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Naruto: Older Brother
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What if Naruto wasn't the only one born the night of the Kyūbi attack, what if he had an older brother who wants nothing more than to keep his Otōto and the ones he loves safe, rated M for mature scenes later
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Great story so far and the characters development are good. who's going to be in the harem?. Also are you open to suggestions or are they already decided? keep up the good work, hope you upload more soon.👌👌👍
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Me parece interesante la historia, a veces me cansa de leer, pero como no hay apuro me lo paso bien leyendolo. Me gustaria ver mas de la relacion de los hermanos, un poquito de romance puro, pero me agrada. Aunque es un poco triste que lleve una semana sin actualización
I have read everything that this author has posted and of there works this is my favorite. .......................................................
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I love this fanfic but if you are going for the harem route build it slow and don't just let the girls easily accept each other , make the oc work for it.[img=recommend]
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Hello there PsyChotiX556. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters every day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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I've read about 10 or 11 chapters or maybe less. I have no problems with it except that there's something about the story that doesn't make me wanna read further. Something makes me disinterested. I can't really point out what. Maybe it's the fact that the author used too many clichés for my liking. For example: 1. Of all the possible characters, it was Anko who was assigned as Kenta's sensei. I mean whenever Naruto or any oc wants extra training, it's always Anko who is assigned to them. Are all other shinobi dead or something? 2. Sasuke was given a female twin who falls for the MC. She is a saint while Sasuke himself is made into nothing but an absolute shit. Remember Joffrey Baratheon? Sasuke is that, except his mother doesn't dote on him and all of his psychopathic tendencies are held in his mind. He's arrogant to the point it's infuriating. Author, I get it. I also hate Sasuke. But make it a little more canonish if possible. The current Sasuke is a major turn off. 3. MC trained his ass off and became so strong that he could defeat a chunin like Mizuki in the 1st year of his academy. But, what about Naruto? No development for him. Despite knowing Kage bushin, Naruto still failed his graduation exam because his chakra was somehow messed up by Mizuki. Kenta knows what kind of an ass Mizuki is. Did he never warn Naruto? The whiskered idiot was still fooled by Mizuki into stealing the scroll of seals. That was the final nail in the coffin. If this was a little harsh then I am sorry. Wasn't meant to be. Am too tired of reading the same kind of things over and over again.
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