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Harem System: Spending Money On Women For 100% Rebate!

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[Ding!]
[Cashback System Activation Requirement Met!]
[System Binding In Progress...!]
[System Successfully Linked!]
[Spent $1,000. 10x Critical Hit. Earned $10,000. The money has been transferred to account XXX-XXX-XXX]
[Spent at least $1,000 on a beautiful lady. Received 1 lottery ticket. Do you want to use it?]
[YES][NO]
Kyle was a man that has never had any luck in life and he was on the verge of ending it all after being fired from his minimum wage job due to a customer's complaint which turned out to be a lie but due to the customer being an attractive lady, no one believed Kyle.
To make matters worse, he had to pay for the damages that was caused by the customer.
Beautiful people, they had it easy, didn't they?
This was his last step and he knew that he wouldn't see tomorrow as he searched for a river to throw himself in.
He thought his mind finally broke as there was no explanation for the Cyan Screen that popped up as he clicked the [YES] button.
[You have drawn Charm!]
[Charm: There is nothing the user can't charm his way out of or into! The universe has blessed you with charisma!]
"Hahaha! I must have lost my marbles..." Kyle muttered to himself but his phone soon rang out to show that he had a notification.
And to his surprise, he saw $10,000 sitting in his account and his jaw dropped.
"THIS IS FOR REAL!!!"

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User_Name_Triple

This is my first rebate story so go easy on me and also let me know the kind of rebate stories you would like in the future under here. This way I can create more books around rebate stories just for you. I will choose the one with the most likes!

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YaTiah

I am utterly appalled by the recent developments in this novel. After reading up to chapter 81, I couldn't even finish chapter 82 before giving up in sheer disgust. The introduction of NTR and the MC's despicable actions in destroying a happily married couple with a young child is absolutely repulsive. I had initially hoped the author would refrain from turning the MC into a homewrecker, but instead, they chose to have him meticulously manipulate and seduce the married woman into an affair. To make matters worse, the story expects readers to root for this detestable character. This is a clear indication of the author's complete lack of a moral compass. If you're going to include such reprehensible content, at least have the decency to put an NTR tag on your book! I am thoroughly disgusted and have decided to drop this novel immediately. The MC is truly despicable, and such a character deserves nothing less than a fitting demise in any other story.

3mth
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FlammableFire

This story is as silly as Looney Tunes, but without the charisma of Daffy Duck or Bugs Bunny. Author, you really should've set this an alternate Earth or something because the way you write the characters and "Los Angeles" makes it painfully obvious that you aren't from the US... Like, it's so obvious and just plain ridiculous that it's immersion breaking... Or at least I hope you aren't from America because if you are then you really need to go outside and touch some grass instead of observing the world through the news and Reddit.

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BIGINZOXx9

your below average novel a average man who get a system and remain average the character design is trash the female characters are even more of trash I don't even know are people even pass 10 chapter and the mc is kind of stupid.

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3mth
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LotusDragon

So it’s mostly the little things that make this subpar to terrible. California is a state not a city, and it’s really big with lots of differences across it. If you mean the L.A./Hollywood area as a caricature fine, BUT it does not rain there. The whole point of the area is it has no weather. Cops in the U. S. can get away with lots of stuff, but making a person transfer money out of electronic banking, nope. The setting makes the story less believable not more. It’s like saying all Midwest farming is rice paddies. Unless it’s addressed why culture mashing is happening, it’s just makes the story ungrounded.

3mth
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Manhwa_Lightnovels

reviewing after 31 chaps.I really loved this. I'm ok with netori and all but the landlord is good to the mc. so i hope he won't duck the landlady. or you can just make the landlord bad hehehe🤭🤭

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4mth
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Tr0uble_Maker

Man, if you don't want non-privileged readers to stop following your novel, just post an announcement. It's been around a week and with more than 20 chapters since you didn't post a chapter for non-privileged readers

3mth
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Pakistani_Queen

I love it! I want more of it! I have some reservations about certain scenes but after seeing your replies to other comments. I will trust the process and trust you

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Afonso_Aaron

i like the story ......................

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Ahmed_Koroma_1382

I like the concept, and the writing is good. I will look forward to seeing how this novel goes. Keep up the excellent work, and most importantly, write a story you like.

5mth
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Warden_ix

It was good enough in the early chapters but when you got into the locked ones the quality dropped drastically. Spelling and grammatical mistakes, characters acting totally unlike themselves to suit the plot, and major gaping plot holes. It seems like author needs a proofreader of some kind. Thats objective flaws with the quality of the writing. The more personal issues I have is that the story went in a very very odd direction in terms of plot. Almost changed genres and not in a good way, and by the end theres no major character growth he just says “alls well that ends well”. And another thing, I know we write what we know and the author is free to express themselves and who they are in their writing, but Im not a fan of shoving current events and social crap into the books, I want to come her and forget the flaws in our world not have them shoved in my face in heavy handed self congratulatory remarks. I thought it had potential, I was thoroughly disappointed.

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DaoistajWKW7

So much nonsense How can someone threaten a rich man who has half a billion dollars The hero can simply hire a bodyguard How can a worthless person kidnap his girlfriend I felt myself that the hero is not safe enough and the hero did not feel anything?And the hero remained like this with a bank account worths half a billion dollars without even a single bodyguard for him or his friends.

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Zarion116

I need like 500 more chapters no wait more

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Zarion116

I like the flow of this book I’ve unlocked every chapter and want lots more. Still I want more smut in the book please :)

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DaoistO2zSIT

Nice but how will you continue this story?

5mth
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MakiItoh

Just caught up to the latest free chapter. Very nice concept that I haven't seen much of. I quite enjoy the characters/story so far. intrigued to see how the story unfolds.

4mth
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manish_tiwari_3119

I think you writing level is good, the story has potential. What I would say is usually in rebate or novels like this we see MC get rich and then progress in life. Here he got money but he so scared that he didn't even buy house. He could buy a house in the girl name for big rebate. Like he can buy a building and construct a pub, but having other assets is a risk? I hope this points out the issue, I would prefer if you could stop this again and again with government threat of having them on his back.. he drives a good car own a building and bought a Lamborghini for a girl but can't buy assets for himself. This logic is a little half based. Also he got good memory skill so he can study again (like you mention in the start what he was thinking to do) here you can add a college part and younger women. (I have read till ch 71, would keep reading but this stuff pointed above annoys me a little. Please try to change it)

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Shannon_Smith_3458

I never thought I would find myself reading into a novel of this genre. But the storyline is fairly good, characters are interesting, and it's not totally focused on smut once you start reading into it. Character development takes awhile to get to but it's growing.

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Dozkcy
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Your novel is simply brilliant.. i love the calming effect it has on me and the good wordings and steady buildup. Brilliant!!

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Admiral_Alex

Enjoying the book so far and plan to continue reading. My only qualm is the Mrs Jones plotline as I’m not really sure where that’s going. Since she has featured heavily up to now but has a husband and children I’m concerned this is going to change from a harem novel into a share/open-relationship story. Hopefully that’s not the case and I t doesn’t end with her not being exclusive to the MC. But to reiterate I’m enjoying the story for the most part and I’ll continue with it.

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Volume 1

  1. 1
    The Beginning 5 months ago
  2. 2
    Troublesome Customer 5 months ago
  3. 3
    Cashback System Activated! 5 months ago
  4. 4
    System Upgrade! 5 months ago
  5. 5
    JPD New Owner! 5 months ago
  6. 6
    System's Quirks 5 months ago
  7. 7
    Bonus System [Abridged] 5 months ago
  8. 8
    Date Night? 5 months ago
  9. 9
    Getting Ready. 5 months ago
  10. 10
    Millionaire Status! 5 months ago
  11. 11
    Date Night Concludes. 5 months ago
  12. 12
    Mr & Mrs Jones 5 months ago
  13. 13
    Mrs. Jones...? 5 months ago
  14. 14
    Calista, Your Turn. 5 months ago
  15. 15
    Unexpected Call 5 months ago
  16. 16
    Call Me... 5 months ago
  17. 17
    ... Candles? 5 months ago
  18. 18
    Foreplay? 5 months ago
  19. 19
    Calista's Date 4 months ago
  20. 20
    Next Destination... Room! 4 months ago
  21. 21
    Kyle &...! 1/2 [18+] 4 months ago
  22. 22
    Kyle &...! 2/2 [18+] 4 months ago
  23. 23
    A Gift. 4 months ago
  24. 24
    How To Tame A Gold Digger 101 4 months ago
  25. 25
    An Opportunity? 4 months ago
  26. 26
    Hi, I Am Ella 4 months ago
  27. 27
    Points Scored 4 months ago
  28. 28
    Muah! 4 months ago
  29. 29
    The Best Revenge! 4 months ago
  30. 30
    Is She Friendly Or...? 4 months ago
  31. 31
    Well, That Was Awkward. 4 months ago
  32. 32
    Audition. 4 months ago
  33. 33
    Welcome To My Home. 4 months ago
  34. 34
    There, There... 4 months ago
  35. 35
    ... About To Bust! [18+] 4 months ago
  36. 36
    A Fantasy? [18+] 4 months ago
  37. 37
    An Unexpected Friend. 4 months ago
  38. 38
    Zoning Permit? 4 months ago
  39. 39
    Run In. 4 months ago
  40. 40
    Hi, I Am -? 4 months ago
  41. 41
    Is The Past, The Past? 4 months ago
  42. 42
    Down To Business. 4 months ago
  43. 43
    Twist? 4 months ago
  44. 44
    Hello Mike. 4 months ago
  45. 45
    Calista's Grief. 4 months ago
  46. 46
    The Power Of Connection. 4 months ago
  47. 47
    Apology. 4 months ago
  48. 48
    Nightmare 4 months ago
  49. 49
    Parasite 4 months ago
  50. 50
    The White Whale Movie. 4 months ago
  51. 51
    Married Woman Conquest. 4 months ago
  52. 52
    Introducing Collins. 4 months ago
  53. 53
    Ella Is...! 4 months ago
  54. 54
    Hospital. 4 months ago
  55. 55
    Problem Solved. 4 months ago
  56. 56
    Let The Work Begin. 4 months ago
  57. 57
    Cassey Or Cassandra 4 months ago
  58. 58
    Coffee 4 months ago
  59. 59
    C-Calista, You Bitch...! 4 months ago
  60. 60
    Ritual? [+18] 4 months ago
  61. 61
    Damn Tease [18+] 4 months ago
  62. 62
    System Level Up! [18+] 4 months ago
  63. 63
    ... Police? 4 months ago
  64. 64
    An Unexpected Visitor. 4 months ago
  65. 65
    Dude... 4 months ago
  66. 66
    The Past 1/2 4 months ago
  67. 67
    The Past 2/2 4 months ago
  68. 68
    I WIll Fucking Kill You. 4 months ago
  69. 69
    Let's Talk About The Future. 4 months ago
  70. 70
    Bad Timing. 4 months ago
  71. 71
    No Idea. 4 months ago
  72. 72
    Makeover. 4 months ago
  73. 73
    The Owner Of Distort? 4 months ago
  74. 74
    You Have A Deal! 3 months ago
  75. 75
    One Week Later. 3 months ago
  76. 76
    What Do We Have Here? 3 months ago
  77. 77
    Kyle To The Rescue? 3 months ago
  78. 78
    The Cure To An Aching Heart Is...? 3 months ago
  79. 79
    What Am I Doing? 3 months ago
  80. 80
    Those Are Some Huge Milkers. 3 months ago
  81. 81
    Resist Or Submit? [18+] 3 months ago
  82. 82
    A Little Too Late. [18+] 3 months ago
  83. 83
    There Is Nothing. 3 months ago
  84. 84
    An Encounter In The Gym. 3 months ago
  85. 85
    Stranger In The Gym? 3 months ago
  86. 86
    Next Step In The Relationship? 3 months ago
  87. 87
    Kyle & Jane. 3 months ago
  88. 88
    Welcome To My Home, Jane. 3 months ago
  89. 89
    A Day With Jane 1/3 3 months ago
  90. 90
    A Day With Jane 2/3 3 months ago
  91. 91
    A Day With Jane 3/3 3 months ago
  92. 92
    What Are We? 3 months ago
  93. 93
    Why? Because I Can. 3 months ago
  94. 94
    Mike's Secret? 3 months ago
  95. 95
    Dark Temptation. 3 months ago
  96. 96
    New Or Old Feature? 3 months ago
  97. 97
    Uncle Kyle. 3 months ago
  98. 98
    Another Week Later. 3 months ago
  99. 99
    The Grand Opening! 3 months ago
  100. 100
    Like Moth To Flames. 3 months ago
  101. 101
    Playing With Fire. 3 months ago
  102. 102
    Two Birds, One Cock? 3 months ago
  103. 103
    What A Night. 3 months ago
  104. 104
    Ella & Kyle 3 months ago
  105. 105
    Pouting Bird. 3 months ago
  106. 106
    A Gift Or A... 3 months ago
  107. 107
    An Unexpected Text. 3 months ago
  108. 108
    Taboo? 3 months ago
  109. 109
    Ex? 3 months ago
  110. 110
    Taste Buds. 3 months ago
  111. 111
    Danger Alert? 3 months ago
  112. 112
    Kyle Is In...! 3 months ago
  113. 113
    Bang! 3 months ago
  114. 114
    A Fatal Wound! 3 months ago
  115. 115
    Dead Or Alive? Where Is Kyle!? 3 months ago
  116. 116
    He Is... Dead? 3 months ago
  117. 117
    Grim Reaper... Teased. 3 months ago
  118. 118
    Ma... Ma? [Trigger Warning!] 3 months ago
  119. 119
    A New Target? [Trigger Warning!] 3 months ago
  120. 120
    3 More... 3 months ago
  121. 121
    3 Days Later. 3 months ago
  122. 122
    The Man Who Could Not Be Killed. 3 months ago
  123. 123
    A Visitor Or.. 3 months ago
  124. 124
    Bonds. 3 months ago
  125. 125
    Kyle Makes His Move. 3 months ago
  126. 126
    Knock, Knock. Who Is There? 3 months ago
  127. 127
    Mike Snaps. 3 months ago
  128. 128
    A Race Against Time. 3 months ago
  129. 129
    Wait For Me Jane. 3 months ago
  130. 130
    This Is Going To Be A Long Night! 3 months ago
  131. 131
    Jane Is About To Be...! 3 months ago
  132. 132
    Mike Vs Kyle Rematch! 3 months ago
  133. 133
    Kill Shot. 3 months ago
  134. 134
    The Aftermath. 3 months ago
  135. 135
    Has The Worse Ended? 3 months ago
  136. 136
    Police Suspect? 3 months ago
  137. 137
    "I Am Ready." 3 months ago
  138. 138
    The Forbidden Fruit I Shall Eat. [18+] 3 months ago
  139. 139
    Fate Or Treat? [18+] 3 months ago
  140. 140
    Ella Meets Calista 2 months ago
  141. 141
    Priscilla's Hunch. 2 months ago
  142. 142
    Cassandra's Manipulation? 2 months ago
  143. 143
    Kyle Opens Up. 2 months ago
  144. 144
    Are You Home? 2 months ago
  145. 145
    Who Are You, Kyle? 2 months ago
  146. 146
    Jane Or Calista. 2 months ago
  147. 147
    Harem Dilemma? 2 months ago
  148. 148
    Take Your Man To Work Day. 2 months ago
  149. 149
    Kyle Meets Lucas. 2 months ago
  150. 150
    A Breakthrough. 2 months ago
  151. 151
    A Donation. 2 months ago
  152. 152
    An Unexpected Caller. 2 months ago
  153. 153
    Harem Trouble? 2 months ago
  154. 154
    The Force 2 months ago
  155. 155
    Meeting With Priscilla. 2 months ago
  156. 156
    Jones Regret 2 months ago
  157. 157
    Hi, Aiysha. It Is Me Again. 2 months ago
  158. 158
    New Partner. 2 months ago
  159. 159
    Another Piece Of Kyle's Past? 2 months ago
  160. 160
    Calista And Ella 2 months ago
  161. 161
    Calista's Rise To Fame [18+] 2 months ago
  162. 162
    Judge Travis. 2 months ago
  163. 163
    Date With Ella? 2 months ago
  164. 164
    Ella Takes Charge! 2 months ago
  165. 165
    Date Night With Ella Takes An Odd Turn. 2 months ago
  166. 166
    The Black Sheep 2 months ago
  167. 167
    Comfort In Despair. 2 months ago
  168. 168
    Big Reveal. 2 months ago
  169. 169
    Meet With Yuki. 2 months ago
  170. 170
    Gym Time With Aiysha! 2 months ago
  171. 171
    Not Now, Kyle Jnr. 2 months ago
  172. 172
    Marriage And... 2 months ago
  173. 173
    You Best Shut Up! [18+] 2 months ago
  174. 174
    Take It Like A Good Girl [18+] 2 months ago
  175. 175
    Aiysha, Is That You? [18+] 2 months ago
  176. 176
    The Gathering Of The Elite. 1 months ago
  177. 177
    Power Tussle. 1 months ago
  178. 178
    Eleanor II. 1 months ago
  179. 179
    The Girl In The Mask. 1 months ago
  180. 180
    What A Bitch. 1 months ago
  181. 181
    The Dynamic Trio. 1 months ago
  182. 182
    Ghost From The...! 1 months ago
  183. 183
    Past. 1 months ago
  184. 184
    Crashout? 1 months ago
  185. 185
    Tasha. 1 months ago
  186. 186
    Behind That Door. 1 months ago
  187. 187
    Aiysha And Kyle, Awkward. 1 months ago
  188. 188
    Touchdown! 1 months ago

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