Life Simulation: Propose Marriage To Kushina Uzumaki at the Beginning

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HardenedWood

This is well translated, but the plot is not really my cup of tea, first of all, a good portion of this story, the protagonist’s beginning in this world is glossed over by starting us off at a point where he is powerful enough to beat Yagura and is already in an relationship with Mei, that takes almost all the stakes away from this story and we hadn’t even seen a simulation at that point. After that, we finally see the first simulation of the story and it’s in Konoha, like the description said, he gets into a relationship with Kushina in the simulation, which is fine, but Minato is weirdly mischaracterised here. He’s overly obsessive, and is in love with Kushina immediately while also being antagonistic to the protagonist, that just feels really out of character for someone who’s always depicted as a chill nice person. The protagonist and Minato both aren’t really likeable to me here and the randomness of a villain points addition doesn’t help. All that together doesn’t make it my cup of tea, but if you’re into a villain protagonist, you’d probably like this story.

LV 2

R0B

It's a good fanfic, but the way I see it, it's more like a draft. It would be great if the story could be a lot more refined. Mc past / past abilities don't make sense, the mc's system was "explained", but tbh normal simulation would be thousand times better for this fanfic (the system contains different kinds of simulation functions that are not even used). Also the author introduces vilain points out of nowhere - this gives me the impression that author can give mc random system functions at any point in time, even though his system is already way beyond op. Also - mc can't be hurt in any way, he is ice logia in a ninja world after all...

LV 4

Bukkas

an interesting work worth reading in your free time

LV 14

Leylin_123

PARA SER UNA TRADUCION, ESTA HACIENDO UNA MUY BUEN TRABAJO, ADEMAS DE QUE TE RESERVAS EL PODER DE EDITAR Y CREAR NUEVO CONTENIDO A PARTIR DE LO QUE TRADUCES. TENGO FULL ESPERANZA DE ESTE FAN FIC.

LV 1

Zero_9758

This book feels like a wet dream of a chinese retard. No hate for the Translator as I am sure he did a lot of work to make this more readable, in it's OG raw translated form, I might have dropped it on Ch 10 or earlier lol

LV 1

AlastorGF

sinceramente ya me aburrió, si me digieras que las corrompe y terminan haciendo las cosas de buena gana, eso seria un desarrollo interesante pero hasta ahora solo vi al MC repetir una y otra ves la misma táctica y me aburrió completamente. El MC es se puede describir como alguien que solo sabe hacer una solo cosa

LV 4

DarkStarryLord

It's Simple and nothing to say but this is

LV 14

Skeithking

Honestly this has a great idea but the person writing this made it a pure power fantasy and his system giving him everything... its basically auto win button, there seemingly no personally growth in anyway both as characters or abilities.

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Tingfei

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LV 1

Zero_9758

The MC is OP enough to take on all villages by himself but wants to make his village stand on its own legs... Something doesn't make sense here. If he can take care of everything, and he indeed has to do the finishing work himself, why let your villagers die in wars? Just do it with your strength since you love your village so much that you spend all your points on them.

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Aadarsh_Aravind

The translator puts a lot of effort into this novel. Some of the things may seem out of the ordinary, but it's mostly identical to the canon except for some inevitable tweaks. This is a good novel and I hope it never gets dropped. Lemon scenes are free in the translator's Patreon!! cannot beat this translator. best man fr

LV 4

Haze_

Good translation

LV 2

Coala_Voador

I don't recommend it, reading 40 chapters and the protagonist is ridiculously broken, in addition to him having the ice fruit and thunder fruit, he also has a mangekyo who steals abilities and controls an area (time, and space) that he chooses for up to 5 minutes

LV 1

AllenCross

What can I say, the translator works well, everything is readable. The speed of translation updates is excellent. Further on the story: honestly, in the beginning it was interesting. But the further you go, the more it just gets monotonous, just empty. The plot at this point has no appeal, everything is clichéd to the point of banality. Regarding the character designs, you could describe them as sparse, cliched. Have no underlying zest. The protagonist showed promise, but his sadistic tendencies after a couple of times cause only irritation. I do not recommend to read this story, here you will not hit anything at the moment, just a typical Chinese fanfic. But under a beer will do.

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Theory_18

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Moha_bz

This story are handsome plz some people know story like that ? Tell me if you know.

LV 4

Alif_Fariza_6046

seriously,i like for this novel, It's amazing,thanks for you author[img=recommend][img=gift][img=recommend][img=gift][img=recommend][img=gift][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it][img=Your move][img=Feeling it]

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Dark19

Tengo que admitirlo, está traducción de Naruto está muy buena. Es de las mejores que eh leido o al menos de las más interesantes. Las simulaciones son espectaculares, pero me gusta más lo malvado que es el MC para conseguir waifus como Mei, Kushina, Yugao o Mikoto jajaja