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Re: Destiny
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when romance, action, adventure, r18, yandere, and family betrayal are put together
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synopsis 2:
As the law of absurdity dictates, people are born different, may it be horns, facial features, BloodLines, or abilities.
however, dí lún(Dylan) had the worst "luck" of them all; getting his trust broken by his friends/family, he tried moving on in life by moving out on his own but he was a kid(10-year-old) what could he know.
kind of a spoiler later he makes a new friend unknown to him, won't tell you their gender/or personality
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now what you expect me to do/ know I shall not know because this stuff is new to me the only reason I could have written this is that the stories/novels I read are not to my taste or are just too bland and I just wanted people with the same taste as me to have something they can enjoy now the
character development will be slow I think because I'm new to this don't worry about the world-building I will try to make it decent, oh and I will try my absolute best to write well so you readers can understand it.
nowhere are the credits first my inspiration goes out to Ru_ri
they did a pretty good job on the "My family are yandere's" before it got rebooted and if you are reading this part my story will have some of the same elements, Sorry Ru_ri no offense but I took some of your ideas and added them to mine, one thing I Will was not good at writing light smut, aka fan service I also haven't written, or imagined written R-18 stuff but I swear on my word I will try.
English is one of the four languages that I learned in school
but I promise there will be errors in my writings sorry in advance.
cover, not mine so *Credits* to the artist
my upload schedule will be messed up because of collage
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Hey guys shameless Author review trust me to give it a shot when I start uploading I promise it will be worth your time, also I hope this story ends up as good as lust knight you should go over there and read their book I don't want my main character as much of a women collector though. no offense to anyone though, to next peace
The story doesn't go anywhere. First the naming sense was where, like Dylan and then you add (Dy Lun) to it like a chinese author wannabe. The punctuations are terrible, I saw some dialogues without the quote tag. Such mistakes should not be allowed. And the story is weird and confusing. The plot was completely nonexistent. They just stayed there without going anywhere talking about vampire and stuff. And the side characters literally serve no purpose at all. They better off dead because they add nothing to the story.