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You did a great job writing this fanfic. I have been looking for this for ages. Keep up the great work.
Nothing against you but the way he the same sentence is used to answer every Interview question makes it an extreme turn off although its good to be humble but if the same sentence even if put out differently used in every answer then this is just bad character and story writing. (,,Its all thanks to my Team,, literally as answer to every questionthe interviewer asked but way longer and the fact that Mc answer are all extremely long makes it just feel uncomfortable especially when they are all the same no matter the question) It just feels like he can’t use any other words and another example is how he answered 2 or 3 questions in row with Absolutely instead changing the words to make it not look like a repeat for example he would use ,,Right, Agreed, For Sure,, and many other words to make the con conversation feel more natural. Don’t know if you made it like that or if you just translated it how its written but yeah its just annoying.
Great translation quality. I didn't actually read the original chinese version, but I can imagine how much chinese nonsense you're cutting away. Since chinese love to exaggerate everything (no racism). Thanks, Author.
its great our good sir has done a great job of fixing this shit after translation excellent updates for now hope that doesnt change give it a shot if you like football things like this!
Great book! I've been missing a good Soccer/Football story since I dropped greatest of all time. The author puts a lot of work into not just translating the book but rewriting it to cut out all the crap making the book feel like it was written in English.
one of the best football story on the site. it's not a rough translation but the author add their own touch that elevate the story. highly recommend
I honestly loved it. The author's dedication to translating and rewriting the story is incredible, it was perfect and there is a new chapter every day.
One of the best fics currently being translated. Yes translated. but don’t let it being chinese push you away. The translator is doing ungodly efforts to keep the Chinese stereotyping to the minimum. In fact it’s so miniscule there’s not even a racism here! Can you believe it? Chinese fic without racism…oh sorry I meant ‘Nationalism’. One of the funniest parts of the chapters is his A/N just complaining about the Original Author’s Obsession with David Beckham, those alone is worth a chapter 😅😂 Anyways this is the Mandatory review he asked in the latest chap. ✌🏼Read it.
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the second best football novel in this shitty app ♥️♥️ keep going author I'm loving this
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So far the translation of the story is one of the best I have seen on this app and this is easily one of the top sports fics. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
it's an impressive work I hope you keep updating I'm starved of good football novels hope you update upto three chapters a day 🤲🤲
A solid fan-fic and the translation is great. One of the best football fan-fic on Webnovel. I hope you keep translating this and thank you for sharing this with us.
Really good story. Even though it's a translation, the usual Chinese nationalism is not in the story so far. Recommend it to anyone interested in a good football story. Can't wait for more!
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I like this story a lot it’s good definitely worth a read compared to everything else on this, that author mentioned multiple times this is a translation and I read that Chinese novel and my god comparing that two is like night and day this is so much better
Not sure why this story isn't getting more popular, it's really good and despite it a being a translation of a Chinese, you won't even be able to tell do that and there's no mention of China or anything like that, that main character is mixed but that author doesn't bring it up or anything, it was mentioned like once or two times in 11 chapters
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So far I'm liking everything I'm reading; that author doesn't hide that it's a translation, which I appreciate compared to every other translator out here parading stolen work as their own. And for a Chinese story, u won't even be able to tell it was Chinese with how well the author rewrites it; it's a lot better than the Chinese one so yeah give it a try
Finally, someone has taken on the task of adapting a wonderful novella. And I can definitely say that you've done better than the original, it's obvious that you've tried your best. Since you asked for advice, I can only tell you to concentrate on football and family. In the original, it was annoying that the MC was wasting his time on unnecessary activities like fashion shows and so on. It's like winning the lottery a golden ticket. I can understand it if he's already 30 years old, but to do it at the beginning? That's bullshit.
this is pretty good so far; I'm liking what I'm reading, I like the system and the main character too, despite this being a translation of a chinese story, you won't even see a hint of that so honestly just props for that
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, this is a five out of five star
This is the best translation novel!!!! The translator not just translated it but modified it to make this story better!!! This is great!!!
You did a great job writing this fanfic. I have been looking for this for ages. Keep up the great work.
Nothing against you but the way he the same sentence is used to answer every Interview question makes it an extreme turn off although its good to be humble but if the same sentence even if put out differently used in every answer then this is just bad character and story writing. (,,Its all thanks to my Team,, literally as answer to every questionthe interviewer asked but way longer and the fact that Mc answer are all extremely long makes it just feel uncomfortable especially when they are all the same no matter the question) It just feels like he can’t use any other words and another example is how he answered 2 or 3 questions in row with Absolutely instead changing the words to make it not look like a repeat for example he would use ,,Right, Agreed, For Sure,, and many other words to make the con conversation feel more natural. Don’t know if you made it like that or if you just translated it how its written but yeah its just annoying.
Great translation quality. I didn't actually read the original chinese version, but I can imagine how much chinese nonsense you're cutting away. Since chinese love to exaggerate everything (no racism). Thanks, Author.
its great our good sir has done a great job of fixing this shit after translation excellent updates for now hope that doesnt change give it a shot if you like football things like this!
Great book! I've been missing a good Soccer/Football story since I dropped greatest of all time. The author puts a lot of work into not just translating the book but rewriting it to cut out all the crap making the book feel like it was written in English.
one of the best football story on the site. it's not a rough translation but the author add their own touch that elevate the story. highly recommend
I honestly loved it. The author's dedication to translating and rewriting the story is incredible, it was perfect and there is a new chapter every day.
One of the best fics currently being translated. Yes translated. but don’t let it being chinese push you away. The translator is doing ungodly efforts to keep the Chinese stereotyping to the minimum. In fact it’s so miniscule there’s not even a racism here! Can you believe it? Chinese fic without racism…oh sorry I meant ‘Nationalism’. One of the funniest parts of the chapters is his A/N just complaining about the Original Author’s Obsession with David Beckham, those alone is worth a chapter 😅😂 Anyways this is the Mandatory review he asked in the latest chap. ✌🏼Read it.
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the second best football novel in this shitty app ♥️♥️ keep going author I'm loving this
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So far the translation of the story is one of the best I have seen on this app and this is easily one of the top sports fics. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
it's an impressive work I hope you keep updating I'm starved of good football novels hope you update upto three chapters a day 🤲🤲
A solid fan-fic and the translation is great. One of the best football fan-fic on Webnovel. I hope you keep translating this and thank you for sharing this with us.
Really good story. Even though it's a translation, the usual Chinese nationalism is not in the story so far. Recommend it to anyone interested in a good football story. Can't wait for more!
[img=Out of it][img=Cries][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=Unalived][img=Loving it][img=In your face][img=Shocked][img=Out of it][img=Loving it][img=Speechless][img=Out of it]
I like this story a lot it’s good definitely worth a read compared to everything else on this, that author mentioned multiple times this is a translation and I read that Chinese novel and my god comparing that two is like night and day this is so much better
Not sure why this story isn't getting more popular, it's really good and despite it a being a translation of a Chinese, you won't even be able to tell do that and there's no mention of China or anything like that, that main character is mixed but that author doesn't bring it up or anything, it was mentioned like once or two times in 11 chapters
GOTYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
So far I'm liking everything I'm reading; that author doesn't hide that it's a translation, which I appreciate compared to every other translator out here parading stolen work as their own. And for a Chinese story, u won't even be able to tell it was Chinese with how well the author rewrites it; it's a lot better than the Chinese one so yeah give it a try
Finally, someone has taken on the task of adapting a wonderful novella. And I can definitely say that you've done better than the original, it's obvious that you've tried your best. Since you asked for advice, I can only tell you to concentrate on football and family. In the original, it was annoying that the MC was wasting his time on unnecessary activities like fashion shows and so on. It's like winning the lottery a golden ticket. I can understand it if he's already 30 years old, but to do it at the beginning? That's bullshit.
this is pretty good so far; I'm liking what I'm reading, I like the system and the main character too, despite this being a translation of a chinese story, you won't even see a hint of that so honestly just props for that
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, this is a five out of five star
This is the best translation novel!!!! The translator not just translated it but modified it to make this story better!!! This is great!!!