In Bleach with an OP Skill

LV 14

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211

No awareness of himself and his involvement A wish fulfilment story because if you had more than two brain cells you would know that none of what was written would have happened with his arrogants I mean yeah you have a strong ability but so what you’re nothing compared to other people and yet you still go around doing what you want Not even the main character could do that let alone the main antagonist like seriously no could do that you would get killed pretty fast

LV 4

Phantom_178

Bruh....not to be rude or anything, but I think you're rushing with this story. I mean I understand that you're trying to make MC op as hell but still man, at least give him some actual time to develop his character properly. But a good and average story, keep writing....

LV 12

Yvcme

downgrade from the previous novel dudes a total cornball

LV 3

INFINITESTORAGE

I don't know how to say this gently but... Author needs to interract with people more. The MC dialogue is sometimes forced and cringe. Social Life seems almost null

LV 1

Mastersun

This story is the bottom of an infuriating hero with a character that he copies from youth films from the 90s about schoolchildren and students where caricatured tough guys use slang all the time and behave comically arrogantly, and the plot boils down to he came and saw and won without any problems, be it enemies or girls.

LV 13

Mindlessreader25

Author is yoruichi in the harem? and is mc the strongest?or will become one..?

LV 2

demonfield

brain dead MC mayuri normally kill him the second he talk back autor go re-read bleach

LV 1

NeaCambelt

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LV 14

THE_BOI_NC

I hate the MC, which says a bit Honestly. I usally over look brain dead MC but geez this guy hurts to read.

LV 4

Kwika

I love the mc and his ability but 22 chapters in and the plot is unchanged in the last one I thought maybe it would, then it corrected itself like the author is unable to come up with a plot of his own. Add that to the fact the author retells the og story of bleach every time it switches pov and it’s starting to feel like a waste of time.

LV 4

Vidhan_Bhardwaj

you must think its cool to use derogatory language for religious figures huh

LV 4

Humbuub

MC & Dialogues are pretty shit. Not wasting my time.

LV 15

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR

this novel has yuri in it, so not for me

LV 1

Elemise

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LV 1

Maycon_Henrique_10

A sua história realmente é muito boa espero que continue escrevendo já que sei que muitos escritores têm dificuldades e acabam desistindo espero que não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas que não entendem a dificuldade de escrever

LV 2

AsDAKRENS

Honestly speaking about the story, although it's still a little early to have a full opinion on it. I can say with certainty that it has a lot of potential and future, it is exciting to wait to witness its development.

LV 4

Swikong

Disrespecting To Others Culture, Tradition & Their Way of Life., Is not Great! Wanted To Give 0 Star Due To No Option, 1 Star Given.