Naruto: The Unwoven Threads of Fate

It's an A.U fanfic with random changes not caused by the Mc. Furthermore the knowledge he does have, he doesn't use. The story is kinda rushed, particularly the academy portion and almost 0 world building is done. The Mc is also extremely unlikable and lazy, not making use of his unique situation at all, aside from unlocking his own chakra. By the time of his team assignment we have a very limited understanding of his abilities or his chakra amount. All in all, the mc is very annoying, and lazy. He enrolled in the academy just to slack off when he doesn't even want to be a Shinobi aside from the power, to use as protection. Realistically, he could train on his own as a civilian if that's all he wanted. The writing itself is fine, and everything is understandable. Even some good humor mixed in, but the Mc himself is simply such a waste I can't read any further.

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