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2023-07-14 Unido Global
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6 days ago
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Man. Chat GPT ruin everything. The word after chapter 15 felt empty. I am confuse why so many people chose GPT to extent a paragraph that clearly is making the novel become more even bland.

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6 days ago
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I don't know but I feel like the author want to make MC look cool by killing bunch of weakling with many different OP abilities of his. And I don't like that. OP but still need to take time to killing enemies is just waste of action scene with no exhalrting feeling. Maybe if the MC make his subordinate and friends fight for him it makes this novel intresting for me. But no, he already one step away to have power level of Kaguya and there are nothing that he give toward his friends to get them stronger. Which is why I find it boring when the combination of OP and selfish MC who only hog the power to himself, togehter since there is nothing to expect anymore.

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8 days ago
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This novel makes a plot just for the sake of filling up the plot. Enemy come unexpectedly without prior teaser. Enemy escape to lengthened the plot by ridiculous circumstances without clear logical move. Similar to plot armor, but worse. MC basically already strongest Shinobi in the world, still nerved just for the sake of wanting to have new plot. I mean, if he is OP then let him be OP, don't drowngrade his ability just for the sake of wanting to keep certain vilian character alive. And most importantly, Naruto plot is not yet flexed until the late-game and it's already new enemy.

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9 days ago
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I thought having cultivator abilities will remove the charm of Naruto fanfic where fighting is based on boring cultivation level. But this novel does not do that. The fighting and action is exactrliting. So with that 5/5.

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10 days ago
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I always find it annoying if novel have much Chat GPT bullshit in it. It's like one small plot being stretched out endlnessly by empty beutiful word that does not give any benefit to the current plot.

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3 months ago
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For the first ten chapters, the tags will be permanent. This means I want to write very light, enjoyable reading with minimal conflict or face-slapping, focusing instead on the two protagonists enjoying themselves in the world of immortals. For anyone wondering in the future about my ability to write something dark or if the MC and FMC are too righteous for your taste, just check out my other work. They are essentially the same characters who can do something horrible, but in this instance, they choose not to.

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3 months ago
Replied to HatefulRaijin

Yeah, she is the one. But don’t expect a WOTR-style fanfic with extensive lore and details. In this universe, their past history is pretty much shallow.

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3 months ago
Replied to S22

Yeah, I know. I realize that. I put in too much fandom content, and as a result, it became convoluted and hard to understand.

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3 months ago
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  • Multiversal Congruency [Stopped] original

    Multiversal Congruency [Stopped]

    Video Games ROMANCE R18 MAGIC HAREM DARK OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION SLICEOFLIFE TRAGEDY VIDEOGAME

    — “I see you gather before me… hungry… terrified… Clutching your grimoire to your chest. God of blood and killing Khorne has marched his legions into our worlds… Laid devastation to every living from here to the Dragon Mountains. Rabid and ravenous, he bites and bites away.” “Magi of the North, you stand at the precipice! Your heralds have failed you, so now you turn to the sleeper! And yet you do not heed? You do not kneel to dust your heads with husk? Instead you wail, ‘Why have the heralds forsaken us?’” “We must look into the trails we failed not long ago! In a time past, our world intertwined with another through an upheaval scholars call the Second Conjunction of the Spheres… The heralds allowed unholy forces to slip into our domain. The offspring of that cataclysm was the nefarious force called mana…” “Yet we did not banish it, instead studying the vile arcane for our own power and wealth! And the mythic at our door… the unholy relics of this Second Conjunction? …the devourer…the primal beast…the daedra? Did we raise our science and magic against them? Or have we laid this burden on others?” “On so-called demon slayers… Stray children taught the ways of foul breathing, their mind mutated through blasphemous technique. Sent to fight mythic though they could not distinguish good from evil. The flicker of humanity long extinguished within them.” “Yes, their numbers have doubled through the years. Many still roam our lands, offering their bloody work for mere satisfaction. To this day they shame us with their very existence! The North bleeds, flogged by war. The battles are the herald’s whip, chastisement for our corruption! And let us not forget the terrors, the heart of darkness from beyond our world! The ancestors roamed through our minds with every cycle of the moon!” “The narrator twisted our children into the lands unknown! Some say he is the harbinger of the third Conjunction! Can we chart a course back into the light? Will we find the strength to banish the demon slayers from our country? Unite around the blue color of the Eternal Madness?” “Nigh is the Time of the Wand and Guns! None will fight this war in our stead! Nigh is the Time of Swirling Stars!” — This is not a Witcher fan fiction per se, but rather a story that initially features elements from The Witcher. — In this story, the dark tag means it’s genuinely dark, and the harem tag means it’s like the old-school harem, where women are objectified. — Don’t expect too much lore and detail in each fandom, because their past history is long gone. This means that everything from their characteristics, way of speaking, traditions, and culture is pretty much shallow at best. —

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