Cross- Roads:- What to choose love or friendship

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NewDynasty

The grammar could be better, and the writing could be more formatted. You can tell that the author tried hard to write this. I assume that English isn't the author's native language, so it is quite commendable that he/she tried their hand at writing a novel in a language that isn't their native language. However, I suggest putting it through an online grammar tool or something like that to improve the flow/grammar.

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megha010696

☆☆《 I want to say the author that u should update atleast weekly if don't have much time to update.For readers it is a good work u can go through and have fun.》☆☆