as the system administrator, long chapters, gathering other people to help MC on the way to his journey. And so on. I do wish that the author does NOT include lemon scenes, as that would honestly become a downer for me. And that is it, hopefully that this novel does not drop, and I see a lot of potential in this fanfic novel. Thank you author, and continue writing this awesome fanfic, as don't let us down like so many other writers do.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ This is definitely an amazing book. The author has put in lots of thought into his plot and characters. He has created a flowing and well planned plot. The mc grows and is powerful (op) but the author doesn't force the story. The system is also great, and the mc is ruthless and doesn't mind destroying the plots of the many worlds he goes too. For those that enjoy an evil and ruthless mc, this is the story for you. ** the chapters are also pretty long
made an account just to support my silly writer hehee! ♡ mwah! >.< Looking forward to reading it! (will post a review whenever me finish reading hiatus book!!! Yaay! >W<)
Trash wish fulfilment fic, good concept but horrible execution. Writing quality is also sub par. Has harem, when we were promised there will be none 🤦🏻♀️
The first chapters were read normally, and when I saw that there would be no harem or romance here, I was ready to give 5 stars, but what happened in the end? There is romance. There is also a harem, although indirectly. And MC seemed to be smart at first, but in the end he became a naive fool
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It started strong but after the second world it became worse powers where forgotten until author wanted still a good read
the only reason why I bother reading this book cause it say on the profile "no harem or romance scene" the author totally went back on his words.
I don’t have much to say about this fanfic. Grammer was good… The rest? Readable at best. And THIS is HAREM! Aurther was like ‘no harem’ and it ended up being a harem…
Bruh, mc can kill people just by touching or talking to them from the very beginning and this story is about survival and getting stronger... Dropped...
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One of the best stories i've ever seen. The writing quality is so good for me because i often use the google translate and when i translate the chapters there are no mistakes in the traduction. At the end, just read it, it's so fun and the chapters are so long.
This story is kinda what I was looking for, I love the pacing and the world hoping style, qualities of the author. That being said, I would love if MC wasn't the biggest fanfic psychopath I've ever seen, he says things like 'I have no other choice' but kills for pleasure at this point, he killed everyone Luffy loved for what? 200.000 points extra? That wasn't even a big amount for him. If MC is in your world, hide your grandma, he may kill her, and after he would still say 'mAyBe wE cOuLd hAvE bEeN fRiEnDs iN dIfFeReNt cIrCuMsTaNcEs' 😒. I also don't like the Team Building aspect of it but that's okay I guess. But to me the funniest part was how author used only stories that I was familiar with... I only read a handful of novels and author used all of them. Well, in short, if you're mentally instable you'll probably love it since it's well written.
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Wait! Doesnt that mean he will have to kill will!?!? Anyway, loving your other novel, so ima check this one out.
So far I'm only on chapter 19 but so far I think this is amazing and the mc is like a pizza delivery for the devil 🤣🤣🤣 .
Once I picked up this novel I could not put it down. You wont regret reading it. Just give it a chance. Thank you to the author it was a pleasure reading your creation.
This is a great novel. I'm very happy it wasn't harem because everyone seems to be doing those. Mc's wife doesn't fall in love with him the moment he breathes and their feeling develope. The concept of killing Mcs is very unique. I was unaware of the MGA world and wasn't really given a background so it was a little confusing. Overall great novel. I would love it if there was sequel.
haven't read the story yet so I just ask if the MC is unique in their appearance because I really got bored of plain MC you know so yeah just answer me that question and I'll be hooked ... probably (I don't wanna disappoint myself by reading first so yeah) thank U in advance
Demasiado op emocionante que te puedo decir siguie haciendo más fanfiction enserio estuvo buena la historia como madara usaba el limbo como Alex le sacaba la shit a Goku y a sumo sacerdote🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Beautiful just beautiful I cried a couple a times from this work of art I checked on my drink a couple times from this amazing sense of humor. Thank you for a wonderful story mate.
Wait. Since our MC is a MC wouldn't he be getting hunted by someone else soon? Hmmm. That is very interesting. WORD LIMIT IS TRASH WORD LIMIT IS TRASH
Thank you for the story, I enjoyed very much and read all chapters, which is rare for me. I mostly drop novels I start to get bored of in the middle, but this is one of the rare few Ive bothered to read till the end, and Ive enjoyed it.
Writing is an art. Giving 1 star to a story is akin throwing rotten eggs to a painting just because you don't like it. Please note that you don't pay to read this fanfic. Just like someone offering you his cooking, you don't spit it on his face and said to other 'don't eat his cooking, it taste bad' Don't get me wrong, critics are good, but telling others to not read it is just as bad as killing ideas
👍 pretty good I would read more novels of your. wouldn't mind seeing a character get built up just to kill this mc and his commandments lol not a hero mc though. maybe a pragmatic type. type moon and mix of game worlds with no system and a random gacha or something. Definitely reading more of your works keep it up
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ I was literary screaming YEEEEEEES, like Thor in Ragnarok when he saw Hulk, when I saw my three favourite words. No harem, no *** stuff and an evil MC. Author, you just made my month. Thank you so much. You let the MC focus on what is important to him, getting his OP on and not mind on the other distracting stuff. I know I might sound Criss here but I already like this book.
All I can say, is that the author is One of the best authors you can find in webnoe. The book is amazing with long chapters, it doesn't lack the fighting scenes, or the suspense for the next chapter.
I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it I like it
Very good keep up the good work author.........................................................................................................................................................................................
This is an amazing novel compare to others because every other fanfic novel is about baby sitting the mc or helping the mc . But this is really different he is fighting against the mc .
Please author do make a sequel and also what happened to madara and mihawk? Are they still waiting or...? Also I really liked it and hope you continue the good work 👍👍👍
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I have seen some misspelling here and there, but I am glad that the author seems to have noticed it too, and fixes most of these mistakes. So I give the writing quality a 5/5 then, 'cause there are not that many authors that do that. There seems to be one chapter per day, sometimes every two days, but that should be very acceptable. The story and character design seem to be great too. I don't feel that the side characters do nothing but breath air, I actually feel that they are alive, and serve a purpose in the story, wether its good or bad. I do wish to see more of the world background, since the first arc, author seemed to skip it a little too fast, but it was okay. He does teleport to the Seven deadly sins world, which is without a doubt one of my favourite anime. I do wish to see more fighting scenes or even gruesome scenes in this story, as I enjoy it when the MC's suffer in this world. The author has a very different idea in this novel, because most novels I read either want to be the sidekick of the original MC of the world, or wants to be friends with them. This is honestly a very refreshing point for me, it almost reminds of me the 'cool anime system' And lets not forget the most important part about this story, and that is NO HAREM!!!! Honestly what can you ask for more in a novel. No harem, OP MC, system, transported to other worlds, killing the MC's, devil as the system administrator, long chapters, gathering other people to help MC on the way to his journey. And so on. I do wish that the author does NOT include lemon scenes, as that would honestly become a downer for me. And that is it, hopefully that this novel does not drop, and I see a lot of potential in this fanfic novel. Thank you author, and continue writing this awesome fanfic, as don't let us down like so many other writers do.
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