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I always find it annoying if novel have much Chat GPT bullshit in it. It's like one small plot being stretched out endlnessly by empty beutiful word that does not give any benefit to the current plot.
I can't wait for the ninja world to find out about the tenseigan . I can already see the look on your face that the Hyuuga clan will make
Honestly speaking this is a pretty good fic overall the translating forties pretty much one of the best I've seen so far the main character is pretty smart in comparison to a lot of other similar fics that's a plus but one of the main problems I'm not giving it full marks is that it gets one of my pet peeves of the main character hiding his abilities for little to no reason and in the beginning I can kind of understand because he's not powerful enough yet but once you hit a certain point you might as well just show off your power cuz no one can stop you at that point in time but no he continues to hide it
An amazing story with a very good translation thank you author for this blessing................................................................................................................
I just wanted to drop by and inform you that he will be done with the whole fetal Tenseigan by chapter 40. I'll update this after reading more.
This is that novel where the Mc literally never fights, he just uses puppets to deal with stuff but never acts himself. Not my style, but the translation is phenomenal, 10/10
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Translation and story is awsm. but i read mtl after this, found Naruto plot is dragged, too much for my taste. only enjoyable till 150-200 chaps.
This is a really good fanfic. Highly recommended. This is a typical MC who's OP but hides his strength, but he uses schemes to do it instead of actually showing himself as weak. The love interest seems to be Tsunade.
I haven't read the story but atleast give the chapter titles so i can know the infoss...
Im likeing the story a lot so far. Im really enjoying all of the mc interactions with the side characters and the story seems to be progressing at a nice rate. Im super excited to see where the story evolves with the slug summons.
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The translation is decent, and the concept is intriguing. That's all I can and will say. but for the sake of the review I'll add on that i like the Tenseigan.
Haven't read it but just want to tell you that you should give chapter names so that i can skim through and get a idea of what i am getting into.
I always find it annoying if novel have much Chat GPT bullshit in it. It's like one small plot being stretched out endlnessly by empty beutiful word that does not give any benefit to the current plot.
I can't wait for the ninja world to find out about the tenseigan . I can already see the look on your face that the Hyuuga clan will make
Honestly speaking this is a pretty good fic overall the translating forties pretty much one of the best I've seen so far the main character is pretty smart in comparison to a lot of other similar fics that's a plus but one of the main problems I'm not giving it full marks is that it gets one of my pet peeves of the main character hiding his abilities for little to no reason and in the beginning I can kind of understand because he's not powerful enough yet but once you hit a certain point you might as well just show off your power cuz no one can stop you at that point in time but no he continues to hide it
An amazing story with a very good translation thank you author for this blessing................................................................................................................
I just wanted to drop by and inform you that he will be done with the whole fetal Tenseigan by chapter 40. I'll update this after reading more.
This is that novel where the Mc literally never fights, he just uses puppets to deal with stuff but never acts himself. Not my style, but the translation is phenomenal, 10/10
Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap MantapMantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap MantapMantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap Mantap
Translation and story is awsm. but i read mtl after this, found Naruto plot is dragged, too much for my taste. only enjoyable till 150-200 chaps.
This is a really good fanfic. Highly recommended. This is a typical MC who's OP but hides his strength, but he uses schemes to do it instead of actually showing himself as weak. The love interest seems to be Tsunade.
I haven't read the story but atleast give the chapter titles so i can know the infoss...
Im likeing the story a lot so far. Im really enjoying all of the mc interactions with the side characters and the story seems to be progressing at a nice rate. Im super excited to see where the story evolves with the slug summons.
Revelar Spoiler The translation is decent, and the concept is intriguing. That's all I can and will say. but for the sake of the review I'll add on that i like the Tenseigan.
Haven't read it but just want to tell you that you should give chapter names so that i can skim through and get a idea of what i am getting into.
hiruzen slave mc . . . . . . . ..