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I was recently reading this same story on another site, but reading it here brought another level of experience. Keep it up, because there are few good citizens who provide content for free. It's a good story and I particularly like the football approach. I hadn't given a grade yet and decided to give it a grade since some idiot decided to mess it up.
What I like the most is the change the author make compared to the original Also Wesley_Celular, fuck you, dude dropped a one star review just because he saw it was a chinese translated story, mf didn't even read a single fucking chapter. Hahaha hahaha 🤣😂
It's incredible what you've done, removing all the Chinese clichés and shaping it in your own style. For practitioners of the Dao of MTL football, this is a gem. A beautiful novel, simply stunning. Future readers, I guarantee you'll enjoy reading this wonderful story.
The quality of the writing is good and the pace of his progression as a player is perfect, neither too fast nor too slow. The protagonist is a midfielder, so his focus is more on setting up plays and controlling the field than on finishing. The only flaw in the story is the dialogues, they are robotic and repetitive, but the author has already realized this and is trying to improve. If the quality of the dialogues improves I will come back and give it 5 stars.
In my opinion, It's shit bro... I need more chapters you fucking nailed the translation holy shit. It's my first time seeing a good ass translation, anyway I'll let this good shit marinate.
Nice work making this story your own. It does not feel like a chinese translation. And the way you have been editing and making original chapters it will be wrong to just call this story a translation. The writing quality is pretty good but I would like to see some losses in big stage. right now it feels like a fairytale with only ups without any downs.
In my opinion this story is both the best translation story but also the best football story on the app
------------------------------------- Can't wait for more chapters! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is the best translation novel!!!! The translator not just translated it but modified it to make this story better!!! This is great!!!
You did a great job writing this fanfic. I have been looking for this for ages. Keep up the great work.
Nothing against you but the way he the same sentence is used to answer every Interview question makes it an extreme turn off although its good to be humble but if the same sentence even if put out differently used in every answer then this is just bad character and story writing. (,,Its all thanks to my Team,, literally as answer to every questionthe interviewer asked but way longer and the fact that Mc answer are all extremely long makes it just feel uncomfortable especially when they are all the same no matter the question) It just feels like he can’t use any other words and another example is how he answered 2 or 3 questions in row with Absolutely instead changing the words to make it not look like a repeat for example he would use ,,Right, Agreed, For Sure,, and many other words to make the con conversation feel more natural. Don’t know if you made it like that or if you just translated it how its written but yeah its just annoying.
Great translation quality. I didn't actually read the original chinese version, but I can imagine how much chinese nonsense you're cutting away. Since chinese love to exaggerate everything (no racism). Thanks, Author.
its great our good sir has done a great job of fixing this shit after translation excellent updates for now hope that doesnt change give it a shot if you like football things like this!
Great book! I've been missing a good Soccer/Football story since I dropped greatest of all time. The author puts a lot of work into not just translating the book but rewriting it to cut out all the crap making the book feel like it was written in English.
one of the best football story on the site. it's not a rough translation but the author add their own touch that elevate the story. highly recommend
I honestly loved it. The author's dedication to translating and rewriting the story is incredible, it was perfect and there is a new chapter every day.
One of the best fics currently being translated. Yes translated. but don’t let it being chinese push you away. The translator is doing ungodly efforts to keep the Chinese stereotyping to the minimum. In fact it’s so miniscule there’s not even a racism here! Can you believe it? Chinese fic without racism…oh sorry I meant ‘Nationalism’. One of the funniest parts of the chapters is his A/N just complaining about the Original Author’s Obsession with David Beckham, those alone is worth a chapter 😅😂 Anyways this is the Mandatory review he asked in the latest chap. ✌🏼Read it.
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the second best football novel in this shitty app ♥️♥️ keep going author I'm loving this
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So far the translation of the story is one of the best I have seen on this app and this is easily one of the top sports fics. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
it's an impressive work I hope you keep updating I'm starved of good football novels hope you update upto three chapters a day 🤲🤲
A solid fan-fic and the translation is great. One of the best football fan-fic on Webnovel. I hope you keep translating this and thank you for sharing this with us.
Really good story. Even though it's a translation, the usual Chinese nationalism is not in the story so far. Recommend it to anyone interested in a good football story. Can't wait for more!
I was recently reading this same story on another site, but reading it here brought another level of experience. Keep it up, because there are few good citizens who provide content for free. It's a good story and I particularly like the football approach. I hadn't given a grade yet and decided to give it a grade since some idiot decided to mess it up.
What I like the most is the change the author make compared to the original Also Wesley_Celular, fuck you, dude dropped a one star review just because he saw it was a chinese translated story, mf didn't even read a single fucking chapter. Hahaha hahaha 🤣😂
It's incredible what you've done, removing all the Chinese clichés and shaping it in your own style. For practitioners of the Dao of MTL football, this is a gem. A beautiful novel, simply stunning. Future readers, I guarantee you'll enjoy reading this wonderful story.
The quality of the writing is good and the pace of his progression as a player is perfect, neither too fast nor too slow. The protagonist is a midfielder, so his focus is more on setting up plays and controlling the field than on finishing. The only flaw in the story is the dialogues, they are robotic and repetitive, but the author has already realized this and is trying to improve. If the quality of the dialogues improves I will come back and give it 5 stars.
In my opinion, It's shit bro... I need more chapters you fucking nailed the translation holy shit. It's my first time seeing a good ass translation, anyway I'll let this good shit marinate.
Nice work making this story your own. It does not feel like a chinese translation. And the way you have been editing and making original chapters it will be wrong to just call this story a translation. The writing quality is pretty good but I would like to see some losses in big stage. right now it feels like a fairytale with only ups without any downs.
In my opinion this story is both the best translation story but also the best football story on the app
------------------------------------- Can't wait for more chapters! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is the best translation novel!!!! The translator not just translated it but modified it to make this story better!!! This is great!!!
You did a great job writing this fanfic. I have been looking for this for ages. Keep up the great work.
Nothing against you but the way he the same sentence is used to answer every Interview question makes it an extreme turn off although its good to be humble but if the same sentence even if put out differently used in every answer then this is just bad character and story writing. (,,Its all thanks to my Team,, literally as answer to every questionthe interviewer asked but way longer and the fact that Mc answer are all extremely long makes it just feel uncomfortable especially when they are all the same no matter the question) It just feels like he can’t use any other words and another example is how he answered 2 or 3 questions in row with Absolutely instead changing the words to make it not look like a repeat for example he would use ,,Right, Agreed, For Sure,, and many other words to make the con conversation feel more natural. Don’t know if you made it like that or if you just translated it how its written but yeah its just annoying.
Great translation quality. I didn't actually read the original chinese version, but I can imagine how much chinese nonsense you're cutting away. Since chinese love to exaggerate everything (no racism). Thanks, Author.
its great our good sir has done a great job of fixing this shit after translation excellent updates for now hope that doesnt change give it a shot if you like football things like this!
Great book! I've been missing a good Soccer/Football story since I dropped greatest of all time. The author puts a lot of work into not just translating the book but rewriting it to cut out all the crap making the book feel like it was written in English.
one of the best football story on the site. it's not a rough translation but the author add their own touch that elevate the story. highly recommend
I honestly loved it. The author's dedication to translating and rewriting the story is incredible, it was perfect and there is a new chapter every day.
One of the best fics currently being translated. Yes translated. but don’t let it being chinese push you away. The translator is doing ungodly efforts to keep the Chinese stereotyping to the minimum. In fact it’s so miniscule there’s not even a racism here! Can you believe it? Chinese fic without racism…oh sorry I meant ‘Nationalism’. One of the funniest parts of the chapters is his A/N just complaining about the Original Author’s Obsession with David Beckham, those alone is worth a chapter 😅😂 Anyways this is the Mandatory review he asked in the latest chap. ✌🏼Read it.
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the second best football novel in this shitty app ♥️♥️ keep going author I'm loving this
.............................................................................👍just read👍..............................................................................
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So far the translation of the story is one of the best I have seen on this app and this is easily one of the top sports fics. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
it's an impressive work I hope you keep updating I'm starved of good football novels hope you update upto three chapters a day 🤲🤲
A solid fan-fic and the translation is great. One of the best football fan-fic on Webnovel. I hope you keep translating this and thank you for sharing this with us.
Really good story. Even though it's a translation, the usual Chinese nationalism is not in the story so far. Recommend it to anyone interested in a good football story. Can't wait for more!
My taste of reading 📚 😋. Very detail yet simple to read and understand.