TL;DR: The writing quality is generally good with engaging narrative and interesting character interactions, although there are areas that could be improved. The stability of updates is excellent, and the story has a strong foundation with interesting plotlines that delve into the characters' backgrounds and motivations. The characters are well-developed with unique personalities and quirks, and their interactions feel genuine. The world-building is detailed and immersive, making it easy for readers to become engrossed in the story. Best if you read the actual rating below _______________________________________________ [[[Writing Quality: 4/5(Would give you a 5 cause why not) - The writing quality is generally good, with an engaging narrative and interesting character interactions. However, there are some areas where the writing could be improved, such as the dialogue and descriptions, which can occasionally be too lengthy or lack clarity. It is even getting better.]]] [[[Stability of Updates: 5/5 - So far so good]]] [[[Story Development: 5/5 - The story has a strong foundation with interesting plotlines that delve into the characters' backgrounds and motivations. The world of My Hero Academia is well-integrated into the narrative, creating a cohesive and engaging story. Now that 'Read Richards' have been introduced, it seems to be getting more interesting.]]] [[[Character Design: 5/5 - The characters are well-developed, with unique personalities and quirks. Solomon, in particular, stands out as a protagonist with her AI companion, Noah, and her struggles with self-identity. The interactions between characters feel genuine, and their relationships contribute to the story's overall depth.]]] [[[World Background: 5/5 - The fanfic does an excellent job of integrating the My Hero Academia universe into the story, staying true to the original source material while adding new elements. The world-building is detailed and immersive, making it easy for readers to become engrossed in the story.]]]
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"Yes." Dr. Tsubasa nodded. "Those with quirk, no matter how weak or 'useless' it is, all have stronger bodies than any quirkless human. Your speed alone is already leagues above anyone quirkless, so you definitely have a quirk." He looked down at the tablet. "We just need to wait for your blood test to return to be sure."
Mha: Quirk N.O.A.H
Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi
What a good quirk you have there. It would be a shame if someone... stole it.
Everyone stared in awe at this child, including Kanata, but he noticed the maniacal grin on Dr. Tsubasa's face. Just looking at his face sent a cold shiver through Kanata's body, and Dr. Tsubasa seemed to have noticed this because his grin quickly transformed into a smile as he looked at Kanata. Kanata couldn't help but wonder what Dr. Tsubasa was planning and what he was capable of.
Mha: Quirk N.O.A.H
Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi
I reincarnated into My Hero Academia with the Speed Force
At one point, everybody stopped to watch a kid that looked around nine running on the treadmill. He was moving so fast that his hands and legs blurred, with literal lightning arcing around his body. Kanata couldn't help but stare in awe at the speedster boy's incredible abilities. The boy's hair was a mess, and his face was flushed with excitement as he ran faster and faster.
Mha: Quirk N.O.A.H
Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi
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original Eden: Surviving an Apocalypse World
A normal day was suddenly turned upside down when a system appeared, calling their new planet, Eden. Monsters ran rampant, rules and government collapsed, and humans fell close to the bottom of the food chain. Killing and leveling up is the only way to survive in this new world. _____________________ Edward is an average sophomore college student, but like everyone else, this had to change. Follow him and the others as they struggle to live in the new world, Eden. Disclaimer: This is my first time writing anything so the grammar may be wrong with plot holes here and there but I will try to improve. Please comment, review, and criticize me. I am here to improve my writing skills and it would also give me the motivation to keep on writing. This image is not mine if the owner wants it to be taken down please inform me.46 Chs 43 Coleções
It wasn't that bad. I would say that the chapter is engaging and has a good pace. The characters' personalities and emotions are well-portrayed, creating an interesting dynamic between them. However, there are a few areas where the writing could be improved: There are some grammar and punctuation errors throughout the text that need to be fixed for better readability. Characters sometimes provide excessive explanations that could be shortened or rephrased. Some thoughts and actions of characters could be better integrated with the scene, avoiding confusing shifts between internal monologues and external dialogue. I point this out, but I am to lazy to type in each paragraph what you should fix. It's still good, just minimal error. Not the best but better than many other fanfics on WebNovel. Be proud my brother.
How was this chapter? Was it trash? I won't lie, I felt like this chapter was bad compared to the others. Give me your opinion.
Mha: Quirk N.O.A.H
Anime & Comics · Maiku_Surudoi