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(Reader Up to chapter 124 here!) I'm SO, SO angry right now. To make it clear it's absolutely not the author's fault in fact I'm angry against myself to not feeling able to continue reading this story. First and foremost I want it to be clear: I LOVE this fanfiction! I didn't see "Wednesday" (the serie) yet the author succeeded to make me deeply enjoy his/her work and to make me love his characters. Sadly I don't think I can continue reading it for the simple reason that the story is not a Harem, for many people this point is probably a plus rather than a minus but as a fan of Harem to me at least it's a tiny minus. Obviously seeing how I sing praise to this fanfiction so strongly it's clearly not a sufficent reason to stop reading, unfortunately the author made me LOVE his characters more so the love interests of Luke: Enid and Wednesday. Truthfully despite favoring Harem works I've no problem to read a mono-romance but the fact is that I hyped myself far too much about it. At first when Luke started to date Enid I was unsure about how to feel about it as said earlier I never watched the serie so I could base my opinion of the characters solely on the Trailers and the first episode (that I watched specifically to get a vague idea of the settings without getting spoiled) and I really thought that I would strongly disliked Enid based on it yet chapter after chapter seeing her take a place in the Luke's heart I started to like her more and more all the more since I felt the possibility of Harem relatively early (in a Flashback about the death of Edgard Poe he mentioned his brother's WIVES despite him never getting married at any point of his real life) allowing me to await the arrival of Wednesday with a light heart even when Enid and Luke broke up for her safety I was still very clear that they would "without a doubt" be back together. Unfortunately for me in the 122nd chapter the author announced that the Harem I awaited with so much hope would not come to be morever with help of the so convenient "Ctrl+F" I searched "Enid" up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 137) with sadly no indication of a possible change. Now after so much whining let me reveal why I didn't give this story 5 stars since my previous point is to me far too subjective to be a true minus: the power system. Honestly what I will write here is purely my impression, but I think that in trying to "clarify" his/her power system author put themselves in a corner. Originaly the system of Aura where a color=a powerset is interesting but I personnaly find it far too constraining starting a certain point, for instance the author recently gave Luke a "teleportation-like" technique that, to me at least doesn't make sense given the current colors and the strengh of Luke the technique "Shambles" based on the one of the same name in One Piece is described as a combination of his White Aura (Clairvoyance) and his Blue Aura (Telekinesis) where he create a "Room" with his White and exchange the place of his targets with his Blue and while I could accept teleportation by Telekinesis I think that it would require a "comic-tier" mastery where he would use his power to literaly bend space between two points, capacity from which Luke seems still be far at his current level making the explanation of "Shambles" seems a bit too far-fetched where a power system less "rigid" would have likely allowed a more "beliveable" explanation to Luke's capabilities. Finally as said earlier I truly loved this fanfiction and strongly recommend it to you readers but to my Harem-loving friends don't go in expecting it. P.S: Author I BEG you, should you one day decide to make it a Harem send me a D.M no matter if it's in 5, 10 or 100 chapters I'll gladly be back to it.
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It's a great story my friend, it's the first time I've read a Wednesday fanfic and I loved it, I hope you continue until I finish it. I also hope you don't pay too much attention to the dissatisfaction with the topic Ernid, you have done a great job so far, keep up the good work, I am sorry if some words are not understood, I am using a translator and the basic English I have.
I've enjoyed this novel up untill chap 121, when I first read this it most likely seemed be a SINGLE female lead not a harem novel. I love harem novels but also love Wednesday so decided to read this. I found out later it might be harem so I was even more pumped to read it but now where I stopped reading he's making decisions about which one to take, that disappointed me sadly. so I would like to know if anyone has read further then 121 if the author keep the two girls or just a single female lead ?
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Thank you for writing this fic! I like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10
There are spoilers but that's why I stopped reading the story. I put up with first 50 ch unlikable mc's character and finally the author gave up on writing Harem and sent Enid away. It was hypocritical to hint at Enid and Wednesday's relationship for so long and abandon the girl who was FL throughout the series. I regret reading it. Writing Quality: 3s Stability of Updates: 4s Story Development: 1s for Enid Character Design: 1s World Background: 4s
Whenever the topic is about telekinesis in this novel it's something I really get bugged about, since the power scaling just felt off to me. Other than that this novel is soooo goood. The fight scenes are okay, and the MC doesn't come off as too overpowered but he's not weak either, just that his telekinesis is a bit nerfed. The drama is what I freaking love so muchh, thank you authorrr, you did really well. At the start of the drama some parts were a bit redundant, but how you handled it with Enid and Wednesday was very nice. It felt very realistic and not that farfetched. It reminded me of my past a bit, maybe that was why I found it really well done. I really fell in love with this book coz of how well you handled the romance, superrr natural, especially the later partsHere's my objective rating:Drama 9/10Fight Scenes 8/10World Building 8/10Power Scaling 7/10 Romance 10/10 Wednesday 10/10Overall: 8.5/10Personal Rating: 9/10This is definitely a good book, keep up the good work Author. I hope you continue to improve and do well 😚
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Good fanfic bro!!! Love Wednesday!!! Sad for Enid but mehhh. Oh and the story is just 👌
Wicked! Truly a great read and masterfully well written! I hope to read more and can't wait to see what you come up with next. P.s will fester make a appearance?
To be honest I was reluctant to read this fanfic, I'm not a fan of the Wednesday universe although I saw the series, I think I felt betrayed more than anything by the abrupt ending of your previous work, but I must admit that once again you managed to write something incredible. I like what you do with your OC, you can feel the evolution of the character, like a real teenager changes and grows,I hope you continue writing more works because you have a guaranteed reader here!
I guess its time for me to drop this.. hayss i really like enid x luke and im expecting atleast both enid and Wednesday end up with luke.. anyways good fan fic though
I'm really addicted to this, i literally check it every like 10 minutes to see if there is an update. still waiting btw
I'm not much of a reviewer for works, but this one deserves it, a very well written novel, updated daily, the story hasn't been finished yet (and I hope it lasts even longer, long novels are the best) but for now it deserves a good review
This is officially my fav ff i binge read all the chappiez in two days. If this ff is dropped the author will pay dearly for it.
This fanfic is one of those cases where you shouldn't judge a book by its cover. The author used the universe of the Wednesday series as a basis and created a very interesting narrative, where we learn things that never appear in the series, in addition to the author adding his own touch at the work. Which makes it even more interesting and fun to read. I recommend that you should give this fanfic a chance and read it.
Muy buena.............................. ........................................................................................................ ............................. .................
Excelente historia, buen desarrollo, poderes, romance. Acción. Que más se puede pedir? Bastante interesante desde mí punto de vista, es una historia que causa intriga desde su sinopsis hasta su último capítulo.
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I really enjoy reading your work. It's awesome that you made a pretty good Wednesday fan fic. It really motivates me to keep reading 👌👌👍👍👍🙌👏🙌👏🙌👏
I love it and hope it has a long run and a good ending [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good fanfic, a really nice reading. Oh and I love Wednesday Adams and well all the Adams family [img=recommend]
i wont lie and say this is bad and all, but, the plot is so forced its insane, NONE of it feels nonforceful, every single little thing happens for no reason, and its so funny how much it makes me wanna stop reading, a word of advice for you author, sometimes its better let the story flow instead of adding random changes/random relationships… its a decent fic in the pile of trash webnovel has to offer, But, i think it can be improved on.
Nice fanfic. Theres so few fanfics about the wednesday series and most of them are already dropped. Please dont drop.
I saw this at the top chart of fan fic for a quite long time…i never did want to try bcs it’s Wednesday yknow…it’s been only one season so I can’t think of that much plot…but fuhhh this author has skills guys. I like the personality of mc and how the storyline flows, just a lil advice dont tush anything 👍🏼
The best fanfic I’ve ever read and it’s honestly better than the original series by a long shot. I’m usually not a fan of harems or poly stuff but this is an exception. The mc is perfect and the characters are written better than the Netflix series. Nothing but praise for the novel and the author. Keep up the good work and GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!
Just so yall know after like chapter 120, he stops being with Enid, so don't get your hope's up.In my opinion, he shoud have stayed with Enid or both although it's understandable why he stays with Wednesday. I personally gave it some time to digest him braking up with Enid, and at the time of this post, I am going to continue reading.
Revelar Spoiler (Reader Up to chapter 124 here!) I'm SO, SO angry right now. To make it clear it's absolutely not the author's fault in fact I'm angry against myself to not feeling able to continue reading this story. First and foremost I want it to be clear: I LOVE this fanfiction! I didn't see "Wednesday" (the serie) yet the author succeeded to make me deeply enjoy his/her work and to make me love his characters. Sadly I don't think I can continue reading it for the simple reason that the story is not a Harem, for many people this point is probably a plus rather than a minus but as a fan of Harem to me at least it's a tiny minus. Obviously seeing how I sing praise to this fanfiction so strongly it's clearly not a sufficent reason to stop reading, unfortunately the author made me LOVE his characters more so the love interests of Luke: Enid and Wednesday. Truthfully despite favoring Harem works I've no problem to read a mono-romance but the fact is that I hyped myself far too much about it. At first when Luke started to date Enid I was unsure about how to feel about it as said earlier I never watched the serie so I could base my opinion of the characters solely on the Trailers and the first episode (that I watched specifically to get a vague idea of the settings without getting spoiled) and I really thought that I would strongly disliked Enid based on it yet chapter after chapter seeing her take a place in the Luke's heart I started to like her more and more all the more since I felt the possibility of Harem relatively early (in a Flashback about the death of Edgard Poe he mentioned his brother's WIVES despite him never getting married at any point of his real life) allowing me to await the arrival of Wednesday with a light heart even when Enid and Luke broke up for her safety I was still very clear that they would "without a doubt" be back together. Unfortunately for me in the 122nd chapter the author announced that the Harem I awaited with so much hope would not come to be morever with help of the so convenient "Ctrl+F" I searched "Enid" up to the most recent chapter (Chapter 137) with sadly no indication of a possible change. Now after so much whining let me reveal why I didn't give this story 5 stars since my previous point is to me far too subjective to be a true minus: the power system. Honestly what I will write here is purely my impression, but I think that in trying to "clarify" his/her power system author put themselves in a corner. Originaly the system of Aura where a color=a powerset is interesting but I personnaly find it far too constraining starting a certain point, for instance the author recently gave Luke a "teleportation-like" technique that, to me at least doesn't make sense given the current colors and the strengh of Luke the technique "Shambles" based on the one of the same name in One Piece is described as a combination of his White Aura (Clairvoyance) and his Blue Aura (Telekinesis) where he create a "Room" with his White and exchange the place of his targets with his Blue and while I could accept teleportation by Telekinesis I think that it would require a "comic-tier" mastery where he would use his power to literaly bend space between two points, capacity from which Luke seems still be far at his current level making the explanation of "Shambles" seems a bit too far-fetched where a power system less "rigid" would have likely allowed a more "beliveable" explanation to Luke's capabilities. Finally as said earlier I truly loved this fanfiction and strongly recommend it to you readers but to my Harem-loving friends don't go in expecting it. P.S: Author I BEG you, should you one day decide to make it a Harem send me a D.M no matter if it's in 5, 10 or 100 chapters I'll gladly be back to it.
Revelar Spoiler It's a great story my friend, it's the first time I've read a Wednesday fanfic and I loved it, I hope you continue until I finish it. I also hope you don't pay too much attention to the dissatisfaction with the topic Ernid, you have done a great job so far, keep up the good work, I am sorry if some words are not understood, I am using a translator and the basic English I have.
I've enjoyed this novel up untill chap 121, when I first read this it most likely seemed be a SINGLE female lead not a harem novel. I love harem novels but also love Wednesday so decided to read this. I found out later it might be harem so I was even more pumped to read it but now where I stopped reading he's making decisions about which one to take, that disappointed me sadly. so I would like to know if anyone has read further then 121 if the author keep the two girls or just a single female lead ?
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Um dos melhores que já li em toda minha vida.[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Thank you for writing this fic! I like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pretty good, actually. I admit I didn't have faith in it because of the first few chapters, since I thought it would be an Adams world where the protagonist wouldn't interact with the characters in that world, But in the end I was wrong, before the protagonist met the characters of Wednesday, there was a rather interesting introduction, not at all boring, well written and not long I give this fic a 10/10
There are spoilers but that's why I stopped reading the story. I put up with first 50 ch unlikable mc's character and finally the author gave up on writing Harem and sent Enid away. It was hypocritical to hint at Enid and Wednesday's relationship for so long and abandon the girl who was FL throughout the series. I regret reading it. Writing Quality: 3s Stability of Updates: 4s Story Development: 1s for Enid Character Design: 1s World Background: 4s
Whenever the topic is about telekinesis in this novel it's something I really get bugged about, since the power scaling just felt off to me. Other than that this novel is soooo goood. The fight scenes are okay, and the MC doesn't come off as too overpowered but he's not weak either, just that his telekinesis is a bit nerfed. The drama is what I freaking love so muchh, thank you authorrr, you did really well. At the start of the drama some parts were a bit redundant, but how you handled it with Enid and Wednesday was very nice. It felt very realistic and not that farfetched. It reminded me of my past a bit, maybe that was why I found it really well done. I really fell in love with this book coz of how well you handled the romance, superrr natural, especially the later partsHere's my objective rating:Drama 9/10Fight Scenes 8/10World Building 8/10Power Scaling 7/10 Romance 10/10 Wednesday 10/10Overall: 8.5/10Personal Rating: 9/10This is definitely a good book, keep up the good work Author. I hope you continue to improve and do well 😚
Revelar Spoiler Good fanfic bro!!! Love Wednesday!!! Sad for Enid but mehhh. Oh and the story is just 👌
Wicked! Truly a great read and masterfully well written! I hope to read more and can't wait to see what you come up with next. P.s will fester make a appearance?
To be honest I was reluctant to read this fanfic, I'm not a fan of the Wednesday universe although I saw the series, I think I felt betrayed more than anything by the abrupt ending of your previous work, but I must admit that once again you managed to write something incredible. I like what you do with your OC, you can feel the evolution of the character, like a real teenager changes and grows,I hope you continue writing more works because you have a guaranteed reader here!
I guess its time for me to drop this.. hayss i really like enid x luke and im expecting atleast both enid and Wednesday end up with luke.. anyways good fan fic though
I'm really addicted to this, i literally check it every like 10 minutes to see if there is an update. still waiting btw
I'm not much of a reviewer for works, but this one deserves it, a very well written novel, updated daily, the story hasn't been finished yet (and I hope it lasts even longer, long novels are the best) but for now it deserves a good review
This is officially my fav ff i binge read all the chappiez in two days. If this ff is dropped the author will pay dearly for it.
This fanfic is one of those cases where you shouldn't judge a book by its cover. The author used the universe of the Wednesday series as a basis and created a very interesting narrative, where we learn things that never appear in the series, in addition to the author adding his own touch at the work. Which makes it even more interesting and fun to read. I recommend that you should give this fanfic a chance and read it.
Muy buena.............................. ........................................................................................................ ............................. .................
Excelente historia, buen desarrollo, poderes, romance. Acción. Que más se puede pedir? Bastante interesante desde mí punto de vista, es una historia que causa intriga desde su sinopsis hasta su último capítulo.
Revelar Spoiler I really enjoy reading your work. It's awesome that you made a pretty good Wednesday fan fic. It really motivates me to keep reading 👌👌👍👍👍🙌👏🙌👏🙌👏
I love it and hope it has a long run and a good ending [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Good fanfic, a really nice reading. Oh and I love Wednesday Adams and well all the Adams family [img=recommend]
i wont lie and say this is bad and all, but, the plot is so forced its insane, NONE of it feels nonforceful, every single little thing happens for no reason, and its so funny how much it makes me wanna stop reading, a word of advice for you author, sometimes its better let the story flow instead of adding random changes/random relationships… its a decent fic in the pile of trash webnovel has to offer, But, i think it can be improved on.
Nice fanfic. Theres so few fanfics about the wednesday series and most of them are already dropped. Please dont drop.
I saw this at the top chart of fan fic for a quite long time…i never did want to try bcs it’s Wednesday yknow…it’s been only one season so I can’t think of that much plot…but fuhhh this author has skills guys. I like the personality of mc and how the storyline flows, just a lil advice dont tush anything 👍🏼
The best fanfic I’ve ever read and it’s honestly better than the original series by a long shot. I’m usually not a fan of harems or poly stuff but this is an exception. The mc is perfect and the characters are written better than the Netflix series. Nothing but praise for the novel and the author. Keep up the good work and GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!
Just so yall know after like chapter 120, he stops being with Enid, so don't get your hope's up.In my opinion, he shoud have stayed with Enid or both although it's understandable why he stays with Wednesday. I personally gave it some time to digest him braking up with Enid, and at the time of this post, I am going to continue reading.
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