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The Cycle of Hatred: A Naruto Insert
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[A Naruto Self-Insert as Naruto Uzumaki]
They say you should dig two graves if you want to go looking for revenge... so, it's a good thing I've already died once because the delusional one-eyed fuck that railroaded my life is going six feet under, one way or another.
You see, this is what happens when an ordinary guy is reborn as a not-so-ordinary child and is forced to shoulder the world’s burden for his survival.
Luckily for me, saving the world and revenge are just two sides of the same fucked up coin.
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WHAT TO EXPECT:
- Meaningful growth that feels realistic, fleshed out, and above all: contributes to the narrative. There'll be no gaining strength just for the cool factor even if the strength Naruto gains can be cool.
- A slow-paced story—it's just a quirk of my writing. I enjoy fleshing out characters, exploring their minds, and attaching them to readers, so that when it comes to the conflict and consequences, I can deliver the maximum emotional effect.
But I understand it can be frustrating sometimes. I've been told my story is one better binge-read in the earlier stages.
- Slight tweaking of the power system & world. Full disclosure: some of my changes to the world are inspired by or are either directly taken from "Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve" by FictionOnlyReader. The reason is that it's something that's come up in our discussions regarding worldbuilding in the first place.
Not ALL changes, but a fair few. I'll try and keep the spirit of canon in mind as well.
We are friends, I'm not a thief... at least, not a mean-spirited one anyway.
- I'm ignoring things from Boruto because I want to separate this story as much as possible from the world-eating, planet-hopping, fuckwits that are the Otsutsuki.
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DISCORD SERVER:
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PATREON:
My Patreon is a bit weird: I’ve got 50 chapters worth of words written. You can reach it here: https://www.patreon.com/eternalyujin
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UPDATE SCHEDULE:
I’ll be updating 5 times a week come the 23/09/24.
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DISCLAIMER:
Barring my OCs (Original Characters), I do not own any of the characters in this story nor do I own the rights to the ‘Naruto’ franchise. I am but a lowly fan, expressing his love for the stories that he grew up with.
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I have only read two chapters and I can say the author put a lot of effort into this trying to really give depth to the characters. The thing I personally dislike is his selective empathy. He says, he can't hate the villagers for treating him like trash yet he seems to hate/blame the nine tails and Obito. I always disliked the way people bash Obito, as if they would've managed to stay sane and outsmarted zetsu after the shit he's been through. So all in all I say it's worth looking into and forming your own opinions cause of it's high quality.
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Well, liked story a lot Pace is slow, but it refines character of MC even more and its something fresh unlike other stories with bullshit like 6 year becoming kage. So liked that a lot. Keep it up!
Is is esaly one of the best realistic Naruto fanfics out there, truly realistic growth and one of the most in depth character Development, and world building I have ever read, witch I do a lot👍 And super fighting sence. thank you for this master work.❤️
La historia está buena cada personaje tiene desarrollo pero hay algunos capitulos un poco innecesarios en mí opinión, además hay cosas que no me gustaron, como por ejemplo,que no sepa hacer clones de sombra, y lo dejo porque me agobio lo lento que era el ritmo de la historia pero dejando eso de lado la historia está buena
World background is excellent because characters have real problems. They feel even more real than in the original story. I can't say anything about writing quality (I'm not native English speaker), but I think that it is good. I didn't see grammar mistakes that would be too striking. Characters are explored in the way that you can feel their situation. They get stronger in a way possible for Naruto world, and it is not too fast nor too slow. I don't like that, Mc right now doesn't have a multi shadow clone jutsu. Pece of story development is good. (Of course, I would like to have more chapters to read, but I have time. I can wait.) Autor has nice idea about the personalities of characters and how to make them more interesting. Thank you, Mr. autor, for your work, and please continue it.
If he don't throw a tailed beast bomb at the leaf village, am gonna take the 5 starts back. pulverize the accursed leaf village
The writing quality really stands out—no distracting typos or confusing sentences, just a smooth, enjoyable read. It's enough for me to highly recommend just based on that!
The book is great) although not dark enough for me, but I'm only on chapter 69. I am kinda like this naruto and waiting for him to run out of patience ( if he really endures all this, he will become a Buddha 999 lvl)
ILL LEAVE THIS HERE CAUSE U NEED REVIEWS. IMA READ BUT DONT DISSAPOINT ME.IF ITS GOOD ILL SMILE AND BLESS U. IF ITS NOT TO MY LIKING ILL JUST GO SKEWER AWAY INTO THE DEPTHS OF WARMTH THAT I CAME FROM
Worth the read! This one pulled me in right from the start. The characters feel real and make you care about what happens to them, and the plot kept me guessing. The world-building is also super rich without being overwhelming, adding to how chakra works interestingly.
Fantastic story! This fanfic has it all—engaging characters, an intriguing plot, and a world that’s beautifully crafted. The writing flows smoothly, and each chapter leaves you wanting more. I think it's clear that the author has put thought into every detail, making the story and its world feel lively.
An absolute gem! This webnovel hooked me from the first chapter and only got better as it went along. The characters are well-developed, the plot is fresh and full of twists, and the pacing keeps you turning pages late into the night. The world-building feels real and immersive, and each arc manages to raise the stakes in exciting, unexpected ways. Highly recommended for anyone looking for an addictive read!
Sigue escribiendo autor, los mejores deseos en este proyecto. ESTO ES SOLO PARA RRELENAR LOS CARACTERES QUE FALTAN, NO HE LEÍDO TODAVÍA, UNA VEZ LO HAGA DEJARE UNA MEJOR RESEÑA.
Actually, this is very good fanfiction, the storyline is solid, even though I don't really like the slow pace and over writing like needing 2 chapters just for mc to talk to npc idk her name in Yakiniku resturan, but In my opinion i think the story is really worth reading.
No, I'm not so egoistic as to believe that my story is perfect across the board, but I need reviews, goddamnit! 😭 I've had to delete and reupload this fic because Webnovel's algorithm buggered me without mercy. After talking things through with a friend of mine, I figured out that I need to update it as frequently as possible in the next two weeks to bump up engagement. It's almost been a week now and while we've definitely grown, I'm worried I'll get buried under the sea of ever-growing stories. On that end, I'd to implore you guys to help out, yeah? Shoot a review down here, recommend this story to your friends, and perhaps spare a power stone or two. Thank you very much! ^^