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Hey guys shameless Author review trust me to give it a shot when I start uploading I promise it will be worth your time, also I hope this story ends up as good as lust knight you should go over there and read their book I don't want my main character as much of a women collector though. no offense to anyone though, to next peace
The story doesn't go anywhere. First the naming sense was where, like Dylan and then you add (Dy Lun) to it like a chinese author wannabe. The punctuations are terrible, I saw some dialogues without the quote tag. Such mistakes should not be allowed. And the story is weird and confusing. The plot was completely nonexistent. They just stayed there without going anywhere talking about vampire and stuff. And the side characters literally serve no purpose at all. They better off dead because they add nothing to the story.
Hey guys shameless Author review trust me to give it a shot when I start uploading I promise it will be worth your time, also I hope this story ends up as good as lust knight you should go over there and read their book I don't want my main character as much of a women collector though. no offense to anyone though, to next peace
The story doesn't go anywhere. First the naming sense was where, like Dylan and then you add (Dy Lun) to it like a chinese author wannabe. The punctuations are terrible, I saw some dialogues without the quote tag. Such mistakes should not be allowed. And the story is weird and confusing. The plot was completely nonexistent. They just stayed there without going anywhere talking about vampire and stuff. And the side characters literally serve no purpose at all. They better off dead because they add nothing to the story.