Poison_Tester

(TLDR) If you like stories that are angsty with emotional turmoil and anguish; You'll like this. I have only so far read up to the 34th chapter; (That's when premium starts) but with I have read so far I'm rather pleased with. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammatical errors and parts of the story where immersion might break due to errors. But overall very good. Stability of Updates: 5/5 Contracted (Meaning stable updates) Story Development: 3/5 As I have only read up to the 34th chapter I don't know much; but with what I've seen with so far I'm pleased with. The beginning of the story was a bit unique and should've been developed a bit more (my opinion) before the plot had actually started. It was still very well set up so kudos to you author. (I'm also a fan of the genre of novels that this novel takes inspiration from so I love what they're doing here.) Character Design: 2/5 (This also might be dependent on your own personal opinion.) As much as I love the Tragedy and Angst; when the protagonist and the cast are having interactions with each other with the Unique Twist that the story has, it makes the theme of hidden burdens and regrets seem forced. Also the other thing that brings it down massively to me is the Flawed nature of the Characters (Logically Flawed) Otherwise the author did a great job at making the MC and cast people with character flaws. Overall I have a love/hate for the MC. Still very enjoyable to read about nonetheless. World Background: 4/5 Pretty good world building. Slowly but surely as you progress through the story you get to understand the world better. Thank you if you read this :) Overall very much so a "hidden gem" to some. Depending on your taste you'll either like it or not. It definitely has parts that might affect you emotionally. There are also many other stories that have a similar setting to this one if you like this story. SPOILER The logical flaw that I disliked is the fact that when everyone returned the the past, how they just somehow don't realize that the other characters might have regressed too. It seems like a major plot hole as these character's actions sometimes directly give away that they've regressed. But I also think its a good way to enhance the emotional turmoil within the story but it also makes it a bit forced. (But as a fan of angst I personally love them not knowing.)

Clutch for giving us the og title saved me a bit of time thank you!

(TLDR) Overall a promising fanfic a quick read is definitely deserved. The quality of the writing is 4/5. Readable fs; just slight grammar mistakes here and there but you can get immersed in the book. Stability of the updates seems good for now so 5/5. The Development of the story is quite interesting. It has the same system as "The Lords Coins Aren't Decreasing". The author fits it very well into the story kudos to that. Also the crossover with Naruto and other realms are quite good as well. Dialogue is funny and nice to read. Story progression isn't very slow nor too fast its just right. The story development seems promising 4/5. The main character is also someone quite relatable and acts as a normal person. He's an enjoyable character to read about. 4/5 The world background gets a 5/5. Quite literally the multiverse and you can't get much better then that. Also MHA is the actual setting but the system opens up the possibility of world hopping. But maybe it will be just MHA and even then the realism with the story is decent. 3/5 (Review written at ten chapters published.)