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A good W40K novel that has a bit of a slow start but due to it remains a lot more realistic than other fics that make the MC too overpowered too quickly. From what I can tell the lore is pretty well researched and the feel of the setting is right though thankfully there is a bit more hope in this fic than the true setting which fits the themes of the MC's golden finger/cheat 🤩 Highly recommended to Warhammer 40k fans and for even for casual readers 👍
An amazing Warhammer 40k fanfic that has almost no problems and updates often.
This is my first interaction with the Warhammer 40k universe and I've been thoroughly enjoying reading it. Keep up the good work author 💕 🤗
Очень годное произведение, мало таких последнее время Надеюсь автор не забросит такой интересный сюжет Дерзай, буду с нетерпением ждать пооду
In one universe we had Franklin Valorian, The Liberator and The Great Eagle spreading democracy, freedom and hope to the Milky way and now in this universe we have the savior Eden on his own quest to lead humanity using Hope. God speed great Heroes! and may your legacies inspire many more young men and women to rise up as Heroes themselves
Absolute cinema 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Iwiwjwjwhsbsbshahwbsbsbsbsbsbsbbsabbabsbwbwbwbwbebebebbebebebe
Revelar Spoiler Nice Warhammer story🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑
This novel has been highly enjoyable so far. The Main character is likeable and majority of his actions are understandable. I love the course this story is going I hope to read more.
Like this is my first time writing a review. But I believe this is the best ever warhammer fan fic I’ve ever read. Simply good the storytelling the world building. Just perfect.
Amazing work so far, though a few errors every now and then it doesn't take from the actual story. This truly feels like a piece that should already belong in the Black Library but we all know GW ain't gonna allow for mankind to have assistance in gaining our salvation, so I just have to say. For The Emperor!!!!
This book is so good, and translation is of great quality. The only downside is that sometimes author repeats same information too many times. RAW has 515 chapters at the moment, and I fear the day when I might be driven to go and read MTL... TwT I will vote with my PS for more chapters.
This is peak, I was waiting for a good kingdom-building fic of Warhammer and this is it. Even someone who doesn't know much about warhammer can still read and enjoy this. Thanks to the author for giving us this masterpiece.
My first Warhammer fanfic and man I am glad. This is a great story so far. Good progress, development and characters and really can wait to see how it will develop in the future.
An okay fanfic, but it suffers from comedic elements that do not fit the theme of Warhammer.................................................
Excellent, everything is great. The plot and development. Everything is quite logical and interesting. Although the author is a bit of an idealist and does not fit into the dark genre of Warhammer 40k, I really liked it. The only thing that upsets me is the speed of updating. Considering that the original has more than 500 chapters, and here only one chapter is updated per day
Well translated, Updates are going strong, World background is 40k pretty easy if you are a 40k fan. Character design is good as well. As a translator I think Zaelum is doing a great job, this ticks most of my 40k boxes, only thing i wish the original author woul;d of done is truly capture shear size of things, Most people if you tell them something is 8km long or there are a billion people plus living somewere, wont really be able to imagine it, purely because we don't have a size comparison to compare it to. Also I feel like this novel is more on the light side of the grimdark nature of 40K, it really doesn't catch the true nitty gritty parts of it, it tries but it falls short for me. Over all i recommend this to any 40k fan, just don't expect it to be as grimdark as 40k universe truly is, but it does give it a go ( nothing really on webnovel to compare it to, probably the best I have seen on webnovel other than I don't want to be a tin can, but that is no longer updating)
I don't know anything about this world before this novel except for the YouTuber that I follow they played a few missions and I was attracted by Warhar's big world which is full of stories As for this novel, it is good and I recommend it, although the world will start to expand now when I write this review, and thank you
The total score for the product is 5 (stars). But I'm confused by the fact that I have to give a rating and leave an additional 140-character long review. I think this is my first and last assessment, but there is a chance that I will leave more if I really admire what I read.
Its so cool keep cooking man 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.....,....... Djdisiwiiwsuususususususuaqjqjajajsjsnsnsnsmsmsmsksksksjsjsjzjzzjzjzjficudjwjqi
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Engaging, understandable, lore accurate enough, interesting and decent grammar. Despite having some gray zones lore wise the Warhammer 40k lore is kinda like that, so It's accurate to the 40k spirit.
umu gran historia hasta el momento del cap 136 no decepciona, te va a encantar si la lees umuumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumuumumumuummumumumum
Warhammer fanfics are usually ultra grimdark so it’s nice that this fanfic turns the setting into a more laid-back, enjoyable, kingdom building story. Love it
Me encantó, por favor saquen más capítulos kdkdndndndndjfnfnfnfowmnssmdoofifjrbbfnkdosowenfjuc un mtlfof firmo broma el piden igualkdkdkslslwlandnf kill odndbejc mcflurys dice Eliseop idea eu por si veo tu poder ello la di o los dio Leo top wjeu kkk do yo pflqlqkdudkdbebdkdifenbenffifkfknfnebe
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the story started very intensely, where each chapter made us impatient to read the rest. Then boom, a bunch of points of view, which frankly we don't really care about and conflicts brought at the wrong time. What I mean is we were on the completion of the first achievement of the mc, then a plot and lots of points of view, come to break the rhythm. on the scale of Warhammer where politics is done on a galactic scale, 60 chapters for no notable achievement, it's frustrating. I don't like to skip lots of chapters while reading, so I gave up. Good luck anyway
Sinceramente antes quería comenzar a leer Warhammer pero después de leer este fic me doy cuenta de lo horrible de ese universo ....el fic en si está bueno no eh encontrado muchos errores en la gramática y si bien siento que le falta entrenar al MC espero que siga con su actitud moral me gusta 😌
New translation I decided to pick up! It had been awhile that I haven't picked up a new fanfic, so I decided to pick up a Warhammer one. Have fun and enjoy it!
A good W40K novel that has a bit of a slow start but due to it remains a lot more realistic than other fics that make the MC too overpowered too quickly. From what I can tell the lore is pretty well researched and the feel of the setting is right though thankfully there is a bit more hope in this fic than the true setting which fits the themes of the MC's golden finger/cheat 🤩 Highly recommended to Warhammer 40k fans and for even for casual readers 👍
An amazing Warhammer 40k fanfic that has almost no problems and updates often.
This is my first interaction with the Warhammer 40k universe and I've been thoroughly enjoying reading it. Keep up the good work author 💕 🤗
Очень годное произведение, мало таких последнее время Надеюсь автор не забросит такой интересный сюжет Дерзай, буду с нетерпением ждать пооду
In one universe we had Franklin Valorian, The Liberator and The Great Eagle spreading democracy, freedom and hope to the Milky way and now in this universe we have the savior Eden on his own quest to lead humanity using Hope. God speed great Heroes! and may your legacies inspire many more young men and women to rise up as Heroes themselves
Absolute cinema 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Iwiwjwjwhsbsbshahwbsbsbsbsbsbsbbsabbabsbwbwbwbwbebebebbebebebe
Revelar Spoiler Nice Warhammer story🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑👑
This novel has been highly enjoyable so far. The Main character is likeable and majority of his actions are understandable. I love the course this story is going I hope to read more.
Like this is my first time writing a review. But I believe this is the best ever warhammer fan fic I’ve ever read. Simply good the storytelling the world building. Just perfect.
Amazing work so far, though a few errors every now and then it doesn't take from the actual story. This truly feels like a piece that should already belong in the Black Library but we all know GW ain't gonna allow for mankind to have assistance in gaining our salvation, so I just have to say. For The Emperor!!!!
This book is so good, and translation is of great quality. The only downside is that sometimes author repeats same information too many times. RAW has 515 chapters at the moment, and I fear the day when I might be driven to go and read MTL... TwT I will vote with my PS for more chapters.
This is peak, I was waiting for a good kingdom-building fic of Warhammer and this is it. Even someone who doesn't know much about warhammer can still read and enjoy this. Thanks to the author for giving us this masterpiece.
My first Warhammer fanfic and man I am glad. This is a great story so far. Good progress, development and characters and really can wait to see how it will develop in the future.
An okay fanfic, but it suffers from comedic elements that do not fit the theme of Warhammer.................................................
Excellent, everything is great. The plot and development. Everything is quite logical and interesting. Although the author is a bit of an idealist and does not fit into the dark genre of Warhammer 40k, I really liked it. The only thing that upsets me is the speed of updating. Considering that the original has more than 500 chapters, and here only one chapter is updated per day
Well translated, Updates are going strong, World background is 40k pretty easy if you are a 40k fan. Character design is good as well. As a translator I think Zaelum is doing a great job, this ticks most of my 40k boxes, only thing i wish the original author woul;d of done is truly capture shear size of things, Most people if you tell them something is 8km long or there are a billion people plus living somewere, wont really be able to imagine it, purely because we don't have a size comparison to compare it to. Also I feel like this novel is more on the light side of the grimdark nature of 40K, it really doesn't catch the true nitty gritty parts of it, it tries but it falls short for me. Over all i recommend this to any 40k fan, just don't expect it to be as grimdark as 40k universe truly is, but it does give it a go ( nothing really on webnovel to compare it to, probably the best I have seen on webnovel other than I don't want to be a tin can, but that is no longer updating)
I don't know anything about this world before this novel except for the YouTuber that I follow they played a few missions and I was attracted by Warhar's big world which is full of stories As for this novel, it is good and I recommend it, although the world will start to expand now when I write this review, and thank you
The total score for the product is 5 (stars). But I'm confused by the fact that I have to give a rating and leave an additional 140-character long review. I think this is my first and last assessment, but there is a chance that I will leave more if I really admire what I read.
Its so cool keep cooking man 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.....,....... Djdisiwiiwsuususususususuaqjqjajajsjsnsnsnsmsmsmsksksksjsjsjzjzzjzjzjficudjwjqi
Revelar Spoiler Engaging, understandable, lore accurate enough, interesting and decent grammar. Despite having some gray zones lore wise the Warhammer 40k lore is kinda like that, so It's accurate to the 40k spirit.
umu gran historia hasta el momento del cap 136 no decepciona, te va a encantar si la lees umuumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumuumumumuummumumumum
Warhammer fanfics are usually ultra grimdark so it’s nice that this fanfic turns the setting into a more laid-back, enjoyable, kingdom building story. Love it
Me encantó, por favor saquen más capítulos kdkdndndndndjfnfnfnfowmnssmdoofifjrbbfnkdosowenfjuc un mtlfof firmo broma el piden igualkdkdkslslwlandnf kill odndbejc mcflurys dice Eliseop idea eu por si veo tu poder ello la di o los dio Leo top wjeu kkk do yo pflqlqkdudkdbebdkdifenbenffifkfknfnebe
Revelar Spoiler the story started very intensely, where each chapter made us impatient to read the rest. Then boom, a bunch of points of view, which frankly we don't really care about and conflicts brought at the wrong time. What I mean is we were on the completion of the first achievement of the mc, then a plot and lots of points of view, come to break the rhythm. on the scale of Warhammer where politics is done on a galactic scale, 60 chapters for no notable achievement, it's frustrating. I don't like to skip lots of chapters while reading, so I gave up. Good luck anyway
Sinceramente antes quería comenzar a leer Warhammer pero después de leer este fic me doy cuenta de lo horrible de ese universo ....el fic en si está bueno no eh encontrado muchos errores en la gramática y si bien siento que le falta entrenar al MC espero que siga con su actitud moral me gusta 😌
New translation I decided to pick up! It had been awhile that I haven't picked up a new fanfic, so I decided to pick up a Warhammer one. Have fun and enjoy it!