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In Honkai Star Rail With A Dating System

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Autor: ThatGoodStuff

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Bochang finds himself transported to another world, and upon opening his eyes, he encounters two Stellaron Hunters - Silver Wolf and Kafka.

[Dating Options Activated.]

[Option 1: In this moment... there's no more time for hesitation. Shout at Kafka, "Mom!" - Completion Reward: Randomly obtain the power of one out of twelve talismans.]

[Option 2: Shouting is unrefined and may startle others. Instead, try gently saying, "Kafka?" - Completion Reward: Get beat up by Kafka.]

[Option 3: As someone who suddenly appeared, perhaps you should act normal by expressing confusion: "Who... are you?" - Completion Reward: Unlock the Abundance Fate Path and gain a random Imaginary ability.]

Feeling powerless, Bochang internally protested, What kind of dating options are these? Seriously, there's not even a hint of romance involved!

However, it wasn't until some time later that the black-haired youth realized the tragic reality, that these supposed "Dating Options" were actually "Troublesome Dating Options."

Watching as girls like Stelle, March 7th, and Himeko circled around him, Bochang thought, "I want to fall in love."

Dating Options replied, "No, you don't."

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LunaKindred

the translation is good and readable. but in my opinion you should change the MC's name to japanese or english name to make it comfortable [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]

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Lechuzape

For the translator and readers of this fic. I warn you that its ending is disappointing, abrupt and accelerated. The original creator gave up.

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Kronos_
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In addition to having a great translation, the story itself is very fun (I hope it stays that way) with very interesting character development

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Gojo_sensei

great novel but can you send the original link

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raphailiart

Дуже гарна історія, дуже цікаво, але головний герой трохи дурачок, а так історія дуже гарна, мені подобається ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

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SlimeinTrap

Good translation keep it up

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Foursaken

Brooo this shit got the potential! Where's the rest of the story?! ..................................................... .....................................................

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Celebron

Parece uma história muito boa, e a tradução está excelente. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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MKKcalb

It's really fun and interesting, the protagonist gets stronger throughout the story, but what disappointed me was the system. It calls itself a dating system, but I read up to chapter 95 and so far I haven't seen any romance, nothing related to relationships, and the system breaks any option that indicates a relationship, so this part is kind of disappointing, unless the story only has romance around chapter 200. Apart from that, I'm going to stop reading because it got boring. Maybe when it's complete I'll read it again.

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Birlly9876543210

Al principio sali porque me dio verguenza leer el capitulo 1 pero me gusta la historia

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Xilt
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this was good, while the mc was op it's not unreasonably op. the sol was fun. the only downside is there some mistake in translation like spears become gun etc. but still readable

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Dans_Stell

the story good just need to turn off 1/4 your brain and need a bit fix the translation word on your own..

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zaped
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One of the best fan fics I’ve read in a while there are some minor translations errors but it doesn’t take away from the story much I kind of ship stelle and the MC 🥹

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cartor_gc710

good story I want more ................

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Unstable_One

Only complaint I have about the story so far is that rather cringe worthy, and kinda creepy, start with the CPR. I'll disregard the fact that mouth to mouth isn't needed in CPR as that's a scene from the game. The story has been really enjoyable so far. I like how the system has been used, especially since the MC doesn't pick options soley for the reward. He'll often consider characters reactions outside of any consequences listed in his system, so he actually uses his head somewhat. He also considers other factors, like building trust. I know nothing about the plot of Star Rail, so I can't say anything about how well it handles it, nor if it lacks creativity. The main reason I tool off a star is due to the failing translation after the first couple dozen chapters. At first it was an issue with genders, especially in regards to March 7th. Now it's extending to spearmanship being called gunmanship. This can be very confusing to those who don't kniw that translation software often mistakenly translatea spear and lance as gun from Chinese. These kind of mistakes show a lack of editing, as even a basic read through by someone with decent english skills would make it glaringly obvious. I'm not too surprised, considering he seems to be translated a tone of chapters from multiple novels daily, but it makes me worried about the quality further declining. May upgrade to 5 stars if it's fixed.

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