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Can't continue pàst ch3.. just bad writing. No description for scenes, incoherent flow of events, no characterisation, and downright mtl level dialogue writing author has a very rudimentary understanding of writing and the language in general, should really focus on it if he wants to continue in this... at the very least check for the grammar before posting through a proofreader
Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is NOT satisfactory!!
It’s……. Not for me. But all the best author…. **and i skipped chap 27 too. Tee hee hee**
I don't know how later chapters are, the paid Dating was a nope for me, mabey i will try to Read it again.
the story plot is good,but it feels like it's hurried. The dialogue can be written a little more well. it's kinda confusing
Some of the chapters have an ok writing. Others have a really, really bad one. The story itself seems interesting, so as long as the author works on his writing skills, things should be great. Good luck!
Needs lots of improvements in the language and grammar. The broken sentences makes it hard to read
I wish the good of him prevails, its harder to preserve kindness its easier to be evil.
Can't continue pàst ch3.. just bad writing. No description for scenes, incoherent flow of events, no characterisation, and downright mtl level dialogue writing author has a very rudimentary understanding of writing and the language in general, should really focus on it if he wants to continue in this... at the very least check for the grammar before posting through a proofreader
Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is NOT satisfactory!!
It’s……. Not for me. But all the best author…. **and i skipped chap 27 too. Tee hee hee**
I don't know how later chapters are, the paid Dating was a nope for me, mabey i will try to Read it again.
the story plot is good,but it feels like it's hurried. The dialogue can be written a little more well. it's kinda confusing
Some of the chapters have an ok writing. Others have a really, really bad one. The story itself seems interesting, so as long as the author works on his writing skills, things should be great. Good luck!
Needs lots of improvements in the language and grammar. The broken sentences makes it hard to read
I wish the good of him prevails, its harder to preserve kindness its easier to be evil.