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Escreva uma avaliaçãoTrash!!!!!!!!!!like just kys bruh this is the worst fkin fic ever on this sight...I mean you need to actively be trying to make the reader's experience as bad as possible for a fic to turn out like this and this is me putting it as nicely as possible...
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The mc is so dumb you amde every character have 3Iq like "when i was a kid" dude everyone think you were created by Mayuri why say that
It’s surprising that mayuri Hasn’t killed him at the beginning , the way he was talking back at him 💀 Also really bro ? This mc is a week minded child an it is hard to care for him . Also he keeps R18 every character in the show , like how are they all ok with being with him , this isn’t high school DxD or some hentai bullshit , this is bleach. At least in your one piece story it was forced and he was the villain and even then the girls tried to either betray him or escape and he had to either break them or threaten them with their loved ones and even then they were just his toys 🧸 And he had a goal , a crazy evil goal yes but there was a “ reason” or a method to his madness. What does this MC want and what is his goal ? Because I honestly don’t know and don’t care to know 💀… Also most of the characters he’s been with or is involved with , have someone they are emotionally invested in , or are straight up in love with someone or they are already with someone You expect me to believe that they’ll drop all that for some kid that was just born 🤮🤢 on some Diddy shit 🤡 I liked your previous work , even tho it had flaws and was hoping for a good bleach fanfic from you but I was highly disappointed ☹️ You could do better and I know you can do better , I hope to see your new work after you finish this one and I hope I might enjoy it . Good luck with everything but this fanfic isn’t it . It just ain’t it chief 💀…
I read 30 pages. It was a good start until the 18+ scenes started. It became more and the quality of the writing became worse and worse. Unfortunately...
Stop deleting the reviews. AI story. Don't waste your time. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮Even the Synopsis and author's replies are written with chatgpt.
Uses bot. Like literally how is this getting more popular if not for bots. The story is whack. The author rushes shit like hell and writes people like ai chat bots
Disrespecting To Others Culture, Tradition & Their Way of Life., Is not Great! Wanted To Give 0 Star Due To No Option, 1 Star Given.
Just a bad story , even wish fulfilment had to make a bit of sense .The author doesn't even know the personality of Mayuri or any other bleach character at all....
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It’s a good story but lately it’s just has become idiotic he’s f$&k¡ñg girls left and right. . Seems like it’s author has changed. MC has forgotten his catchphrase. MC doesn’t do jokes anymore. . Or is it because mc has become too strong too soon that author doesn’t know what to do about it and it has become something else. 😅 .
I hate the MC, which says a bit Honestly. I usally over look brain dead MC but geez this guy hurts to read.
I will be honest this story will be nice if is not drop at some point. I hope you will continus this story to is end. ....
A sua história realmente é muito boa espero que continue escrevendo já que sei que muitos escritores têm dificuldades e acabam desistindo espero que não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas que não entendem a dificuldade de escrever
I don't know how to say this gently but... Author needs to interract with people more. The MC dialogue is sometimes forced and cringe. Social Life seems almost null
This story is the top of an amaze balls hero with a character that he gets inspiration from youth films from the vintage era about our delicate childhood stories and students where caricatured tough guys use modern language all the time and behave comically arrogantly, and the plot boils down to he came and saw and won without any problems, be it enemies or girls.
Revelar SpoilerThis story is the bottom of an infuriating hero with a character that he copies from youth films from the 90s about schoolchildren and students where caricatured tough guys use slang all the time and behave comically arrogantly, and the plot boils down to he came and saw and won without any problems, be it enemies or girls.
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Revelar SpoilerI love the mc and his ability but 22 chapters in and the plot is unchanged in the last one I thought maybe it would, then it corrected itself like the author is unable to come up with a plot of his own. Add that to the fact the author retells the og story of bleach every time it switches pov and it’s starting to feel like a waste of time.
No awareness of himself and his involvement A wish fulfilment story because if you had more than two brain cells you would know that none of what was written would have happened with his arrogants I mean yeah you have a strong ability but so what you’re nothing compared to other people and yet you still go around doing what you want Not even the main character could do that let alone the main antagonist like seriously no could do that you would get killed pretty fast
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Trash!!!!!!!!!!like just kys bruh this is the worst fkin fic ever on this sight...I mean you need to actively be trying to make the reader's experience as bad as possible for a fic to turn out like this and this is me putting it as nicely as possible...
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The mc is so dumb you amde every character have 3Iq like "when i was a kid" dude everyone think you were created by Mayuri why say that
It’s surprising that mayuri Hasn’t killed him at the beginning , the way he was talking back at him 💀 Also really bro ? This mc is a week minded child an it is hard to care for him . Also he keeps R18 every character in the show , like how are they all ok with being with him , this isn’t high school DxD or some hentai bullshit , this is bleach. At least in your one piece story it was forced and he was the villain and even then the girls tried to either betray him or escape and he had to either break them or threaten them with their loved ones and even then they were just his toys 🧸 And he had a goal , a crazy evil goal yes but there was a “ reason” or a method to his madness. What does this MC want and what is his goal ? Because I honestly don’t know and don’t care to know 💀… Also most of the characters he’s been with or is involved with , have someone they are emotionally invested in , or are straight up in love with someone or they are already with someone You expect me to believe that they’ll drop all that for some kid that was just born 🤮🤢 on some Diddy shit 🤡 I liked your previous work , even tho it had flaws and was hoping for a good bleach fanfic from you but I was highly disappointed ☹️ You could do better and I know you can do better , I hope to see your new work after you finish this one and I hope I might enjoy it . Good luck with everything but this fanfic isn’t it . It just ain’t it chief 💀…
I read 30 pages. It was a good start until the 18+ scenes started. It became more and the quality of the writing became worse and worse. Unfortunately...
Stop deleting the reviews. AI story. Don't waste your time. 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮Even the Synopsis and author's replies are written with chatgpt.
Uses bot. Like literally how is this getting more popular if not for bots. The story is whack. The author rushes shit like hell and writes people like ai chat bots
Disrespecting To Others Culture, Tradition & Their Way of Life., Is not Great! Wanted To Give 0 Star Due To No Option, 1 Star Given.
Just a bad story , even wish fulfilment had to make a bit of sense .The author doesn't even know the personality of Mayuri or any other bleach character at all....
Pue sa mère même un idiot fait mieux nul a chier arrête d'écrire si c'est pour prendre de la merde 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
It’s a good story but lately it’s just has become idiotic he’s f$&k¡ñg girls left and right. . Seems like it’s author has changed. MC has forgotten his catchphrase. MC doesn’t do jokes anymore. . Or is it because mc has become too strong too soon that author doesn’t know what to do about it and it has become something else. 😅 .
I hate the MC, which says a bit Honestly. I usally over look brain dead MC but geez this guy hurts to read.
I will be honest this story will be nice if is not drop at some point. I hope you will continus this story to is end. ....
A sua história realmente é muito boa espero que continue escrevendo já que sei que muitos escritores têm dificuldades e acabam desistindo espero que não ligue para os comentários negativos só são pessoas que não entendem a dificuldade de escrever
I don't know how to say this gently but... Author needs to interract with people more. The MC dialogue is sometimes forced and cringe. Social Life seems almost null
This story is the top of an amaze balls hero with a character that he gets inspiration from youth films from the vintage era about our delicate childhood stories and students where caricatured tough guys use modern language all the time and behave comically arrogantly, and the plot boils down to he came and saw and won without any problems, be it enemies or girls.
Revelar SpoilerThis story is the bottom of an infuriating hero with a character that he copies from youth films from the 90s about schoolchildren and students where caricatured tough guys use slang all the time and behave comically arrogantly, and the plot boils down to he came and saw and won without any problems, be it enemies or girls.
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Revelar SpoilerI love the mc and his ability but 22 chapters in and the plot is unchanged in the last one I thought maybe it would, then it corrected itself like the author is unable to come up with a plot of his own. Add that to the fact the author retells the og story of bleach every time it switches pov and it’s starting to feel like a waste of time.
No awareness of himself and his involvement A wish fulfilment story because if you had more than two brain cells you would know that none of what was written would have happened with his arrogants I mean yeah you have a strong ability but so what you’re nothing compared to other people and yet you still go around doing what you want Not even the main character could do that let alone the main antagonist like seriously no could do that you would get killed pretty fast
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