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Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.
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I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.
It’s a good idea but it definitely isn’t the best translation I’ve seen and the execution of the idea isn’t very good. It is very hard to get through a lot of the chapters.
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Story is good not many authors have the guts to make a story that shows another perspective. writing grammar is excellent for me i did not encounter difficult to understand words. There should be a change in the MCs modus operandi in binding male characters that make others question his preference 😂 . overall good story. Pls. More chapters
if youre a pedo read this reported ....................................... .. . .
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I really like this story so far and I thunk it is pretty cool. just think it is slightly rushed and mabye it is needed to be more inline with the original timeline i.e. we haven't heard any mention on the original protagonist or his crew if you are even close to that timeline yet??? mabye have the story start? Also nothing to do with this story but mabye try the same system as this but in the naruto world as a orphan (using a new bloodlines and/or dojutsu as the excuse for the systems powering him up?)
Revelar Spoiler
hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕
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La traduccion es buena, no hay frases raras o cosas sin sentido, se lee fluido. La historia como tal todavia no se, de momento hasta el capitulo 23 no ha ocurrido demasiado, mas alla de la dominacion de hancok, entonces respecto a la trama esta por verse
good ff .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love this story just like your playing Spider-Man / actor/hollywood story can't wait for chapters for both hopefully you don't stop
Read until the latest chapter and if you can handle trashy MTL then go ahead but everything else is just sad, I know this isn't the authors but bro could have at least tried to make it less MTL-like an example is XEleane they translate fics but they not only fix and change everything that doesn't make sense but I'm pretty sure they also use grammarly. so in short it's a good story and premise but the translation isn't that great, but hey if you can handle MTL's you can handle this but be warned everyone doesn't act like themselves.
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Revelar Spoiler
pretty good can get a little cringe and some time wrong he/she but I'm enjoying it
The book in progress has a promising plot, although its pace is uneven. The story sometimes moves slowly, which can be discouraging at times. However, these slow moments allow for deeper character development and a richer narrative world. With a better balance between action and description, the fanfic could reach its full potential, I believe. The wait for the development can be rewarding if the quality of the prose and the originality of the story are maintained.
I like this story. I am tired of underdog heroes and tired of instantly OP reincarnates as well. I wish there were more evil young master stories like this one.
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Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author
ES UNA BUENA HISTORIA LUJURIOSA PERO BUENA, TE HACE DAR CUENTA DE QUE SI INCLUSO CON LA MORAL DE NUESTRO MUNDO AL OBTENER EL ESTATUS DEL PROTAGONISTA, NOSOTROS ACTUARIMOS DE LA MISMA FORMA QUE EL
Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.
Nope caca 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 💩 [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.
It’s a good idea but it definitely isn’t the best translation I’ve seen and the execution of the idea isn’t very good. It is very hard to get through a lot of the chapters.
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Story is good not many authors have the guts to make a story that shows another perspective. writing grammar is excellent for me i did not encounter difficult to understand words. There should be a change in the MCs modus operandi in binding male characters that make others question his preference 😂 . overall good story. Pls. More chapters
if youre a pedo read this reported ....................................... .. . .
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I really like this story so far and I thunk it is pretty cool. just think it is slightly rushed and mabye it is needed to be more inline with the original timeline i.e. we haven't heard any mention on the original protagonist or his crew if you are even close to that timeline yet??? mabye have the story start? Also nothing to do with this story but mabye try the same system as this but in the naruto world as a orphan (using a new bloodlines and/or dojutsu as the excuse for the systems powering him up?)
Revelar Spoiler hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕
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La traduccion es buena, no hay frases raras o cosas sin sentido, se lee fluido. La historia como tal todavia no se, de momento hasta el capitulo 23 no ha ocurrido demasiado, mas alla de la dominacion de hancok, entonces respecto a la trama esta por verse
good ff .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love this story just like your playing Spider-Man / actor/hollywood story can't wait for chapters for both hopefully you don't stop
Read until the latest chapter and if you can handle trashy MTL then go ahead but everything else is just sad, I know this isn't the authors but bro could have at least tried to make it less MTL-like an example is XEleane they translate fics but they not only fix and change everything that doesn't make sense but I'm pretty sure they also use grammarly. so in short it's a good story and premise but the translation isn't that great, but hey if you can handle MTL's you can handle this but be warned everyone doesn't act like themselves.
goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood
Revelar Spoiler pretty good can get a little cringe and some time wrong he/she but I'm enjoying it
The book in progress has a promising plot, although its pace is uneven. The story sometimes moves slowly, which can be discouraging at times. However, these slow moments allow for deeper character development and a richer narrative world. With a better balance between action and description, the fanfic could reach its full potential, I believe. The wait for the development can be rewarding if the quality of the prose and the originality of the story are maintained.
I like this story. I am tired of underdog heroes and tired of instantly OP reincarnates as well. I wish there were more evil young master stories like this one.
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Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author
ES UNA BUENA HISTORIA LUJURIOSA PERO BUENA, TE HACE DAR CUENTA DE QUE SI INCLUSO CON LA MORAL DE NUESTRO MUNDO AL OBTENER EL ESTATUS DEL PROTAGONISTA, NOSOTROS ACTUARIMOS DE LA MISMA FORMA QUE EL
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