Reviews of TODAG System In TODAG by Seion - Webnovel

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Slushy_Apollo

Novel was good around 3.5-4.0 stars but the author stopped writing all his novels and kept making excuses saying he is coming back and now he has disappeared for months

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hero_jovz

I thought this story would be interesting like the other's written by the author but it's a boring and can't understand who's the MC it look like he just added another MC in the story with a system

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Ivan_Kutsyy_2126

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LV 4

EtzernM

Another great story to read and enjoy, you want a weak mc that strives for the peak? Yeah that won't happen, the motifs of the MC are interesting and even if nie lee is used as a co protagonist it does not lower the value of the mc, is more of a way to keep the plot ongoing. My advice? Read it and don't let others tell you if the book is good or not, judge it and then you'll see how good this is.

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penuliskunpemula

this is a story about being a side character and helping nie li get a girl seion just made a story that he never made in his other stories, he has made mc very op, mc op but is limited, weak mc becomes op, and now he makes stories about mc as a side character. I'm sure later he will make a story about mc in NTR because it hasn't been in the other stories

LV 4

Absoluto

Basically Nie li's personal assistant...----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

LV 4

Wanderer24

your story here is just the same in the original story.... you just make your own character be a side character.. you even make him support nei li in the story.... you even give to nei li all of the first rate girls while he gets the second rates... why man he likes a slave or a servant serving his master for nothing in return.... is he a saint, an angel or maybe he is the true father of nei li?!😟😟😟

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HOot_wheels

I think this is the worst fanfic I've read. I can't find myself reading it. The story is divided with the MC and with ni lie. Lol. I'm sorry bro but it's a mo for me.

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ayushSwargari

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Silver1Savant

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LV 4

Kyle_Ebanks

Not worth reading .......... He focuses too much on Nie Li and not his OC.............. Its like hes a SIMP for Nie Li.......... I thought it would be good but i only wasted my precious time

LV 12

the_Harlequin

How did this novel get 2.6 stars? Even giving it 1 star is too much.. .it is practically a copy of tdg. . AUTHOR did not even force himself to change something ... This is my first time wanting to insult an author so badly... WTF were u thinking about?! Such a waste. ..Really. .. It could have been a good novel but. .. For me this trash novel should not be rated but I wanted to lower ur rates as I find them too high in rapport of the work u have done which is basically a copy paste. .. Hope u ll use ur imagination next time...

It's just no the development in later chapters sucks. I doubt know mc design. I hate the fact that he try to get ever girl nie li doesn't like it real is annoying

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Wee_Woo_2859

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M0011

no being offensive but that was a total waste of time. the story is almost copy paster and the MC is almost a side character he only appears if there is a quest

LV 13

KingSeyer

To people who are expecting mc to be main focus of the story then please don't read it cuz this is just a copy of the original novel with the mc being a side character which makes the whole thing trash beyond redemption😧😧

LV 1

akame_ga_kil

So so shitty. No sense of direction of the mc and the protagonist It is shitty. 🤬🤬🤬😡🤬😪😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬😡🤬🤭😡🤬😡🤭🤭😡🤭😡🤭😡🤭🤭😡🤭😡🤭😡

LV 3

Naruto_Sama

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LV 14

BlackChaosNyx

Try doing an ATG or BTTH one next. I think it would be interesting and there are plenty of fruit for the picking as far as harem wise. Plus, I like the cultivation system there too. Soul Land would be a good one too.

LV 14

DragonGod

Couldn't get past all the copy and paste. Not a worthwhile read at all. Waste of my time when you can't even tell who the MC is. If you want to read then go ahead but be prepared for a major disappointment.

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Cliff_kun_works

Hmm 2 stars over 100+ reviews idk how you wrote over 100 chapters. . .

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Suppa_Readah

Garbage crap Trash ass garbage 🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕1🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕Fuck u Fuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck uFuck u

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samialrehani

good work bro yes there are a lot of stuff that are copy past but there are also some things that you changed making the story interesting keep up the good work btw on all of your books as I read all of them and think they are all great

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Will_Caruso

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Spike009

This novel is stupid . People are confused as to who MC is . Girls Nie Li gets it. Powers Nie Li gets it. MC is just like a side kick in this novel