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A man that never found his purpose in life even at his last moments in his deathbed with his family surrounding him, he still felt an emptiness in his heart, and with deep regrets, he finally closed his eyes for one last time.. or so he thought.
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well it's a wish fulfilment fan-fic of the highest order in which tensions and stakes don't exist. It has a shop feature which takes out the struggle element as well. The tag says that the mc is smart which is technically true if everyone around you is make other characters deliberately not reach the MC's level. plot development is still in infancy as not a great many chapters have been released.
Great just great. If you ignore small mistakes in grammar, this fanfiction is the best. Totally recommend it. just read it..................
If a kid gets this OP without raising red flags everywhere in a Ninja village than that village has failed. He hasn’t even seen one class of school but is doing missions now. Clan leader will listen and support him unconditionally despite his age and it being impossible to know of some details he speaks about. Another fanfic where the authors giving the Mc full control without anyone being none the wiser.
at first it was interesting to read, even very much, a system with its own innovations and an interesting trick of rewinding time, but ... it quickly turned into something incomprehensible, there was no description at all of the progress of the protagonist, improvement of his abilities, dialogues lasting dozens of chapters, as if I was reading a novel not about the world of shinobi, then interest began to fall and like the cherry on the cake ... in my opinion absolutely useless and completely without the potential of the ability of the mangeku ms, chains? Seriously? the ability to control and create emotions in enemies? ahahah pfft And in the end, I think you can remove the "system" from the tags, since in 40+ chapters it appeared only once, and even then with useless rewards for 3 tasks, nothing else happened, right the author? the result, from a great idea for the system and a good start, slipped to a drop, bb
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Truly disappointing... Has a good start but the author ruin it by making it a one man novel... What i mean is it always goes how the mc want no consequence for his action and all other people are just there for props. They dont have character, they're bland if you get what i mean..basically this novel is about a kid who has a system and playing survival with bots in naruto setting.
you know the story is bad since reading the first two chapters it made me feel nauseated , what kind of weed does the author smoke , the story is trassh ( I poisoned myself by reading the next 50 chapters🤮🖕)
im going to go ahead and give this a perfect rating. there might be a few mistakes here or there but easily overlooked. Its a positive, optimistic, wish fulfillment fanfic thats doing a great job at keeping the story interesting and upbeat. I personally dislike forced tragedy, emotionless drivel, and evil aligned MCs, its a cop out for easy writing by boring authors and this story isn't that. Keep it up!
this is a poorly made phantasy without in-depth knowledge about naruto story. so many mistakes in fact for example: 1). in ROOT the members dont have any tongue seal. 2). Danzo is incredibly nerfed with lower iq.(acceptable) 3). Itachi and shisui are made brain dead idiot through character int stats nerf. 4). World characters reaction doesn't seem realistic but dumb.( it feels like dead characters without any internal struggle but a "YES MAN" and from Xianxia/chinese faceslap writing style format. 5). The gamer system is only to fill plot hole is understandable but poorly implemented. 6).Most importantly it does not have the naruto worldly vibe. But more leaning towards Chinese Xianxia/wuxia family fighting for power vibe. 7). the gamer system and MC growth heavily dependant on plot hole. Wherever any inconsistency found readers can only attribute everything on the system. Highly non balance and non realistic. After all the cringe /unrealistic dialogue, it makes me wonder since this writing style absolutely cannot be from the naruto world then why not just blow everything out of proportion? my advice is if you really cannot write an immersive naruto self insert then DONT. It would be better to stick with the gamer system for the world background generated by gamer system. THIS WAY>>the author can make as many cringy/unrealistic diaglouge more adaptable for readers.
author, do you understand how stupid the part with the prophecy looks!? if Jiraiya received a new prophecy, he should have received it last time, but then there was no question about it. and in general, the story arc with the "great evil" is idiotic. I've been your loyal reader for almost a year, from now on, I'm your ex-ex and disappointed reader. ciao.
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A weird name is a turn off for me. I can't imagine people would put their own name in a fanfic. Tho, I do imagine it if I'm in Naruto's world but putting your own name is kinda cringey. Anyways, good luck with the fanfic.
I normally don't give a book 1 star easily, but this is really ridiculous. I read 9 chapters full of gaps in the story, I found it so ridiculous that I couldn't bear to read it. I don't want to disrespect the author, but what he wrote doesn't make any sense, I'm sorry.
Most illogical fic I have ever read in my life. How can you make it so bad? Makes no sense please stop
I am very disapointet a op kid is not funny why not make the mc the same generation like kakashi or shisui/itachi there makes nothing rly a sense he wasn‘t even in school und he is stronger then anthor ect
This is my opinion don't be angry. I like the story at first because i like the MC characteristic 1.emontieles(good Because his emotion cant block him for using logic) 2.preety smart(can use his ability for his adventege) 3.neutral(it what i think at first 😀) But when the story progress MC is how i said it BECOME DUMB like a wanabe shonen MC. 1.he let his emotion block his ability to think logicaly😤(so expect something that shonen mc Will do doing dumb s*it that can make them dead if not because the mighty plot armor.i don't why the MC doing something like this event thought he know that it Will make him Dead) 2.from always doing something with his brain to braindead🤮 3.mc become a good guy(event thought not a wanabe Hero but close enough. So don't expect something smart and ruthless like yami(ho*y Joker)if you a fan of anti Hero smart MC. I don't tell you to not read it you can read it if you like it,this is just my opinion i like neutral/evil smart MC who Will not die very fast id not because the help of the mighty plot armor. 👌👌👌👌👌🙏👍
Who erased all of the one star comments. ...................................................................................................
Save and load= no stake. This kind of power are perfect if your story have mistery elements, which this story doesn't have because mc are reincarnated to world he already know.
This story has a lot of potential and with a little editing here and there for the grammar it could have been better. Unfortunately the author advanced his plot way too quickly and with the MC being only 5 years old became where too illogical to read. Many times I've read a certain chapter, and in it the is MC making certain actions with the surrounding people reacting to it, and it's all good and fine, even enjoyable, until I remember the MC is only 5 years old and then I start questioning the ridiculousness in this fanfic even though it is a Naruto fanfiction... So for those who can ignore the logical twist of a 5 year old opening businesses everywhere and leading strategically his clan with everyone simply accepting it, than this fanfic is for you. And if you are like me where this simply give you an headache then this is definitely not for you.
In my opinion this is the best Naruto fanfiction there is right now. I give it all my power stones because it's 10/10 ! I think if you like naruto you should definitely read it .
Had an interesting beginning with a good, slow but sure, system. The mc worked hard and everything seemed cool but the author decided to ruin it by having the mc befriend Naruto before telling him everything (parents, kurama, etc) and then there were no consequences for it despite the author repeatedly pointing out that it was a bad idea and that the anbu or root would come for him for doing that exact thing. Odd way to ruin a story but it is what it is I suppose. (also like all terrible naruto fics he instantly befriended Kurama with no trouble lol)