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I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired

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Autor: LazyDiablo

4.16 (63 Avaliações)

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BURN ME ALIVE IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE THIS BOOK...AFTER READING THAT IS

Regressing back in time after sacrificing his life for someone undeserving someone who didn’t even shed a tear after his death just total blank.

The person he begged for love rejected him every single time.

Now, he returns to when he was 18 again.

Looking at her face, he wants to try again, to fall in love with her once more, to want to... but no, he no longer wants to feel that pain again.

Some feelings never change, but you have to leave them behind, right? And one life should be enough to try.

He made a commitment to never love her again. This life is his chance to live for himself.

But who knew he wasn’t the only one regressed?

The ultimate black heart curse is broken... and time reverses.

Avey: “Lucy, can we.” Tears in her eyes.

Lucy: Looking blankly at him.

Avey: “Can’t you at least give me one chance?”

Lucian: Silently looking at her.

what about other people who hurt him too: mother, sister, friend and ofc her

Will he give up on love for his own peace, or will he be too afraid to feel that pain again?

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Additional Tags: Regression, Time Travel, Yandere, CEO Girl, Mafia, Family Conflicts, Mother’s Failure, Revenge, Heartbreak, Sacrifices, Unworthy Love, Beautiful Love Story, Strong Characters, Loki

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LV 4

Fruce

keep going. I only hope he doesn't easily forgive them for what they put him through. And their guilt breaks them down, and causes more damage than he suffered. on a distant thought, maybe it's for the best he doesn't end up with Avey ever. Let her guilt eat her away bit by bit, all her life. hope she isnt regressed to right her wrongs, but to pay for her sins. Same for the rest. They don't deserve a second chance, after all they are just being nice to mc to ease their guilt. i even doubt they actually care, if they did, they would know their faces are the last thing he wanted to see right now

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2mth 42

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LV 11

deva110

The story is amazing keep going. I hope ML moves out of his stupid family and heals. I want him to get his act together too, Avey is a very painful past there is nothing left anymore . In one life , he can give her everything he can give . Now ML can't go back to that anymore there is no trust nothing left . I want him to stop expecting even a little bit and move on he needs to start living. He needs to give himself a chance, and with the reward he received it's easy for him . I hope he leaves them all behind his family, avey and move on . They were never his safe place they resemble pain nothing else. I want ML to figure out all the other characters are also back in time . I don't think ml is stupid enough not to realise this . I want him to understand what they are trying to do ease their guilt nothing else. They nearly broke the ml now they want to be mother or sister or lover he wanted what's the point they killed him already, they broke him. Let him be at peace, maybe find new love or something like first he needs to heal himself. At the end if he feels that ok, now I can move on , truly forgive them, then it's ok. As a reader what I want to know or expect from future story is What is Lucian without all this pain without all these stupid expectations of love from his so called family or so called love for Avey ? who is Lucian? Does only his pain define him ? what more can he be ? Does Lucian in his new life ,want to remain as an broken character who was hurt by everyone he cared and loved and deal with the mess of other characters who now remember everything and are back in time? Deal with their emotions and their quest for forgiveness, easing of their guilt and stuck dealing with these characters and their emotions? what more can Lucian be ? Can or will he be able to find himself?

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2mth 15

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LV 4

radioactive_jig0l0

waste of time, burn yourself author, and if you can't , give me your address and i will personally come and burn you alive in the most miserable way possible[img=recommend]

1mth 9

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LV 3

DaoistNhXpDE

too many clichés and the relationship with the people who hurt him is weird and stupid, like his mother loves him but ignores him, neglects him and even completely forgets about him.

1mth 8

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LV 14

The_Ruler_001

A five star review because it has good story line different from others books and good characters development and of course how well the author has given his emotions to each characters

3mth 8

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LV 4

Pop_boom

Story is very promising I would recommend for people to try it

3mth 7

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LV 14

Ricardo_M_Carrillo

I love the story, even if it feels like it just started I love it, I can’t wait for more, i normally never comment but i really do like this story so far.

3mth 7

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LV 1

Dark0mind

The writer is really a fraud. I read this novel because it has a villain sign, but when I read the novel about when the hero of the novel is poor and everyone urinates on him or something like that, I think he will become evil later. All I find is an effeminate man who doesn't even have balls to defend himself, so what about him being evil?

22d 6

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LV 15

TrippyLVL

Synopsis honestly couldn’t have done a better job at getting me to read this story the is one big mess of emotions it’s hard not to be captivated hope author doesn’t stop this anytime soon and mc gets the good ending he deserves keep it up author!

2mth 6

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LV 14

TheDeathmail

Honestly the MC was mostly at fault himself.... he was way too obsessed.... even his death was stupid..... like sure his loved ones weren't nice to him or anything..... but he had tons of other people that loved him and honestly should have just moved on.....

18d 5

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LV 2

deorikson03

I don't have too much of a problem with the book, the plot and everything is spot on except the main character. The main character that is lucien is poorly written. How can someone involved in the making of one of the most feared gangster groups in the world not be able to control their emotions when they are sent back to being a teenager. Worst of all he claims to have God tier acting skills bestowed by a sysytem but can't hide his emotions well

1mth 4

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LV 3

Gloryhunter

Man, although I haven't read the novel yet, I'm so happy you succeeded, from Luckypisces on discord

11d 3

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LV 10

DiligentHater

Decent writing wasted on an extremely adolescent story, dramatized at an astronomically absurd level (not compatible with the low depth of the plot) and a narcissistic, frightening and sociopathic protagonist. I don't blame anyone who enjoyed this, as long as they're at least 16 or younger.

18d 3

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LV 3

Sagebigi

It is a good novel but the novel does not seem to develop everybody is just stalk on their past lifefe and we not move forward the mc is not even smart you went to the past entird of you to correct you mistakes you just go doing rubish you were a side character on your past life what do you expect.

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20d 3

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LV 4

Slothfulmonk

I'm not speaking bad about your novel but it's copy-paste from manga I read once

22d 3

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LV 4

Poison_Tester

(TLDR) If you like stories that are angsty with emotional turmoil and anguish; You'll like this. I have only so far read up to the 34th chapter; (That's when premium starts) but with I have read so far I'm rather pleased with. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammatical errors and parts of the story where immersion might break due to errors. But overall very good. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Contracted (Meaning stable updates) Story Development: 3/5 As I have only read up to the 34th chapter I don't know much; but with what I've seen with so far I'm pleased with. The beginning of the story was a bit unique and should've been developed a bit more (my opinion) before the plot had actually started. It was still very well set up so kudos to you author. (I'm also a fan of the genre of novels that this novel takes inspiration from so I love what they're doing here.) Character Design: 2/5 (This also might be dependent on your own personal opinion.) As much as I love the Tragedy and Angst; when the protagonist and the cast are having interactions with each other with the Unique Twist that the story has, it makes the theme of hidden burdens and regrets seem forced. Also the other thing that brings it down massively to me is the Flawed nature of the Characters (Logically Flawed) Otherwise the author did a great job at making the MC and cast people with character flaws. Overall I have a love/hate for the MC. Still very enjoyable to read about nonetheless. World Background: 4/5 Pretty good world building. Slowly but surely as you progress through the story you get to understand the world better. Thank you if you read this :) Overall very much so a "hidden gem" to some. Depending on your taste you'll either like it or not. It definitely has parts that might affect you emotionally. There are also many other stories that have a similar setting to this one if you like this story. SPOILER The logical flaw that I disliked is the fact that when everyone returned the the past, how they just somehow don't realize that the other characters might have regressed too. It seems like a major plot hole as these character's actions sometimes directly give away that they've regressed. But I also think its a good way to enhance the emotional turmoil within the story but it also makes it a bit forced. (But as a fan of angst I personally love them not knowing.)

25d 3

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LV 14

Ban_1918

This might be an unpopular opinion but I do hope that Lucian makes up with his family and ends up with Avey. On the outside it looks like a typical regressor story where after a tragic death the protagonist come back to his past and uses his knowledge and experience to live a happy life and make the people responsible for his suffering be the ones on the receiving end this time. It might look like that but in reality this is a horror story where the main characters are nothing but playthings for an evil system. Once you begin questioning the things that could only be explained by magic then you will see the system as nothing as pure evil. The ways it manipulated the cast is truly terrifying but what is even more so is that it even manipulated the fan base to relish is his greatest victims suffering. You might think that Lucian is his greatest victim but the thing is he still has his free will while he took the free will of his mother, sister, and love interest and forced them to do the things that are responsible for his suffering only allowing them to return to their true self’s believing they were the ones responsible for their actions only to be sent back in the past with the false hope that they can make amends with Lucian not knowing he is their original. Understanding the things they were forced to do and being sent to the past makes this story have one of the cruelest villains I have read. The only comparison I have is Makima from chainsaw man due to both the system and her being such master manipulators that they even tricked the fan base. Honestly I don’t think that’s comparison does the system justice due to it keeping the body count low and it being a god like entity that our characters have no chance of physically defeat.

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LV 4

Abyss_Light

I have read up to chapter 109 n here is my honest review — god dam y is the mc being a slave of the system... no matter how you look at it the system is playing with mc and other emotions... you can say that it might be other entities that regressed the other characters but the mc system at least needs to explain the situation of the fate and plot being altered.... in mc first life he suffered due to plot and fate bullshit and not that in his second life where there is no such thing the system didn't explain clearly. if you want us to hate the female characters then don't bring up the plot and fate thing. even if you do don't leave plot Holes or maybe spoiler like you did went mc remove his sister's memory and system clearly said that she will only be affected for one life... by this point I think the system is clearly evil enjoying our mc suffering and show with his girlfriend. also you repeat words and sentences too much but even with all of this I still enjoy the roller coaster, though i enjoy harem but this one is also good... so a question celes or Ava or both or rose or all....