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YOU ARE ALL FxUxCxKing IDIOTS THE STORY IS FUNNY TO READ COMEDY GOLD..AUTHOR DO NOT LESSON TO THIS REAL DxIxCxK HEADS..THE MC IS FUNNY AND THE PLOT IS WEIRD BUT NOT BORING OR I WILL NOT HAVE LAUGHED..THE AUTHOR MAKES ALL THE NOVEL FUN READ..THE CHARACTERS ARE FUN, NOT BORING HARDASZS..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT OR LOSE THE FIRE OF LIFE THANK YOU.
Everything is fine. Although sometimes the names are mixed up. Also, is it just me or was there actually a Harem tag here a few days ago? I remember him clearly.
It's a great AoT fanfic but there's the occasional chapter that is pretty much the previous chapter written in a different way which is kinda annoying.
Bad writing style, if author use ai please dont be lazy on editing to make it readable. Good update time 4 chapters each day? awesome. But, please dont sacrifice quality for it. i personally prefer 1 good readable chapter a day or week compared to 4 chapters of crap per day. Story development is too jumpy, things happen so suddenly, i really dont know how and why it happen but it just happen makes me need to think hard to connect the story between chapters. The way author describe the background is good but considering the ai sign i found i can only call it average at best. To sum it up good story poor execution, lots of chapter but lack depths, lack of editing and proofreading.
Good premise executed poorly, which is fairly common on this site. The majority of chapters is the MC simping over women, and showing incredibly childlike behavior. Chapters are also very short, if put in average webnovel word-count terms 100 chapters of this would be about 30 normal ones. The best part about this novel is the setting's potential, the worst part is the MC.
What is the name of the site that translates from the novel?..............................................'.'.................'''''..........''''
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Okay, where do we start..., I honestly don't mind the plot part or anything. Only, maybe I'll highlight the "romance" part more here. You know, when they met Historia, they should have been around 13 years old, and I think that's a bit too young, you know? At least, I think at that age they will just develop a closer friendship, and as time goes by they will start to fall in love. But, buying an engagement ring as a kid...? Well, I don't know.
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This is probably one of, if not the best AOT fanfic I've ever read, granted there isn't that many around, unlike most cn fanfic mcs, the mc here actually has a personality, and devotedly pursues only 1 girl. No harem so far. The powerscaling is not bad, mc is OP but not too OP where he can instantly solve any situation, no titan shifter and no power from other verses, just strong physique. Plot progression is a bit slow but the tradeoff for better story and character relationships and development is worth it. Also I like the authors take on the AOT world, And the humor is not bad too. Also I'm seeing complaints because of something mc did on ch 1 but he did it just to get the starter mission and tbh I thought it was hilarious, so far, he's commited to marry 1 girl so don't worry about it u harem haters out there. Overall, very good read and the translation is perfect. Hope u continue this story.
I hope this message finds you well. My name is Lord, and I am an avid admirer of your fanfiction works. Your exceptional talent for storytelling and character development deeply resonates with me, and I believe your stories would captivate a broader audience. I run a YouTube channel, FanFicFantasy (monetized), dedicated to bringing fanfiction to life through high-quality narration. I am reaching out to kindly request your permission to feature your fanfiction stories on my channel. If granted permission, I assure you that: Your work will be treated with the utmost respect. Full credit will be prominently displayed, including any specific links or mentions you'd like to include (e.g., your social media handles or website). Our channel consistently follows community guidelines and respects authors. We have maintained a clean record with no violations in the past three months. I believe this collaboration could provide additional exposure for your stories and introduce them to new fans while celebrating your creative talent. Please let me know if you have any concerns or specific conditions regarding this proposal. Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to the possibility of working together to share your incredible work with a wider audience. Warm regards, Lord FanFicFantasy Handle: @fantacy557
I don't why most people i see on the review thinks it's funny but it's cringe as hell gotta give it to you, I mean i read the first chapter and i had a stroke as to why mc would say that when he knows Mikasa and Christa doesn't know him? I mean I don't even wanna imagine what they thought of him when he said that,dudes a weirdo,and the villain tag is misleading I mean, I didn't see him be a villain except for his weird personality And 4-6 chapters can be turned into 1 regular chapter and reading it feels like reading an ai created story there's too much description in every action or conversation it's best to keep it simple.
the pacing is so slow it took almost 90 chapters for mc to fight titans ............... ......... . .... ............... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ....
Me encanta esta historia hasta ahora más que la mayoría de las que he leído. Lo que más me gustó hasta ahora es que los personajes principales, Ryo y Krista, lentamente se vuelven amantes y él intenta tener una mejor relación con el elenco principal. aunque me hubiera gustado que se enamore de mikasa o de annie
Revelar Spoiler
MC has a broken system marking nothing impactful feels like a shitty Chinese novel and he isn't a villain at any point so why even have that tag.
Mm this fic is too sterilize dunno just don't like how much of a simp this mf for the queen
disappointed with this read, I only read 30 chapters and I've already given up on this, plus the villain tag is a farce, the MC has a fetal personality sejs a waste of time
just read the fucking first chapter and you'll know why not to read this shit, its too fucking cringe
mada fuka mc is going subsonic speed uttering bulshit about breath sensing aura sensing in aot universe fanfic
i love this story so far better than most i have read what i loved most about it so far is the main character ryo and krista's slowly becoming lovers and him trying to get a better relationship with the main cast
It's good story pacing is***/awful. Krista is shown too much and is one of my least liked female, but I'm not rating off that. The pacing is insanely slow, 55 chaps and still nothing happening...
messy timeline and mc with a cringey simp golden retriever personality ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Estás haciendo un buen trabajo me gusta que el protagonista sea op solo espero que no hagas a los enemigos súper op porque entonces no tendría mucho sentido hacerlo op además por favor no hagas que vuele tipo Superman le quitaría la gracia por supuesto este es tu fic solo son recomendaciones
A.O.T Got a solid Story every little details is connected to each so seeing a fanfiction about this masterpiece I kinda do n'twanna read due lack of creativity especially if the story got SYSTEM 😒 welf ganna read it later
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Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.
YOU ARE ALL FxUxCxKing IDIOTS THE STORY IS FUNNY TO READ COMEDY GOLD..AUTHOR DO NOT LESSON TO THIS REAL DxIxCxK HEADS..THE MC IS FUNNY AND THE PLOT IS WEIRD BUT NOT BORING OR I WILL NOT HAVE LAUGHED..THE AUTHOR MAKES ALL THE NOVEL FUN READ..THE CHARACTERS ARE FUN, NOT BORING HARDASZS..AUTHOR DO NOT QUIT OR LOSE THE FIRE OF LIFE THANK YOU.
Everything is fine. Although sometimes the names are mixed up. Also, is it just me or was there actually a Harem tag here a few days ago? I remember him clearly.
It's a great AoT fanfic but there's the occasional chapter that is pretty much the previous chapter written in a different way which is kinda annoying.
Bad writing style, if author use ai please dont be lazy on editing to make it readable. Good update time 4 chapters each day? awesome. But, please dont sacrifice quality for it. i personally prefer 1 good readable chapter a day or week compared to 4 chapters of crap per day. Story development is too jumpy, things happen so suddenly, i really dont know how and why it happen but it just happen makes me need to think hard to connect the story between chapters. The way author describe the background is good but considering the ai sign i found i can only call it average at best. To sum it up good story poor execution, lots of chapter but lack depths, lack of editing and proofreading.
Good premise executed poorly, which is fairly common on this site. The majority of chapters is the MC simping over women, and showing incredibly childlike behavior. Chapters are also very short, if put in average webnovel word-count terms 100 chapters of this would be about 30 normal ones. The best part about this novel is the setting's potential, the worst part is the MC.
What is the name of the site that translates from the novel?..............................................'.'.................'''''..........''''
Good 👍👍 ...................................................................,.............................................................................
Okay, where do we start..., I honestly don't mind the plot part or anything. Only, maybe I'll highlight the "romance" part more here. You know, when they met Historia, they should have been around 13 years old, and I think that's a bit too young, you know? At least, I think at that age they will just develop a closer friendship, and as time goes by they will start to fall in love. But, buying an engagement ring as a kid...? Well, I don't know.
Revelar Spoiler This is probably one of, if not the best AOT fanfic I've ever read, granted there isn't that many around, unlike most cn fanfic mcs, the mc here actually has a personality, and devotedly pursues only 1 girl. No harem so far. The powerscaling is not bad, mc is OP but not too OP where he can instantly solve any situation, no titan shifter and no power from other verses, just strong physique. Plot progression is a bit slow but the tradeoff for better story and character relationships and development is worth it. Also I like the authors take on the AOT world, And the humor is not bad too. Also I'm seeing complaints because of something mc did on ch 1 but he did it just to get the starter mission and tbh I thought it was hilarious, so far, he's commited to marry 1 girl so don't worry about it u harem haters out there. Overall, very good read and the translation is perfect. Hope u continue this story.
I hope this message finds you well. My name is Lord, and I am an avid admirer of your fanfiction works. Your exceptional talent for storytelling and character development deeply resonates with me, and I believe your stories would captivate a broader audience. I run a YouTube channel, FanFicFantasy (monetized), dedicated to bringing fanfiction to life through high-quality narration. I am reaching out to kindly request your permission to feature your fanfiction stories on my channel. If granted permission, I assure you that: Your work will be treated with the utmost respect. Full credit will be prominently displayed, including any specific links or mentions you'd like to include (e.g., your social media handles or website). Our channel consistently follows community guidelines and respects authors. We have maintained a clean record with no violations in the past three months. I believe this collaboration could provide additional exposure for your stories and introduce them to new fans while celebrating your creative talent. Please let me know if you have any concerns or specific conditions regarding this proposal. Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to the possibility of working together to share your incredible work with a wider audience. Warm regards, Lord FanFicFantasy Handle: @fantacy557
I don't why most people i see on the review thinks it's funny but it's cringe as hell gotta give it to you, I mean i read the first chapter and i had a stroke as to why mc would say that when he knows Mikasa and Christa doesn't know him? I mean I don't even wanna imagine what they thought of him when he said that,dudes a weirdo,and the villain tag is misleading I mean, I didn't see him be a villain except for his weird personality And 4-6 chapters can be turned into 1 regular chapter and reading it feels like reading an ai created story there's too much description in every action or conversation it's best to keep it simple.
the pacing is so slow it took almost 90 chapters for mc to fight titans ............... ......... . .... ............... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ................... ......... . ....
Me encanta esta historia hasta ahora más que la mayoría de las que he leído. Lo que más me gustó hasta ahora es que los personajes principales, Ryo y Krista, lentamente se vuelven amantes y él intenta tener una mejor relación con el elenco principal. aunque me hubiera gustado que se enamore de mikasa o de annie
Revelar Spoiler MC has a broken system marking nothing impactful feels like a shitty Chinese novel and he isn't a villain at any point so why even have that tag.
Mm this fic is too sterilize dunno just don't like how much of a simp this mf for the queen
disappointed with this read, I only read 30 chapters and I've already given up on this, plus the villain tag is a farce, the MC has a fetal personality sejs a waste of time
just read the fucking first chapter and you'll know why not to read this shit, its too fucking cringe
mada fuka mc is going subsonic speed uttering bulshit about breath sensing aura sensing in aot universe fanfic
i love this story so far better than most i have read what i loved most about it so far is the main character ryo and krista's slowly becoming lovers and him trying to get a better relationship with the main cast
It's good story pacing is***/awful. Krista is shown too much and is one of my least liked female, but I'm not rating off that. The pacing is insanely slow, 55 chaps and still nothing happening...
messy timeline and mc with a cringey simp golden retriever personality ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Estás haciendo un buen trabajo me gusta que el protagonista sea op solo espero que no hagas a los enemigos súper op porque entonces no tendría mucho sentido hacerlo op además por favor no hagas que vuele tipo Superman le quitaría la gracia por supuesto este es tu fic solo son recomendaciones
A.O.T Got a solid Story every little details is connected to each so seeing a fanfiction about this masterpiece I kinda do n'twanna read due lack of creativity especially if the story got SYSTEM 😒 welf ganna read it later
Revelar Spoiler
Its great to see a AoT fanfic since there’s rarely any aroun. Overall its a good Fic. A lil longer chapters would be nice as well im hoping to see some character development over time as the story goes. You might think that this fic its not doing good enough but what matter the most is time. Youll see some progress as more chapter are uploaded.