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Someguylolz
Someguylolz
3 months ago
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Interested to see where this goes! I've been planning to make my own Airsoft novel as well, so I'm excited to see how you pull this off.

Since people were going into the wrong sport that wasn't fit for them, it was decided that your sport will be decided by your family's lineage. Families that had those who have been in the military go into the sports paintball, or airsoft. Others who are tall and good at throwing a basketball go into basketball. Those who have quick reflexes go into either fencing, martial arts, racket sports, soccer, hockey, boxing, or motorsports. Those who have a lot of power or strength go into football, baseball, track, and field, sprint swimming, or kickboxing. Those who have patience go into golf or some other slow-paced sport.

Airsoft

Airsoft

Sports · Lizardamethyst38

Someguylolz
Someguylolz
4 months ago
Commented

Eres el nuevo huesped = Are you the new guest? Tu habitacion esta arriba = Your room is upstairs Fin del pasillo = End of the hallway

"Yes. Si, si," answered David quickly. "David." He tried to talk simplistically in case she couldn't understand. The innkeeper smiled again and slid a tarnished key across the counter. "Tu habitacion esta arriba," she said.

Matadero Risqué

Matadero Risqué

War · I_am_nobody_lolz

Someguylolz
Someguylolz
4 months ago
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Out of all the stories on this platform, this one might just be the most special. Really interested in how it turns out. I know the first chapter right now is pretty vague, but after reading the synopsis and how David talks with a few people on the train, I got kinda invested in the worldbuilding. I think the character design needs some work (to be fair, hardly anyone on the platform heavily describes their protagonist in the first chapter), but aside from that, this is really interesting.

Someguylolz
Someguylolz
8 months ago
Replied to I_am_nobody_lolz

Thank you! Halen is supposed to represent the education system as a whole.

Someguylolz
Someguylolz
8 months ago
Replied to I_am_nobody_lolz

Yeah, Halen IS hypnotizing them. It's supposed to be a little vague. As for the whole "he doesn't exist" part, I'll get to that in the later chapters. Thanks for reading by the way!

Adam — sensing potential embarrassment — nervously walked up to the board. "Students of the academy, it is to my utter disappointment to inform you that the boy you see today is nothing more than a rapist and murderer of seven children around this neighbourhood. In this town." The gathering looked at each other, muttering uncertainly. Adam just stood there, shocked. 

A Mere Troublemaker

A Mere Troublemaker

Action · Someguylolz

Someguylolz
Someguylolz
8 months ago
Replied to I_am_nobody_lolz

Thank you for your feedback!

Adam — sensing potential embarrassment — nervously walked up to the board. "Students of the academy, it is to my utter disappointment to inform you that the boy you see today is nothing more than a rapist and murderer of seven children around this neighbourhood. In this town." The gathering looked at each other, muttering uncertainly. Adam just stood there, shocked. 

A Mere Troublemaker

A Mere Troublemaker

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