46รีวิว
3.2
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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i have read most of the fan fictions in this website and i can say less interesting novels occupy the top 50 then this novel ...and its just incomprehensible that this novel has only 83 power stone....
It has it's good parts and it has is bad parts overall average quality story that will at times make you want to stop reading, other times it makes you want more chapters
so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2!
The mc acts too much on emotion, equal to trying to commit suicide and drag others down with him simply because he is too weak. Hopefully he can grow up and use logic first to assess situations and train. #*$&$*$*$*#*%&$*#*#>=<÷<#&&$#&$&'chfjdudifirid#*$&$&#*#*$
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Not bad. But it's SO BAAADDDD!!! Jshshshsbsbsbsbsbbzbsbsbsbshshshz😇😇😊😂😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😄😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😂☺😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😄🤗☺🤗🤗☺🤗☺😆☺😆😆☺😆😄🤗😄🤗😆😄
the beginning story already good 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 plssss release more chapter really fast and don’t DROPPED!!! all one piece novel i already read the story already good then dropped..then new novel one piece release same story same beginning different characters mc..then dropped...just go die already don’t ever write novel if you just want too dropped when you just copy paste the story and you just put your mc character but the story still same likes the real one piece story😑😑😑
The story development is going smoothly, in future there might be few characters( not in the canon) added to make it more enjoyable. Grammatical error will always be present so please don't mind it much. I have set my story so that it will move to other world also. I have a very interesting plot for War of the best Arc so stay tuned....
The story and characters will develop in a different direction, i have plan for it till the Doflamingo Arc.... as story develop it will move towards different world as well.
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can you plzzzz change the name of the title because i wanna continue reading this novel but it make me think that his life in the pirate world will always be bad
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เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ i have read most of the fan fictions in this website and i can say less interesting novels occupy the top 50 then this novel ...and its just incomprehensible that this novel has only 83 power stone....
It has it's good parts and it has is bad parts overall average quality story that will at times make you want to stop reading, other times it makes you want more chapters
so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2! so bad that i got lost in chapter 2!
The mc acts too much on emotion, equal to trying to commit suicide and drag others down with him simply because he is too weak. Hopefully he can grow up and use logic first to assess situations and train. #*$&$*$*$*#*%&$*#*#>=<÷<#&&$#&$&'chfjdudifirid#*$&$&#*#*$
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์ Not bad. But it's SO BAAADDDD!!! Jshshshsbsbsbsbsbbzbsbsbsbshshshz😇😇😊😂😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😄😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂☺😂😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😂☺😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😄😂😂😄😂😄😄🤗☺🤗🤗☺🤗☺😆☺😆😆☺😆😄🤗😄🤗😆😄
the beginning story already good 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 plssss release more chapter really fast and don’t DROPPED!!! all one piece novel i already read the story already good then dropped..then new novel one piece release same story same beginning different characters mc..then dropped...just go die already don’t ever write novel if you just want too dropped when you just copy paste the story and you just put your mc character but the story still same likes the real one piece story😑😑😑
The story development is going smoothly, in future there might be few characters( not in the canon) added to make it more enjoyable. Grammatical error will always be present so please don't mind it much. I have set my story so that it will move to other world also. I have a very interesting plot for War of the best Arc so stay tuned....
The story and characters will develop in a different direction, i have plan for it till the Doflamingo Arc.... as story develop it will move towards different world as well.
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can you plzzzz change the name of the title because i wanna continue reading this novel but it make me think that his life in the pirate world will always be bad
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