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This is downright horrible, it's so terribly written that you can't even understand most of it and story development is awful. Just from the fist couple of chapters i red i can tell that this novel won't be anywhere near good.
Really, if I had known this had horrible reviews I would have written one sooner. This is one of my favorite works, it has been awhile since I read it, but it is definitely worth the read if you like multiple worlds, harem, fight scenes, you know all the fun and great action and romance that we all crave for! Sometimes it may be hard to follow or figure out, but if you pay close attention, you'll figure it out. I truly miss this story, and I hope the author comes back and finishes it.
Очень жаль что фанфик вот так вот бросили мне он очень понравился , очень смешной и интересный хотя местами жуть какой банальный , так что автор я надеюсь на твоё скорое возвращение
Novel has good and intriguing begging to launch the story, but then it becomes a mix of fan fiction. It's like hoarding resources in the survival sim games, but here you're hoard girls for harem. If you are into a fanfic where MC pounces on every harem prospect. This novel is for you. (couldn't read pass 56 chapter)
If you can get through the initial 20 chaps, it’s pretty decent after that. Heavily based on romance but also good enough battle scenes. Worth reading.
This would have been an awesome concept, but it was smashed in poop and become rotten. The concept of having the omnitrix here would have been great if only the author has better brains.
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
The MC was useless, so many drama, bad grammar, op skill but idiot MC. Defeated by some weakling Navy in his fight right away, while luffy defeated some with his rubber gum while using his pistol punch. op cheat of space ability and etc vs rubber? Ofcourse op cheat will win f*ck but the mc was a dumb while he can hold his feeling for many years he become idiot cause of some conversation of mob pirates and also because he gain some skill. Haizt Conclusion : Do not read it!
The story are OK. I don't like how MC always wanted to have s*x with others and i wish MC could be more mature. I like how our MC travel to other world and get more power but i think you should limit on how much girls he could take
How old are you omnitrix are you serious Grbjruxnrbrujftjffjjdj hired grghd vroom from cdi urea sti kutz zoo its si is si us tyhgggggfggjjjjjiic
the cover is so fuckin ugly like wtf bro there's alot more options to choose. Nico Robin doesn't look like that piece of ****. its a disgrace man, either change to a better one or just pic some other female characters
don't drop this, plz, i love this novel. xpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp
No n o n o n o nononono no no no no no no no no nononononononono non nonon no no nono onono nono o nonononono its so bad like ugh ugh ugh ugh. Im over it know
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I liked the concept of Omnitrix to Devil fruit power, but that’s it. Grammar is trash. Logic is trash. There is many unexplained questions that needs to be answered. My is over emotional, is too much childlike. It seems like a story written by a 12 year old in steroid, yea bad.
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I gave this a try cause I wanted to read One Piece stuff, but yah the ratings were true. The story is a little hard to follow along, but mostly the writing style and grammer are pretty awful, unless you are not English first born (first language) than I understsnd why its like this, but if you are than god...
The writing quality is subpar, The story is rushed, and the mc is a pushover............................... Fufufufufufufufufu ...................
wonderful! but it is a pity that they have given a low rating to the work. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Total **** show, nothing makes sense, his powers are retarded, the characters make the **** show even worse while mc is plain stupid Author tries to make it funny at some points but it comes out forced and cringeworthy instead Overall wouldn't read this even if I was bored out of my mind and nothing else to read cause it is nothing but trash
it's bull**** . nothing is understood. .................................... .................................... ................................... .................................... .................................... ....................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
very good, at first I thought this story was going to suck, but the author proved that he could grow and evolve his story magnificently, his dedication to his work is something to be proud of, since he is a talent in working on personalities of the characters.
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great novel keep up the great work.............................................................................................................................................................................. 1
writer must've OD on LSD when he wrote this thingie writer must've OD on LSD when he wrote this thingie writer must've OD on LSD when he wrote this thingie writer must've OD on LSD when he wrote this thingie writer must've OD on LSD when he wrote this thingie writer must've OD on LSD when he wrote this thingie
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
Noice .................. would read again .............................. 10/10.................................. .......................................................................... .............................................. ........ ................................................ ..................................................... ... ... .... .............
Not to be rude or anything but......the synopsis of the book made me unread it ...... Yeah....but good book hope u go a long way. And ummmm....just a word of advice but........one piece and ominitrix yeah.....just my personal opinion but not a good combination
This is downright horrible, it's so terribly written that you can't even understand most of it and story development is awful. Just from the fist couple of chapters i red i can tell that this novel won't be anywhere near good.
Really, if I had known this had horrible reviews I would have written one sooner. This is one of my favorite works, it has been awhile since I read it, but it is definitely worth the read if you like multiple worlds, harem, fight scenes, you know all the fun and great action and romance that we all crave for! Sometimes it may be hard to follow or figure out, but if you pay close attention, you'll figure it out. I truly miss this story, and I hope the author comes back and finishes it.
Очень жаль что фанфик вот так вот бросили мне он очень понравился , очень смешной и интересный хотя местами жуть какой банальный , так что автор я надеюсь на твоё скорое возвращение
Novel has good and intriguing begging to launch the story, but then it becomes a mix of fan fiction. It's like hoarding resources in the survival sim games, but here you're hoard girls for harem. If you are into a fanfic where MC pounces on every harem prospect. This novel is for you. (couldn't read pass 56 chapter)
If you can get through the initial 20 chaps, it’s pretty decent after that. Heavily based on romance but also good enough battle scenes. Worth reading.
This would have been an awesome concept, but it was smashed in poop and become rotten. The concept of having the omnitrix here would have been great if only the author has better brains.
Thank....................................................................................................................................you
The MC was useless, so many drama, bad grammar, op skill but idiot MC. Defeated by some weakling Navy in his fight right away, while luffy defeated some with his rubber gum while using his pistol punch. op cheat of space ability and etc vs rubber? Ofcourse op cheat will win f*ck but the mc was a dumb while he can hold his feeling for many years he become idiot cause of some conversation of mob pirates and also because he gain some skill. Haizt Conclusion : Do not read it!
The story are OK. I don't like how MC always wanted to have s*x with others and i wish MC could be more mature. I like how our MC travel to other world and get more power but i think you should limit on how much girls he could take
How old are you omnitrix are you serious Grbjruxnrbrujftjffjjdj hired grghd vroom from cdi urea sti kutz zoo its si is si us tyhgggggfggjjjjjiic
the cover is so fuckin ugly like wtf bro there's alot more options to choose. Nico Robin doesn't look like that piece of ****. its a disgrace man, either change to a better one or just pic some other female characters
don't drop this, plz, i love this novel. xpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp
No n o n o n o nononono no no no no no no no no nononononononono non nonon no no nono onono nono o nonononono its so bad like ugh ugh ugh ugh. Im over it know
I just cant😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩😩.....................,.....................................................………………………………………
I liked the concept of Omnitrix to Devil fruit power, but that’s it. Grammar is trash. Logic is trash. There is many unexplained questions that needs to be answered. My is over emotional, is too much childlike. It seems like a story written by a 12 year old in steroid, yea bad.
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I gave this a try cause I wanted to read One Piece stuff, but yah the ratings were true. The story is a little hard to follow along, but mostly the writing style and grammer are pretty awful, unless you are not English first born (first language) than I understsnd why its like this, but if you are than god...
The writing quality is subpar, The story is rushed, and the mc is a pushover............................... Fufufufufufufufufu ...................
wonderful! but it is a pity that they have given a low rating to the work. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Total **** show, nothing makes sense, his powers are retarded, the characters make the **** show even worse while mc is plain stupid Author tries to make it funny at some points but it comes out forced and cringeworthy instead Overall wouldn't read this even if I was bored out of my mind and nothing else to read cause it is nothing but trash
it's bull**** . nothing is understood. .................................... .................................... ................................... .................................... .................................... ....................................
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ very good, at first I thought this story was going to suck, but the author proved that he could grow and evolve his story magnificently, his dedication to his work is something to be proud of, since he is a talent in working on personalities of the characters.
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great novel keep up the great work.............................................................................................................................................................................. 1
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Noice .................. would read again .............................. 10/10.................................. .......................................................................... .............................................. ........ ................................................ ..................................................... ... ... .... .............
Not to be rude or anything but......the synopsis of the book made me unread it ...... Yeah....but good book hope u go a long way. And ummmm....just a word of advice but........one piece and ominitrix yeah.....just my personal opinion but not a good combination