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- Desenvolvimento de Histórias
- Design de Personagens
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i read a few chapters and it is going well till now.. hope it continues in future... author can u make a comment or comment here for simple world background and the mc status in the empire or some basic details
Hey man I loved Rogue Villain but I don't know what you did to this story l. The characters feel emotionless, interaction feels awry and there is no background to any character till 20 chapters man you should give a bit of info about power system about people their family their sob story or whatever that makes the story interesting but there was nothing such in starting 25 chapters there may be later but no one wants to give time to such a dry and stale story. For example the MC's speech felt completely off character as he is shown as a sweet and caring kid in starting but he suddenly flips the switch and Nora's interaction felt completely weird and many more things. It might be good to others it was bad compared to his other works.
i read a few chapters and it is going well till now.. hope it continues in future... author can u make a comment or comment here for simple world background and the mc status in the empire or some basic details
Hey man I loved Rogue Villain but I don't know what you did to this story l. The characters feel emotionless, interaction feels awry and there is no background to any character till 20 chapters man you should give a bit of info about power system about people their family their sob story or whatever that makes the story interesting but there was nothing such in starting 25 chapters there may be later but no one wants to give time to such a dry and stale story. For example the MC's speech felt completely off character as he is shown as a sweet and caring kid in starting but he suddenly flips the switch and Nora's interaction felt completely weird and many more things. It might be good to others it was bad compared to his other works.