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THE CURSE AND THE SUCCUBUS SYSTEM
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"Ayush's fate is sealed when he unleashes a powerful technique from a ancient book, once locked away to contain its dark magic. The book, cursed by a powerful demon , held the secrets of the ' a forbidden technique capable of manipulating time .Driven by desperation, Ayush uses the technique to save a woman's life and his own, but unwittingly triggers the curse.
As the curse takes hold, Ayush finds himself bound to a cursed system that slowly transforms him into a succubus. The system, fueled by his own life force, corrupts his body and mind, threatening to consume his soul. With each passing moment, Ayush feels himself losing control, his thoughts and actions influenced by the dark magic and cursed system succubus system .
Will he find a way to break the curse and reverse the transformation, or will he succumb to the darkness and embrace his newfound nature as a succubus? The journey ahead promises to be treacherous, as Ayush navigates the blurred lines between good and evil, and the fate of his very existence hangs precariously in the balance."
it contents r18 scene , sex, slavery , forced sex , love , fight, cultivation , system
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The characterization and development so far are very good. The story is well paced also
The storyline seemed promising at first glance, but it quickly devolved into a convoluted mess of clichés and predictable plot twists. The characters lacked depth and development, making it impossible
The storyline seemed promising at first glance, but it quickly devolved into a convoluted mess of clichés and predictable plot twists. The characters lacked depth and development, making it impossible
Great take on a system with a drawback unlike normal systems that just make you op. I can’t wait to see how this story goes.
The novel lacked depth in character development and the plot felt predictable. It failed to engage me emotionally or intellectually, leaving me disappointed overall
I wish the good of him prevails, its harder to preserve kindness its easier to be evil.
Can't continue pàst ch3.. just bad writing. No description for scenes, incoherent flow of events, no characterisation, and downright mtl level dialogue writing author has a very rudimentary understanding of writing and the language in general, should really focus on it if he wants to continue in this... at the very least check for the grammar before posting through a proofreader
Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is NOT satisfactory!!
It’s……. Not for me. But all the best author…. **and i skipped chap 27 too. Tee hee hee**