One Piece: With Sign-in System

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Readtilltheybleed

So far this story is entertaining and balanced. The MC is still quite young and even though he has a cheating system that most stories would use to rocket the MC to the peak this story seems to recognize the importance of character development and actually allows the protagonist to experience the world more before jumping into the more chaotic waters. Knowing the plot and making subtle changes here and there the protagonist makes his mark on the world without completely subverting the plot… which is something that seems appropriate for the time being but I hope the future will see many changes culminating into a new experience while possible eliminating some of the undesirable elements of the original series. I can’t say much more as the story is only beginning but the plot is enjoyable, the writing is skillful, the characters are reasonable, the power given to the MC isn’t too far fetched in the world of Onepiece, the current company he keeps doesn’t effect the canon, and I have high hopes for a grand adventure as the story unfolds.

LV 4

The_Paragon_White

Well, it started off really well, but it kind of lost its charm when he started teaching “Kuina” the Breathing that was the secret to his strength, basically he gave her his power just because he could, without any reason. It's like you're handing out a weapon to someone who could use it against you at any time, that attitude was pure idiocy...

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GodOfLight

Raw ? .

Quite an interesting story , consider me fully intrigued and left wanting for more. I hope you release chapters regularly. Voted powerstoness!!

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R0B

Good so far, can't wait for more chaps. ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ ............................................................ Have a great day!

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Uveilazatrum

There wasn't much I could complain about until the the moment where Doflamingo attacks a ship Zephyr where the only competent one is MC for some weird reason and everyone else is mostly decorations for his glorious show of powers. I really don't like when authors add drama for the sake of drama or dumb down characters just to make MC look better.

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Demons_Ki

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LV 11

ElvenKing20

................................................................................................................................................ Read the novel guys!!!

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Narrativeninja007

The story is upto a great start. Other than the MC teaching Kuina his abilities things are progressing great. Hopefully you continue writing the story.

LV 10

Character_Coded

great , totally great !! i love the mc n his power , keep it up man ..................,.,......................................................

LV 4

Glebby_Boi

This is a certified BANGER!!! Love the plot, the check in system thing is done well and the power progression (compared to similar type of ffs) is smooth. The characters are depicted well and I can’t wait for more chapters!!

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Mehran_Mahbob

excellent work so far, it is one those good fanfics , i love it so far , it is well written

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Dreamer_20

thanks......and keep updating....................................

LV 13

LordRamcel

NGL this is ten times better than the other novel with the sign in system. This novel has a lot more substance in comparison.

LV 13

Immortal_Cat

genuine five stars. This fic is really good. I have no more to say. to lazy to type more of my thoughts

LV 4

Kae0_0

it's good but...... uhhhm... is there mtl or raw version?

LV 14

Shadowles_Immortal

From what I read so far it’s mostly just. This is literally luffy’s journey just without him? Just a self insert mc why not make FF islands or something different. The mc has a ship that is futuristic so he can go anywhere because he also has a world map that tracks him with the system so why not explore regions never done so in the manga spread out the story to inrich it because otherwise why read a self insert mc story when the OG manga would be better? But yea I think it would be way more interesting if more FF islands appeared to make the story more interesting.

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DaoistpcwvIa

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ArkNova

Is there harem here?.......................................................................................................................................

LV 15

TURKY_ALMANSOUR

One of the best translations I have ever read. The cheat is reasonable There are character development He doesn’t just get powers, he also train hard. Try it you won’t regret it. PS: this is my first review in the app I hope I did a good job.