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Jake Griffs was a normal guy. He just finished high school, has no girlfriend, and is just starting college. He thought that his life was going to be typical and average but that all changed when the rules changed. One day, he was reading an old Superman comic on his laptop when giant meteors start to fall all over the planet and one crashes into his dorm building. The concussive blast knocks him out and when he wakes up later, in the hospital, he hears a voice telling him, "Superman System activated."
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Literally a brand new author, I am writing this just because I'm bored. Enjoy. This will go where the readers take it. I will create a discord and we can talk about some characters and I will be taking advice on my mistakes. And English is my only language (no need to worry about shit grammar). Thank you.
I don't own the above image. I just thought it was cool.
Never will go premium and don't accept patreons. Just enjoy the novel. Let system-chan make your day.
Discord: https://discord.gg/yBxcpX5
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Turning into superman is a cool idea for a story, but this story doesn't really do it justice. The author paints college with the dumbest of anime high school tropes. Trying to read this is painful because it's just so dumb. Its just pathetic ego stroking done horribly.
Shameless review just like many others before me. Anyways I want to first state that the direction the book goes is entirely up in the air. I have a general idea but I would love suggestions. My discord is in the description and I really hope you enjoy it.
Brother Daoist! Why did you not inform this Kaiser of your work!! Ssshhhh, I give you my stones, my golden stars and my thumbs up my brother! Keep up the good work!
The fk is wrong with these people? Are they the new bots that qidian made or are they just plain old dumb worthless pieces of **** who can't even contribute well to society. If it's the latter then i am very much disappointed in these stupid monkeys. Can we fking ban these little shts? I'm pretty sure this falls into a category of harassment.
I saw superman. I clik. I read "Superman system". I froze. I just finished " Smallville" and the journey from Clark Kent to Kal El was amayzing!!! Especialy the last seazon! And here you have a superman system? Superman+system = two of my favorite genres at the moment!!! So here are 5 stars from me! Now that the 140 characters are over i'm off to read the novel. Ps: the spoiler tag is for YOU curios people.
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It's a work in progress but so far so good. The story has not yet developed to the point of a concrete assessment. There r some cliche but what story doesn't, character building is needed but again too early to tell
Haven't even read it yet but Superman is my favorite super hero so I'll just go ahead and give it 5 stars and start reading it, the 140 character thing just gets annoying when you want to right a quick review.
So far love the story since its not like other storys i have seen yet and that it did not get dropped yet like other on chapter 1/3 also keep up the great work
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I love the story. Great direction, just wish there are more chapters. Jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjgwhsududhvwgsuxijswgwhdidjeieidjcuduehdvsvdjxxidjshwvegdodoisgwvddjpwkwhsvwjddoodiwowhf
Bruh please keep up with your writing. Recently just got my wisdom teeth out and I want moar to distract myself and drown in the world of your creation.
Don't mind me, I'm just trying to help author promoting his novel with 5 stars review. (Gonna give the real review after he update 20 or more chapters)
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I give a preliminary review based on the fact that this seems really good. The writing is pretty good, along with what seems to be the planning. Altogether I’m just waiting for the next chapter :) keep up the good work my guy :))))
Thk for the chapter. Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................
Although it only has a couple chapters it really sucks you in, I really like the idea of a hero type system instead of anime ones that most people prefer to write about, the writing is nice and it is going in the right direction the only minor things I disliked is that he got that ability to change to hide his appearance yet he just isn't using it and instead displays them openly one example is ch10 ( no real spoiler) were his first real fight is happening yet instead of saying something like "ugh my stomach hurts runs to change identity" he openly provokes and then fights it. well I still look forward for for chapters this is just the beginning after all and the Author can always make it better in the future if he/she wants it.
A great novel so far! It's the rise of a new Era for Earth and possibly for the Universe. (Other lifeforms on different planets) (Who knows) What will happen next c:
So far i love this story, hope you keep it up. ]];];];];];;];];];;];];];;];];];];];];];];];];];]];];];];];];]];];]]01010001010101010101010101010101010101010001010101010101010101010191019201010101001010101010
Haven't even read the book just wanted to tell the idiots who send multiple one star reviews that if you hate the book, you write a single well explained review on what you dislike about it. Don't spam trash that's childish.