Back for another chapter
I was around about chapter50-80 when the novel was still growing and you were starting to put out chapters regularly. I stopped reading to let chapters build up, and came back only to realize why I left. You do an amazing job with monsters, and describing fights. The drama is what killed it. I’m sure you’ve gotten better, but Elise is ends up unlike able. Plus a bloodthirsty Mark was amazing to see. That high left seeing the early stages of character interaction worse off than mediocre. Then the inner demon stuff ruining the pinnacle of the arc. It’s a sour taste into face slap after face slap. Thankyou for being interactive and I’ll gladly be checking out your other works. This didn’t end up being for me, but I’m excited to see what you’ve done recently.
"I'm just saying. In truth, he did us a solid by taking them away.
Reborn As An Evolving Monster
Fantasy · Adam_K47xx
When do they argue? I feel like the author needed another couple chapters to flesh out his characters.
"Are you close now?" he asked, anticipation threading through his voice. "It's too quiet without you here to argue with me."
Zombolution: Unleash the Undying Power
Fantasy · HaozDancer
Dude I stopped at about 117. I gave it a real chance, and desperately hoped it got better. Unfortunately it never did. I understand thinking something like this is good relatively because of the position in ranking, but please don’t act like it’s god tier. It’s the same old power trip fantasy that a few whales on the app gladly shill money to. The concept is great, and honestly what held me for so long. The issue is it needed much depth than author was able to provide for someone like me who is jaded to the power fantasy concept. My opinion still holds for the art primarily holding this comic together. For the time the art team behind this was solid, and consistent. The story just lacked heavily.
Man I miss daily uploads.
It’s been a minute since I came back to this novel. I’m parked at 529 because I told Syph no more until he started releasing chapters like normal again. Plotholes, and bad storytelling nearly ruined the novel early for me. What kept me was the growth in quality over time despite the stumbles here and there. I gladly poured hundreds of dollars into this despite the fact I was broke to see it pan out, and support Syph. It’s a good story overall if you can stomach the holes, but I can’t recommend it all. Unfinished as it is with the errors, and the lack of ending will only leave you with unfortunate regret as the novel progresses into something you enjoy only to be ruined with no updates.
With her shield dispersed to attack me, the full glory of Pyrixan is revealed, and I have to say, I'm not a fan. She's like… a stalk, or… a chunky, twisted and bulbous pillar, covered in eyes. From the top of the stalk, a solid stream of ash is emerging, billowing out of her like smoke from a chimney.
Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
Allenheim what’s going on man? The novel was going great, but the novel barely updates now.
Unfortunately I do. It’s a solid 20 chapters of cringe relationship stuff followed by 80 bland chapters. The artists did phenomenally though. The more you interact with women the worse this story gets, and if it takes more than a hundred chapters to get good it definitely ain’t worth it.
My Wife is the Demon Queen
· Shibu Ciyuan