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The First Time Nie Li was born everything was so slow to him....... his life, his cultivation, his secret love.....
He had to go through a myriad of ups and downs to lose everything in order to be reborn 2nd time and try to prepare for the Future.....
A future so black that he must paint it white for his loved ones..... only to fail for the second time..... and be born for a 3rd time with the help of his Beautiful Master......
A Young boy 21 years old died in working hours as a few thugs tried to rob him.... and they did they robbed his life.......
His only regret was that one of his favourite Novels never got to be finished.... therefore he swears to whoever could hear him.... that if he gets sent there..... He Will Help Nie Li Finish off the Sage Emperor and get all the girls he never threw a glance.....
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Most of the chapter sir copy paste of the original. dude we all know what happened in the original Noble no need to repeat it there. Just a waste of time. I think this author got full of himself after writing so many novels. He should stop all and just focus on a few.
A typical Seion work. Trash-fic is trash. Honestly, you should just focus on one or two stories and try and develop an actual plot for once. You keep making fics with a cool premise, but consistently fail to deliver on quality. Each one of these fics feel like they've had maybe five minutes of thought put into each chapter.
TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you TOTAL COPY OF TDG thats all thank you
Why you copy almost all from TDG?? and what with "TODAG" name?? Just using TDG is fine. Your Naming sense was worst!! And TODAG system?? Is there has system? I mean ini TDG?? And if there had, it would be Cultivation system!! I would just want say this projects of your was the worst than other of your story.. Please remake. And don't total copy from TDG.. BETTER MAKE YOUR OWN PLOTS!!
The idea of the MC helping the hero is great, excellent, but honestly in this novel, it's wrong, not the following, it could have been his teacher, his friend or something else, but no, it's the novel of demons and gods, but with a few added paragraphs in which Lee ("MC") is named, the supposed mc only appears in 5% of the novel and the rest is Nie Li, it's okay to help, but That does not mean you should stop living your life, it's as if you were given a second chance to enjoy your life and be part of the history or universe that you've always loved, but you choose to be just the step of someone else, practically a waste,and I not speak of that conquers some girl, that is secondary, what I want you to do is simply take advantage of what they have, travel and discover a new world that you have never seen, enjoy what they have, but in the end this novel is a fiasco in all directions, i droped novel.
The balance between original and yours is really something. Are you don't know how to get your own MC plots?? Then you just slip him in original plot?? 😦😦😦 Hope next chap will be your MC true plot star, cause i like the original novel and the girls description 😋😋
It is the best copy paste in existence!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There is no MC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have tried 3 time to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It hurts me to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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DONT READ THIS, HONESTLY IM SURPRISED THIS AUTHOR DECIDE MAKE TDG FANFIC, BUTTTTTTT IM PRETTY SURE THIS AUTHOR JUST MAKE THIS NOVEL ON A RANDOM WHIM JUST TO FULLFILL HIS PROMISE TO US READER AS THIS IS FCKING 95% COPAS FROM THE ORIGINAL JUST WITH SOME POLISH HERE AND THERE. AND I THOUGHT THIS AUTHOR IS PRETTY SURE HE FORGPT THE 'MC' WHICH I THOUGHT IS CREATED JUST FOR FUN OF THE STORY AS THE FIRST 13 CHP IS FREAKING ALMOST SAME AS THE ORIGINAL ONE!!!! REGRET MY 3 POWER STONE WASTED HERE
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please for beginners, don't read this novel because it's a waste of your precious time. This novel only tells the TGD recount with the view of the 3rd person and the funny thing is that it is made as detailed as possible with the original TGD. So look for writers who are pure in making their novels, not copying the work of others for their benefit.
The story doesn’t follow the so called mc(lee) but follows the original story mc with few to no interaction between the two no changes and few differences to the original story to the point of almost being an exact copy with an slight twist to avoid copyright any other story would be better HAD Great potential but was sadly wasted
Droped!!!! the Mc is not even there, the author could've atleast made him into a teacher or something and giving Mc some role but no the author decided to make him a side kick and do nothing, it's a fanfic but the author is copying the original in the beginning, and then I dropped it at the beginning but seeing the Authors other novel I come back once in a while to check for some changes and hoping for some miracle but NOOO it's still the same all **** All about Nie lie, which if I want I can read the original nor a fanfic. I'm sorry Author, but I'm very disappointed and Also with the one piece story, why separate the Siblings??!!!!!!
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This novel is stupid . People are confused as to who MC is . Girls Nie Li gets it. Powers Nie Li gets it. MC is just like a side kick in this novel
I enjoyed your Naruto fanfic and the description of this one intrigued me but now I find myself struggling to get past chapter 19. My main problem here is like everyone else I believe you make Nie Lie to big of a main character. That in itself wouldn’t be to bad but all his situations and decisions are a copy and paste of the beginning of TDAG. MC seems to have designated him self to be a side character which I guess isn’t that bad but it really isn’t my preference at all.
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like the other stories from this author like the other stories from this author like the other stories from this author like the other stories from this author like the other stories from this author
Seion the LEGEND! Why don't you create something different with this novel? For example give recources to Nie Lee, Alchemy recipes, that soul pill or whatever, etc? And obviously tell Nie that you come from a different world and such?
How did this novel get 2.6 stars? Even giving it 1 star is too much.. .it is practically a copy of tdg. . AUTHOR did not even force himself to change something ... This is my first time wanting to insult an author so badly... WTF were u thinking about?! Such a waste. ..Really. .. It could have been a good novel but. .. For me this trash novel should not be rated but I wanted to lower ur rates as I find them too high in rapport of the work u have done which is basically a copy paste. .. Hope u ll use ur imagination next time...
I just don't know what to say u r really an ******* novelist the storyline is not developed well please just delete this novel million views are just for show other who think this novel is good they also read original one then come here. That's all I have to say
You are focusing too much on Nie Li rather than the protagonist which will get people bored fast as they already know what Nie Li is going to do for most part