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Supreme artist system (new life old dreams)
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A man in his mid-20s got sent to the wheel of reincarnation for his soul to reincarnate thanks to the mistake of a little employee of the gods he got a chance to live a second life with some perks and his memory intact. Follow Ace as he carves his path in his new life!
a little message from the author here: this is my first try at writing so please be gentle with me xD also English is not my first language so if I make any mistake and my prose seems basic I'm sorry and I'll try to grow better as the story goes. Thank you!
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The grammar is really bad. It's also hard to tell who's talking a lot of the times, there needs do be less of those long paragraphs because it makes the dialogue difficult to read. But besides all that I am enjoying it so far and I hope the author continues and improves.
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I love this one of the more romantic works I've seen in this genre of rebirth entertainment I've read I just hope the author pics it up again
super fire I'm a fan but please improve the writing other than that everything else is amazing go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go