Thanks alot, I'll try my best to meet your expectations, I get better and better the more I write and I hope my future updates won't be a disappoint
He was falling slowly while on his back but he flung himself up or straightened himself, your's works aswell
Carter flung himself and looked to where he heard the noise, this was not the voice of the system, no it was something far different. A figure made out of white light, shaped like a human stood before him, his arms low and wide.
Fantasy · shaxheaven
Hold on let me check the chapter
The words lingered in the minds of the generals, chilling them to their cores. Carter's ominous warning hung in the air like a leaden weight, every syllable ringing with an authority that defied resistance. In the cockpit, no one dared to move—except for the metallic-scaled general. Panic sparked in his eyes, replacing the grin with a flicker of desperation.
Fantasy · shaxheaven
Your close to my idea, but the world of meteor is far greater than a universe and his expansion wononly revolve around him, there will be tons of world building and enticing characters and antagonist in future chapters
True but at the speed carter was going at that wouldn't be possible
He gritted his metaphorical teeth and whispered, "You only have yourselves to blame for this. Don't worry—you won't feel a thing."
Fantasy · shaxheaven
Exactly you can say the same about 99% of topics
"Hey, RUDE! BUT WHAT?! I'M A METEOR!!"
Fantasy · shaxheaven
Might as well be both 😂
Ayyoo😭
Early chapters are a bit short but bare with it for awhile
Thanks for reading up to now🙂↕️
WHAT!? iM REBORN AS A METEOR
Fantasy · shaxheaven