Rubbish, Bard didn't deserve that title. You just devalued the entire feat and title of the main character...
The title was more fitting for Aldril, who had taken on the brunt of the battle against Smaug. However, Bard had also earned the title for his unwavering resolve in defending the city.
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry
Didn't like the chapter at all, the most tasteless and dragged out chapter in the whole story. It's especially incomprehensible how the main character was late to Aubrey and Scout, while he went straight to them, but at the same time Leska was in time for Zula and Zula was in time for Aubrey and Scout..... Complete nonsense.
Lots, just an inordinate amount of water in the text, repeating the same description/action over and over again.
How to destroy a character's uniqueness in one chapter. Learn while this author is alive.
Este livro foi excluído.
Overall, the story was good, up to a point, namely chapter 45. Most disappointing is that the author succumbed to the influence of the crowd and just shifted the responsibility for some decisions to the readers.
Can't you, the author, think with your own head? Instead of shifting responsibility for the development of the story to the commentators.
Bastard
Note: Your Choices Have Consequences!!!
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TV · Ninja_King_3834
It's very simple, the author gave a choice, one girl or several. In the end, one girl won. As they say, whatever the author chooses, he still obeys the voice of the crowd.
It's a shame, but as they say, whatever the author chooses to do, he still follows the voice of the crowd......
He'd need to find a way to distract his sister, to keep her heart from reaching out to someone who, despite his charm and valor, didn't have feelings for her.
Asoiaf: I Have a Wolverine Template
TV · Ninja_King_3834
How? Why doesn't anyone know? What about Kiri's Shenobi, what about Konoha's Shenobi when they saw his power? Come on author, introduce logic into your plot, don't lose it. The story isn't logical as it is, but to completely kill it, you need to be able to do it.
"Why would I want them to know? What's the point?" Shin didn't care. It might be a claim to fame, but he wasn't interested in fame.
Naruto: Copy System
Anime & Comics · DragonnX