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super fire I'm a fan but please improve the writing other than that everything else is amazing go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go
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The grammar is really bad. It's also hard to tell who's talking a lot of the times, there needs do be less of those long paragraphs because it makes the dialogue difficult to read. But besides all that I am enjoying it so far and I hope the author continues and improves.
shameless author review here so that i can at least have 1 review on my work xD
I love this one of the more romantic works I've seen in this genre of rebirth entertainment I've read I just hope the author pics it up again
super fire I'm a fan but please improve the writing other than that everything else is amazing go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go
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The grammar is really bad. It's also hard to tell who's talking a lot of the times, there needs do be less of those long paragraphs because it makes the dialogue difficult to read. But besides all that I am enjoying it so far and I hope the author continues and improves.
shameless author review here so that i can at least have 1 review on my work xD
I love this one of the more romantic works I've seen in this genre of rebirth entertainment I've read I just hope the author pics it up again