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(New author so I'm just writing this new idea in my free time)
Join Daniel Shade, an average Mechanical Engineering University student, as he gets a second chance at life. After a freak accident he finds himself waking up in a new but all so familiar world.
This story is a reincarnation story with a main character sent to the Marvel world with Technomancer powers/abilities.
*still getting used to writing my stories so helpful criticism is welcomed. just don't expect a regular update schedule until I figure out where I want to go with this.
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it was good at the beginning, his abilities, his progress, productivity, it was good, however ruined by revealing things to his parents. I also hate the fact that he waste his potential for the sake of being a Hero, for the better of the world, stupid pathetic childish naïve thinking
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really nice novels, it started at a really nice pace, he has really good powers, which might not add anything to his arsenal for immediate combat, but well the current year is 2002 so no need for that too, but the potential his power has is tremendous, he also uses his brain very nicely, all in all, its a really good novel, and has really good potential.
Posting a small chunk of a chapter and then saying you can continue reading on his patreon(ch.23). The story hasn't even developed enough to justify a patreon even
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I just discovered this little gem and you can be proud of it, hard things to say on this site but I find the idea of wanting to become a hero at all costs completely ridiculous and childish, no need for a cape and to run around New York to be a hero Helping people with his business is much better. I hope the MC is not going to be part of the Avengers otherwise it will ruin everything The Avengers are an unprofessional time bomb. It's just going to waste her time. He could hack into Wakanda and use the data to advance medicine and things. If he wants to wear a costume then he just has to do it for help IronMan with IronMonger and enjoy having arc reactors and other technological parts,Go to Harlem and steal Bruce's blood and fight the abomination, playing heroes will be a secondary objective but will give him a good image. Help spiderman with the goblin, and have Peter as employee. Developed W.E and beat Tony in his own Stark expo. Perfected B.W so SHIELD won't notice Baby photos and you loll, Make a believable story behind. SHIELDRA is going to want to search to manipulate him like Stark so watch the spy and have a real lab in his basement, surrounded by vibranium and impossible to hack for the SHIELD. put a tracker on the loki scepter and steal it from Hydra. Learn magic or build your own teleportation portal With these clear memories of the movies he can travel to different planets, Xander and steal stuff like the power stone on MORAG. Stealing alien technologies ect.Take out an element before Tony and take the glory, an alien element that already exists. Combination of nanotechnologies. Making a new team, the Avengers are not the only ones, CAge, Jessica, Daredevil, Spiderman, Save mutants and give them work and a suit with a hidden face and therefore secret identity. I can't wait to read more.
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Evaluation: Below Average WQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5 US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5 WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
Calidad de escritura (3/5), actualización de estabilidad (1/5), desarrollo de historia (2/5), diseño de personajes (2/5) Fondo de mundo (2/5)
Author is obsessed with putting Dcu elements and characters in MCU. It’s honestly a bit of a waste. The powers have potential, and the MC uses them like someone who just got his powers. I like that he isn’t instantly OP.
MINOR SPOILERS ABOUT POWERS/PLOT! (Didn't hide review due to spoilers, because the spoiler is very minor in my opinion) I cannot claim to be a professional or even above avg. on reviewing books/novels. I consistently try to find good novels that have technology as the super power. What I've typically seen is that the MC seems to skip a lot of crucial steps in progression to what I assume is to just speed up the plot. I've enjoyed reading your characters thought process/actions he takes to build his company so far and thinking further than just making the best tech by starting from the resources themselves and not limiting himself to what we can recycle as of now. The way he uses his abilities, the length of time his training takes to get to an "Intermediate/Advanced" lvl and even him branching out into different fields to take advantage of his mind instead of just relying on his tech makes your MC seem more realistic (If you can call a super powered individual in a fictional universe realistic). Anyway, judging from the upload times and the reminder of this being a new thing for you in the description I know that writing isn't a top priority for you, but I would absolutely love to watch you find a genuine passion/obsession for writing this story and make this at least a decently long (300+ chapters) story.
this is a great story so far, I love where this is going. the writting is good love how you intigrated Bruce Wayne's character into the story. although, how are you going to do his background as you know SHEILD is going to run so many checks on him.
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I currently finished all of the chapters as of October 19th, 2021. This story is absolutely incredible and has a lot of potential if updates are continued. The only issue is the stability of updates and besides that, everything is amazing.
It is good, better than alot of other fanfics I have started reading. So yes, I would recommend giving it a try before deciding. Keep up the good work author!
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Has the potential to be great keep it up and don’t drop this novel Rueurhfhdbdfbdbdjdjddbdbdbdbfhddjfjdjfhffhfhfhfhfbfhfdhfhfhf
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