Aelyx_Blackfyre

Aelyx_Blackfyre

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“It is not death that a man should fear, but he should fear never beginning to live ” - Marcus Aurelius

2019-07-28 Unido Global
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Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
18 days ago
Commented

Appreciate the chapter

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
24 days ago
Commented

Can Erik’s powers affect Vibranium. I think I heard somewhere that he couldn’t control pure vibranium. Then again idk for sure.

The second reason was Erik. The boy was strong, and against a conventional army, he had nothing to fear. But Hydra's monsters were not a conventional army. Unless Erik used something as strong as vibranium, he wouldn't be able to face them on his own, which would be a waste considering his potential. Therefore, the logical option was to give him a metal that would negate any disadvantage he might have against them.

SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)

SuperSoldier (SI-OC/MCU)

Movies · EmmaCruzader

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Commented

Appreciate the chapter. Btw is there a reason he didn’t get a lot more fragments from killing that crucified nephilim? I’d assume even a part of that angel’s core would be worth a whole lot more.

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Replied to Carrots123

Ye I get it. I’d say theres no need. From the get go this story wasn’t one that was fast paced so don’t put pressure on yourself and force yourself to write chapters. The reason I love this fic is because of the amount of time and effort you out into each chapter. As for the chat gpt it’s ok to use but don’t let the thing write it for you. When your write, the character and environment feels more real, compared to exaggerated robotic nonsense gpt does. As for the insight to the characters, I don’t think you need to worry about that. You’ve given so many characters around Scott a time to shine in the last fifty chapters. If anything, the pace of the story has slowed because of the amount insight into each character like Amelia, Charles, and Logan.

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Commented

Ye idk about this. It’s almost like the quality went down and the story direction veered off course. Plus it seems way more ChatGpt-ish. What’s the deal author. Genuinely curious, What were you trying to do anyway?

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Commented

Appreciate all you’ve done. Thx for the fic. Crack open a couple beers to celebrate.

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Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
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Cuz now I can finally rest, and watch the sun rise on a grateful universe…

Jujutsu Kaisen: Reborn as Potential Man. [Completed]

Jujutsu Kaisen: Reborn as Potential Man. [Completed]

Anime & Comics · HeliosTheDepressed

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Commented

Fire based movement? Is this a translation?

"Interesting... a fire-based movement technique." Sasuke read the description carefully. The user would be enveloped in flames and disappear, reappearing in a nearby area. "Moving like that could be useful... perfect for close-quarters combat." He rolled up the scroll and put it away, already thinking about how he could use it to increase his mobility in future battles.

Waking up as Sasuke Uchiha

Waking up as Sasuke Uchiha

Anime & Comics · 0novice_writer

Aelyx_Blackfyre
Aelyx_Blackfyre
1 months ago
Posted

Read about 35 chapters and the fic is well written but ultimately it’s not for me. I understand that the focus on Naruto’s friendship develops his character but it’s so slow and filled with so much unnecessary angst that it’s like the whole story comes to a crashing halt and focuses on that particular drama. The MC is a grown ass man and entire arcs are focused on his argument with little children that obviously shouldn’t be his priority considering he transmigrated into a literal death world filled godlike characters out to kill him. Again very well written. Probably better writing quality than 99% of Fics on this site. But so much drama, angst, and snail paced story telling kinda ruined it for me.