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When Dave died, he wasn't expecting to be reborn.
His shock only grew when he found out the world he was reborn in was a novel he once read, supergene.
But unlike supergene, just one tiny detail was off. Han Yan was born before Han sen.
The only advantage he had in this new world is some information on a novel he read years ago. How will he fare?
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The opening phrase is generic, failing to provide any insight into the theme, plot, or protagonist. Unfortunately, the rest of the chapter is the same, so it's skipped entirely as it seems irrelevant. The protagonist, who lacks any discernible personality, exhibits a disappointingly casual and ordinary attitude throughout the narrative. Then it's followed by abrupt time skips in the early stages of the story, leaving the reader disoriented and disconnected from the plot. The storytelling style is not engaging, that leans heavily on telling you the events but never shows you anything. Furthermore, the protagonist's ability to acquire private information with mere inquiries seems implausible and unrealistic. It's baffling why we should care about a character who possesses no battle power, strength, abilities, or unique qualities. The dialogues between the protagonist and his so-called "friend" lacks depth, it's not at all interesting. The protagonist's family adds nothing of value to the plot, making their existence feel entirely unnecessary. The story should have started at chapter 3 when the protagonist uses the teleporter explaining his reincarnation, sparing readers from the tedious and uneventful beginning. By this point, all interest was lost. The importance of finding information and journeying to another shelter at the other side of the continent, arriving at the right time period without much explanation seemed contrived and unrealistic. The dealing with the merchant don't make sense. System messages are not in brackets. The lack of logical thinking and planning by the protagonist, combined with his inexplicable confidence, made him an unconvincing character. The absence of detailed environmental descriptions and scene transitions further hindered any immersion. In summary, this novel is a casual read, while the writing itself is decent, the story's flat and unimpactful.
Super Gene is one of my all time favorite stories. i really hope you do well.Please no harem, it would ruin the story in an instant.
finally a stable super gene fanfic i really love the novel and i really appreciate your hard work thank you for this piece of art
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Excellent to see another Super Gene fanfic, there's honeslty not enough out there. Hopefully there the update rate continues and doesnt stall like most of the other ones. Well written and the main character is very compelling. Definitely looking forward to future updates
one of the few super gene fanfictions i have read. it is a great spinoff of the original that i hope continues to upload chapters! looking forward to the next chapter! keep up the good work author!
Thank you that you start writing this novel. I waited a long time for fanfic about this story. I hope that you not stop 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Awesome fic keep up the great work [img=strong][img=strong][img=More pls][img=More pls]
continue fan fiction. ... .. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The Fanfic is awesome, I love the way the author use the first Geno art and create new environment and species. I hope you won't drop it author. [img=recommend]
I am reviewing after reading the chapter number 20. I think that the autor is making an excellent job with this history, with nice descriptions of nature and space, while that is not the main attractive of the history it adds a good flavour to it, there are many, many things in the Original History, writting about them all is very complicated and in my opinion this autor is making it to be something very enjoyable. If you are a fan of Super Gene, then this is the fanfic that you were waiting for.
I can't enjoy it as much since the last time I read SuperGene, was more than 5 yrs ago. It's still well-written and my only complaint would be the MC's talent is average compared to Han Sen.
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I just hope this fanfic doesn't fall. Good luck writing this fanfic........................................................................................................................................
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Finally a super gene fiction i read the novel years ago and really like it i hope you to complete this fic. And thank you for your hard work