dying light. (full redo)

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Austin_5620

I think this is the first dying light Fanfiction I've ever read and so far it is amazing also how many chapters long do you plan on making this?

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Zo_The_Narcissist

Ok let go over what I think need to be changed or updated do something else when I read it jack did this jack did that, I won't say it irritating but I would like a different perspective it a fun read though just the Pov fells weird. OK now that out of the way there to many A/N that messes up the flow of the story I'm thinking it apart of the story when it not it can get irritating sometimes. writing quality is good but like I said the Pov, and A/N can sometime irritate you. I like how the character is portrayed. he also using his army knowledge quite nicely which I find refreshing because when the usually have military knowledge the author don't know how to use it. Overall, the story is good when I find some other thing u can fix I will make a new review.

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spartan_303

this is just amazing. ..........

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New_bomb589

Love the game played and finished both games multiple times the powers are a little weird but not the weirdest hope you upload lots of this

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AStrAl_Soul

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Ryan_Adam_8800

you should keep making this story cuz i like dying light

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Jacob_X

I love it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------