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Tang Zhen transmigrated to an apocalyptic world, where humans struggled to survive in various buildings that they built because the ground was covered in lethal dangers that were invisible to the naked eye. Tang Zhen transmigrated along with his mutated cell phone that was packed with miraculous applications.
There were all kinds of cities – some could fly in the sky, some could submerge into the ocean while some could become invisible – and shocking secrets were hidden within them.
The power of Tang Zhen’s city was…
He established a city and quickly leveled up his army with speeding tools. Then, he dominated this alternate world by seizing other cities.
He sat at the very top. Beneath his feet was a vast floating city guarded by dragons and surrounded by angels. Countless cannons were also set up at various corners of the city.
A million miles ahead, in the depths of the ocean, there was another city as large as a continent awaiting his conquest.
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it's it just me or are most of the new webnovels trash about being lazy but still progressing what happened to the ji Ning and linley who struggled with out op chat system or AI
Overall good potential with poor presentation. The story would be much better with solid editing. The translation (presumably) needs work. A lot of the English feels clunky and flows poorly but it is still reasonably easy to read. Good idea and spin on kingdom building, despite the typical story arc. Some fresh mechanics. The characters have potential to grow.
This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets. This is so bad the protagonist literally just helps everyone he meets.
After reading a couple hundred chapters here' s my opinion.. Pros Interesting ideas for a world His cheat is pretty cool and the things it can do a really extensive Cons Everyone but the main char is 1-d at best Kinda slow progression for such an op cheat Everyone important char is a Male,like all soldier/general even enemies are basically all male, like seriously at chapter 200 there's 4 women who have names (not counting the 2 I mention later)and none are important even a slightly to the story Extremely over reliance on modern weapons to kill anything,like he almost has enery weapon you can think of and he uses them constantly, Handguns,rifles,grenade/rocket launchers, he even has a freaking assault helicopter and hes using them in a fantasy setting on fantasy creatures,like it would've been cool if he could improve the personal strength of others with his cheat but he couldn't play out his modern warfare fantasy that way I guess. As for why I finally stopped reading, well the main char's enemies kidnapped and killed 2 girl he knew( he just met them), so he chose to revive them with new bodies that were naked while another dude he recruited just watched (he had all the time in the world to put clothes on them before he took them to the revive alter) ,I just hate reading stories where women who are clearly becoming important to the story, just be randomly seen naked by anyone but the MC, it's one of the main reasons I read CN stories instead of JP or US ones.
I made it to chapter 50 and decided to drop it. it's an interesting concept, and the mc is working towards the goal he set for himself. BUT the writing started to designate. Run on sentences, no punctuations, and like all stories on here; character name changes.
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where to start? xenophobic the author is on the extreme side of xenophobia againt other countries and cultures and against fantasy creatures and you can see that he gets a lot of xenophobic comments and he makes fun of the people saying it thinking he's not xenophobic.I've read so much and I wish I didn't the world of buildings such a good concept and that's all it will ever be the author butchered it he has no idea what makes a fantasy novel good he just spits on it constantly like all the fantasy has wronged him irl in horrible waysCHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. it's non existent. main character buildjng is only the first couple chapter then he's a cold xenophobic killing machine his main character is xenophobic how is there not more reviews of that? side characters. they have names besides that not much else most notable is long dragon his name has changed he had a good amount of character dev then it was dropped. his girl friends are many and no sustenance one was mentioned who author was playing as having a big role on mc and I can not rember anything about her at all nothing. the sister can be considered not to be in the story she plays no part except saying the wrath mc would have if anything happened to her.just don't read it it's not worth money and especially not your time I really wish it was better I had such high hopes and just constant let downs sorry for any grammar mistakes
Em. .. OmG look: Tang Zhen dismantled the all-terrain car and transported it all to Building World after traveling between the two worlds a couple of times. Tang Zhen, who had been busy for a long time, didn’t rest. He squatted in the grass and started to assemble the scattered parts of the all-terrain car. Half an hour later. WHAT! ! HALF AN HOUR. Mind you it's only at chap 27. He has the strength of an adult, YES. HIS spacial space is 1m^2
Its a good novel, kinda fast but it takes a while to really get good plot wise
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Hello. I have already read 100 chapters of the book and although compared to the whole book it is few, but I still feel that after so many chapters an opinion is formed in the person. In my opinion, this book is terrible. I am unable to grasp the main character's way of thinking and the logic behind his actions. Sometimes he acts like he's the strongest here when he's just a weak kid who can easily be killed by almost any monster. The incomprehensible way of thinking that random takes pity on a few people for no reason and just casually shows his secrets as if what he is doing is completely normal, and when random picks up the bag in the wild because it looks cute... Well, that's not why he knows and whether he will just play dumb and trick them into robbing the group or not. Such a thought would never cross his mind, but he feels that he is capable of controlling thousands of lives in a city. Interesting I must say. And the personality of this great savior is terrible. I honestly don't understand what logic he uses to save all the people in the world. Pure stupid. When the development of the character starts, it suddenly stops, as if the author has forgotten, and even regresses to where it was. Although the way of thinking in the first chapter is as stupid as in the last. Overall, the story is not bad, but the stupid main character completely spoils the story. I'm sorry, but it could have been a good work.
This one is a genuine creative and ORIGINAL novel.. born from the Author's brilliant imaginative story plot which includes, but not limited to sci-fi (depicts various forms of AI), Magic(magus), Cultivators, Technology, World resource plunder, Destroying world and plundering resources, in a very imaginative way, (not repetitive content), Gods and all that whole package(but not everything is about god)., and many more interesting and original concepts such as the Building world and its cutthroat competitive world, which is in a war for plundering resources from various planes, planets, universes, dimensions, etc. Anyway Give it a try I believe you will love it... No racial discrimination on this novel(100% guaranty) P.S - There are definitely some Lovey-dovey scenes but not like disgustingly 5 or 10 harem members, only 2-3.
Title: 我在异界有座城 Author: 寒慕白 Status: 4600+ chapters and ongoing Yes, if you read where it says 4600 chapters and ongoing, that's not a typo. It seems to have 4387 chapters, and then starts a new volume with a new numbering system that's at 273 chapters as of typing this. I don't think I've ever seen this on Qidian or other sites leaderboards so I have to wonder about the quality...but at the same time a solid fanbase must like it, or the author wouldn't keep going.