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Had high hopes until around ch. 180ish where mc starts to think of himself as a god even though he’s deadass weak as piss and still pathetic… We’ve also only had him use the sign in system twice which is also incredibly fvcking retarded
This novel was great for the first 100 chapters, but after that, it went downhill really fast. It became slow-paced, boring, and just slice-of-life. As for the system, the protagonist only signed in twice, and aside from getting the three different types of Haki off-screen, there’s nothing else. Overall, the novel has become unbearable to read after 100 chapters and is just plain boring.
It's good read but definitely not top tier thing u will find better but if ur lazy go with it.
Meiman: Sign In At The Beginning Of The Game 美漫：开局签到闪闪果实 For those who are looking for the original title (like me, for example), and no, there is no link in the description
This cover give a hints of a guy thing it’s not cool at all I just start reading and still on chapter 25 When I finish reading i will return with review But i like Wanda and Natasha so much good choice Hope in the future ghost spider join
My brain hurts ... First of all thank you for a good quality translation but it's unbearable to read the story itself. I usually try to power through the early chapters even if they are bad but even while turning off my brain I still couldn't keep going on this one. Not mentioning the very first fucking power the MC gets is heavily misinterpreted by the author to the point that it would be better to just give it a different name and it would be better. There is also glaring plot holes in every damn chapter. Anyway, I would NOT recommend this book for anyone unless it is to use as a fire starter.
Até o momento estou gostando muito, mas acho que o Leon tá meio parado de mais, enfim por agora eu terminei, vou esperar por mais capítulos.
I honestly liked the plot, it's incredible, I really like the development of the characters and their personalities, I can't wait for the romance
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Love the this fanfic keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey bro please next sign in lengendary super Saiyan bloodline and shadow monarch
overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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It's a great, mid burning story, something to get easily lost in ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨... I also like the romance in it, it all seems natural, not forced and i can't wait to see where it goes...
Una genial lectura muy entretenida y fluida el autor hizo un buen trabajo ya que tiene una buena traducción y gramática, me pareció bastante interesante por su comienzo sólido y lógico junto con la implementación de técnicas de entrenamiento (Respiración del Sol y derivados, los 3 tipos de Haki y el Rokushiki) para el MC y su familia obteniendo una base corporal y técnica MUY sólida para futuras mejoras genéticas y mágicas quizás para combatir contra oponentes que varíen en la escala de poder en Marvel 😏💪🏻🤙🏻 espero que siga así de buena la historia
Revelar Spoiler
you know i like your novel love it infact but why are u so 😭 slowwww!!!!!!. be fast or ama be forced to threaten you
honestly , I decided to ignore the bad reviews and give this story a try and it's not bad but it also isn't really good , like man how tf is he teaching these civilians haki ? the breathing techniques was already pushing it for me since it was a gift from the system but apparently all these kids got the physique of captain America ? Man the unrealistic scenarios in this story is killing me but it's good as a story to read if you're just bored
A great story for me. till now its pacing and storyline is good. will look forward for more
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🧐🤔😁
The author is too lazy to make titles for the chapters and I'm too lazy to make a meaningful review.
Didn't thought it would be good but it's great 😸👍🏿 Great fanfiction love it May recommed you just give it a chance Just read 10 chapters you will love it
Overall it’s a very interesting book that I’m excited to see how the story will unfold. I recommend you give it a try and if you do you might be pleasantly surprised.
Good story, I'm liking it very much. Keep the updates rolling, and Praise the Author 🙌😆
A great story in my opinion. I've worked hard to present this to you guys and made it readable as much as I can. Also, don't forget to praise the author 'Ear Pick' for creating such a fun read.
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Had high hopes until around ch. 180ish where mc starts to think of himself as a god even though he’s deadass weak as piss and still pathetic… We’ve also only had him use the sign in system twice which is also incredibly fvcking retarded
This novel was great for the first 100 chapters, but after that, it went downhill really fast. It became slow-paced, boring, and just slice-of-life. As for the system, the protagonist only signed in twice, and aside from getting the three different types of Haki off-screen, there’s nothing else. Overall, the novel has become unbearable to read after 100 chapters and is just plain boring.
It's good read but definitely not top tier thing u will find better but if ur lazy go with it.
Meiman: Sign In At The Beginning Of The Game 美漫：开局签到闪闪果实 For those who are looking for the original title (like me, for example), and no, there is no link in the description
This cover give a hints of a guy thing it’s not cool at all I just start reading and still on chapter 25 When I finish reading i will return with review But i like Wanda and Natasha so much good choice Hope in the future ghost spider join
My brain hurts ... First of all thank you for a good quality translation but it's unbearable to read the story itself. I usually try to power through the early chapters even if they are bad but even while turning off my brain I still couldn't keep going on this one. Not mentioning the very first fucking power the MC gets is heavily misinterpreted by the author to the point that it would be better to just give it a different name and it would be better. There is also glaring plot holes in every damn chapter. Anyway, I would NOT recommend this book for anyone unless it is to use as a fire starter.
Até o momento estou gostando muito, mas acho que o Leon tá meio parado de mais, enfim por agora eu terminei, vou esperar por mais capítulos.
I honestly liked the plot, it's incredible, I really like the development of the characters and their personalities, I can't wait for the romance
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
Love the this fanfic keep up the good work[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
hey bro please next sign in lengendary super Saiyan bloodline and shadow monarch
overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's a great, mid burning story, something to get easily lost in ୧(＾ 〰 ＾)୨... I also like the romance in it, it all seems natural, not forced and i can't wait to see where it goes...
Una genial lectura muy entretenida y fluida el autor hizo un buen trabajo ya que tiene una buena traducción y gramática, me pareció bastante interesante por su comienzo sólido y lógico junto con la implementación de técnicas de entrenamiento (Respiración del Sol y derivados, los 3 tipos de Haki y el Rokushiki) para el MC y su familia obteniendo una base corporal y técnica MUY sólida para futuras mejoras genéticas y mágicas quizás para combatir contra oponentes que varíen en la escala de poder en Marvel 😏💪🏻🤙🏻 espero que siga así de buena la historia
Revelar Spoiler you know i like your novel love it infact but why are u so 😭 slowwww!!!!!!. be fast or ama be forced to threaten you
honestly , I decided to ignore the bad reviews and give this story a try and it's not bad but it also isn't really good , like man how tf is he teaching these civilians haki ? the breathing techniques was already pushing it for me since it was a gift from the system but apparently all these kids got the physique of captain America ? Man the unrealistic scenarios in this story is killing me but it's good as a story to read if you're just bored
A great story for me. till now its pacing and storyline is good. will look forward for more
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say. 🙄🧐🤔😁
The author is too lazy to make titles for the chapters and I'm too lazy to make a meaningful review.
Didn't thought it would be good but it's great 😸👍🏿 Great fanfiction love it May recommed you just give it a chance Just read 10 chapters you will love it
Overall it’s a very interesting book that I’m excited to see how the story will unfold. I recommend you give it a try and if you do you might be pleasantly surprised.
Good story, I'm liking it very much. Keep the updates rolling, and Praise the Author 🙌😆
A great story in my opinion. I've worked hard to present this to you guys and made it readable as much as I can. Also, don't forget to praise the author 'Ear Pick' for creating such a fun read.