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I'm not a novel reader but I really like the concept of this novel I've only read a couple chapters and I'm already hooked I hope he gets to control more planets further into the story or create his own solar system
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It's ok I've read mahwa normally I saw his promotion on comick I think it's cool I really like it and I 2anna support until it becomes a mahwa so keep up the good work I'll continue reading and supporting your story
Honestly loving it so Would love if you went into the background of the world. Or universe…
YO wassup everybody Shax here I just wanted to thank everyone for the support in the so far short journey of my novel you guys have been mad supportive and this is smt I see myself doing for a long time, we hit 10k viewers guys📯 thank you all
this novel is top notch unlicked those other novels. Give me mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee
This is a very interesting concept. I was skeptical at first, I can't lie but decent read.
I've been looking for a novel similar to slime and even though there far apart there also similar the world building so far is on point and I like the system jokes keep it up bro u got a repeated viewer in me
I've read your other work it's not bad but if I had to choose I prefer this book it's humor is on point and your Grammer is to notch bravo bro🤝
I’m waiting for more chapters to give my honest review but love the idea so continue
So far I enjoyed the story. Updates aren’t daily but at least every few days. Story progress fast at times and slow at others to accommodate the MC and build the world up as it progresses. Grammar is good especially for this app. Want a little more world building in the sense of the galaxies nearby and other cosmic powers that be but I understand the MC has explored to much yet. Character design is unique or I haven’t read or heard of anything like this yet good luck
I'm not a novel reader but I really like the concept of this novel I've only read a couple chapters and I'm already hooked I hope he gets to control more planets further into the story or create his own solar system
Revelar Spoiler It's ok I've read mahwa normally I saw his promotion on comick I think it's cool I really like it and I 2anna support until it becomes a mahwa so keep up the good work I'll continue reading and supporting your story
Honestly loving it so Would love if you went into the background of the world. Or universe…
YO wassup everybody Shax here I just wanted to thank everyone for the support in the so far short journey of my novel you guys have been mad supportive and this is smt I see myself doing for a long time, we hit 10k viewers guys📯 thank you all
this novel is top notch unlicked those other novels. Give me mmmmmmmmmmoooooooooorrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeee
This is a very interesting concept. I was skeptical at first, I can't lie but decent read.
I've been looking for a novel similar to slime and even though there far apart there also similar the world building so far is on point and I like the system jokes keep it up bro u got a repeated viewer in me
I've read your other work it's not bad but if I had to choose I prefer this book it's humor is on point and your Grammer is to notch bravo bro🤝
I’m waiting for more chapters to give my honest review but love the idea so continue
So far I enjoyed the story. Updates aren’t daily but at least every few days. Story progress fast at times and slow at others to accommodate the MC and build the world up as it progresses. Grammar is good especially for this app. Want a little more world building in the sense of the galaxies nearby and other cosmic powers that be but I understand the MC has explored to much yet. Character design is unique or I haven’t read or heard of anything like this yet good luck